ASYA TS : THE BREAKDOWN OF MR. ASAD AHMED KHAN - 27TH JUNE ' 14. - Page 6

Originally posted by: kabhi_asya

Amazing
No matter how many times we read their initial romance its always as fresh as new...
Awesome explaination of their helplessness... Continue soon

Originally posted by: aYASHIKA

Awesome storyline...
Beautifully written 👏
I loved the small moments b/w asya...
Asad kissed zoya palm and zoya touches his cheek 😳
Asad confessed his feeling to zoya in fear of loosing her...
Asad felt really bad after seeing zoya and zain together...
Loved it..
Update soon..

Originally posted by: TaiLung

wow loved it

i want only happy ending 😃

Originally posted by: jas91

Ok so another Ts😲

Allah jaane tune kitni stories chupa rakhi hain😡

but it was awesome😃

i enjoyed reading it😛

feel Sorry 4 Asya 😭

& hate that Billi wish Asad slap her & insult her 4 being touchy wid him😡😈

specially now when he knows how hurt Zoya is cuz of that💔

Superbly penned Mona meri darling❤️

u must b thinking why i call u mona when i know ur name is chandni😆

cuz I like Mona name cuz Ayaan used 2 call Zoya d same

So Mona is cool get that😉

some awesome dialogues that i loved in this updt⭐️

Asad, who is supposedly an epitome of tehzeeb , didn't seem to have any problem with this behuda aurat clinging to him.🤣

They were miserable than ever before.😲 They died a little everyday. 😲😲Their lovey - dovey mitwa stares had been replaced by awkward ones and angry glares. Their nok-jhok was replaced by fights and serious arguments🥺 on who destroyed who's life and how neither of them are happy with this alliance.😭

This room won't show any sign of me anymore. I'll make sure. Bravo Zoya👏

"What Zayns come ? Why didn't you tell me ? She quickly ran to the washroom. Washed her face and ran out of the room. Hearing Zayn's name uska sara gussa phur ho gaya 🤣

Who the hell was this man? His wife ran to meet him 😈

Leave her you ba*sta*rd.🤣

Khushi ke tears hain. Zoya my baby🤣

"Woh umm.. He's Mr Asad Ahmed Khan. He's the man I'm stayin..." Zoya said introducing Asad.

That was like a tight slap on Asad's face😆😈

Wow part d confession🥳

Asad was pleading like Zoya is his momma & he want some candy he can't resist🤣

He was not ready 2 let her stay in guest room & also reduced Zoya's dedline from few days 2 1 day only.😆 Apne aap hi🤣.Smart Businessman he is😎

aur ye bhi koi puchne wali baat hai ofcaourse i want happy😃 & hot Asya ending.☺️ Get what i mean afterall unki Sr bhi delayed hai.😉😆 Aur yes i want Asad 2 insult Tanveer once😡 & asks 2 stay in her limits as he's married now & only his wife can touch him.

Maine itna bada comnt kiya hai tune chota sa reply kiya na tu tujhe chodungi nahi main😡Samajh gayi na😉😈

Originally posted by: jas91

Ok so another Ts😲

Allah jaane tune kitni stories chupa rakhi hain😡

but it was awesome😃

i enjoyed reading it😛

feel Sorry 4 Asya 😭

& hate that Billi wish Asad slap her & insult her 4 being touchy wid him😡😈

specially now when he knows how hurt Zoya is cuz of that💔

Superbly penned Mona meri darling❤️

u must b thinking why i call u mona when i know ur name is chandni😆

cuz I like Mona name cuz Ayaan used 2 call Zoya d same

So Mona is cool get that😉

some awesome dialogues that i loved in this updt⭐️

Asad, who is supposedly an epitome of tehzeeb , didn't seem to have any problem with this behuda aurat clinging to him.🤣

They were miserable than ever before.😲 They died a little everyday. 😲😲Their lovey - dovey mitwa stares had been replaced by awkward ones and angry glares. Their nok-jhok was replaced by fights and serious arguments🥺 on who destroyed who's life and how neither of them are happy with this alliance.😭

This room won't show any sign of me anymore. I'll make sure. Bravo Zoya👏

"What Zayns come ? Why didn't you tell me ? She quickly ran to the washroom. Washed her face and ran out of the room. Hearing Zayn's name uska sara gussa phur ho gaya 🤣

Who the hell was this man? His wife ran to meet him 😈

Leave her you ba*sta*rd.🤣

Khushi ke tears hain. Zoya my baby🤣

"Woh umm.. He's Mr Asad Ahmed Khan. He's the man I'm stayin..." Zoya said introducing Asad.

That was like a tight slap on Asad's face😆😈

Wow part d confession🥳

Asad was pleading like Zoya is his momma & he want some candy he can't resist🤣

He was not ready 2 let her stay in guest room & also reduced Zoya's dedline from few days 2 1 day only.😆 Apne aap hi🤣.Smart Businessman he is😎

aur ye bhi koi puchne wali baat hai ofcaourse i want happy😃 & hot Asya ending.☺️ Get what i mean afterall unki Sr bhi delayed hai.😉😆 Aur yes i want Asad 2 insult Tanveer once😡 & asks 2 stay in her limits as he's married now & only his wife can touch him.

Maine itna bada comnt kiya hai tune chota sa reply kiya na tu tujhe chodungi nahi main😡Samajh gayi na😉😈

Originally posted by: jas91

Originally posted by: jas91

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet

Awesome!!
Loved it!!
.It was breakdown of
Mr & Mrs .Asad Ahmed Khan!! 😭...
Asad's jealousy & Zoya's outburst
led to his confession!!.
Asad miyan when dat clings to u is dat descent huh??😡...
I want an happy ending ...
Our lives are not dat lovely !
!but atleast the stories we read to escape the realities of life for some time
Shud atleast hav an have an happy ending!!!

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

Happy Ending na dene waalo... janta maaf nahi karegi! 😡

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

He called her baby too. Hahaha.



Okay in all seriousness.


Amazeballs!!!


So heart wrenching! I love it!


Zoya's pain and angst! Damn you're good! Felt every emotion!


And Asad!



Will your other readers kill me if I say I want the original ending you thought for it? I'm refraining myself from the word sad...but I want an end that creates all this emotions that your words are capable of!




Great work!


:)