ASYA TS : THE BREAKDOWN OF MR. ASAD AHMED KHAN - 27TH JUNE ' 14. - Page 5

Originally posted by: Emaani.95

Unreserved post on page 1. 😃

Seekho! Kuch seekho mujhse mona darling. 😛

Kitni jaldi unres kiya maine or tum toh res ker ke bhool hi jati ho. 😒

Originally posted by: ak020203

Lovely TS..

Asad needs that outburst from Zoya.. Zayd timing is perfect..

Good one.. Thanks

Originally posted by: aarzoo50

awesome one...
it was too good..
it was nt only asads but zoyas breakdown too...
abt the ending... do u evn need to ask... ofcourse happy wala end

Originally posted by: Az07

It's very touching story
Zoya was so right fake sagai fake nikkah were is her emotions in all this? Her emotions have been played
I know Asad is scared to commit he think he can only hurt her if he loves her & he want to push her away not knowing that he is again hurting her he is correct he is a fool
Zoya's out burst was needed for bringing sense in Asad
Zayn is so cute Asad should taste his own medicine
I am glad that zoya didn't run in to Asad's arms when he apologise
Trust is very needed in all relationship
Want a happy story

Originally posted by: ican

Even I was confused why tameez and tehzeeb loving aak clinged to tannu
Yes, agreed it was asads insecurity but still I don't think v all the abuses, accusations and comments asad passed on Zoya should be forgiven so easily
I mean it has hurt Zoya to a extent that she left her chirpy nature
She even went to the extent of believing that the marriage was a nightmare
Please don't make her forgive asad easily
PLEASE ZOYA KAY ASOO KI KASAM

BUT YA HAPPY ENDING TOH BANTI HAIhow much has asad cried compared to zoya very less na please

Originally posted by: rajsmi

Kinda cute story...def happy ending!

Originally posted by: potternerd

Mona darling superb update

For the first time someone has written about asad zoya not being happy after their marriage

Beautifully written !!!!

The pain both of them going through

Asad's jealously...his confession. ..

Superb 👏

Originally posted by: sweet4shehzadi

Awesome
Fabulous
Brilliant
Continue it ASAP
Can't wait to read more
Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: nilusoni

superb loved it

i want a happy ending

thanx for pm

plz pm me for next part

continue soon

Originally posted by: p_s05

This was beautiful. ❤️

I love angst confessions, if I may call it that. 😳

After all the heartache, of course a HAPPY ending.

"He went and sat next to her. And held her pulling her to him to hug her. She pushed him away. And hit him on his chest. Asad didn't budge but it hurt him."

"And held Zoya close to him wrapping his arms around her, kissing her hair. Asking her to calm down."

"O-okay... but I'm taking your bag with me. No more arguments.

Please."

Apart from his confession, Asad was particularly charming. ☺️