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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
Now I get the reason why there are so many spammers out here

Every scene was something that I thought was not imaginary...it seemed so real

The picture had come alive before me

Every character was a regular day to day person

I just couldn't help but like them

Every dialogue was the kind which we people generally use while conversing

Yet they had so sheer perfection in them


Anwar-Zeenat-Zoya scene was so sweet and the love between them was so clear

Ayaan-Dilshad-Asad scene was just so like any family where the younger son is fun-loving and elder a serious one

Rashid-Zoya scene was one of my favourites... I have always loved the bond they had in the show...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#12


OMG!

WOW!

AWESOME!

SUPERB!

BRILLIANT!

FANTASTIC!

AMAZING!

FLAWLESS!

SO CUTE!

SHEER PERFECTION!

TOTALLY REALISTIC!


The phone conversation between Rashid and Zoya... I read it 3 times because I just loved it...

I loved they Dilshad and Asad heard the conversation and their reactions

Asad already agreeing to Zoya's words already... aaha

I am loving this story like anything now

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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
The phone conversation finally took place

I have never liked the concept of 'Arrange Marriage' but suddenly I am liking it... The way you have shown it is just so realistic and at the same time like living a dream is just keeping me glued to the story...



Well... The phone conversation was just so simple and so cute at the same time

They were really honest to each other and this was the part I liked the most

Surely they were out of words but things just went in a flow

The picture part was so nice... Zoya's with Haider and Asad's with his ammi... Just wow


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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
Well... it isn't post exams but I just couldn't stop myself from coming here

This story is very addicting and towards the end I always keep wanting more and more and more

Haider and Zoya scene was so cute... I am so glad you took Sanaya...

I loved both the AsYa phone conversations... both their thoughts were so well depicted


24 hrs for the decision... oh no... lets see war happens

Asad and Zoya surely and clearly are liking each other's character but they maybe have a long way to go

But definitely the journey with you on this story will be amazing

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Posted: 11 years ago
#15


OH MY SMURF!

New Thread Already? This one was the quickest ever...

But you totally deserve it



Well... this work of yours is simply special...

This work of yours is very unique and one of the best!

You always manage to keep your readers glued


Ours is relation which started 6 years back and will never end
cause we are sisters forever



LOVE YOU TO THE TIMES OF INFINITY

p.s. scroll for more
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
Kya baat hai... 3 teasers... wow

1) This dialogue is clearly spoken by Zoya... my guess is that Zoya says this to Haider regarding Sanaya

2) Ok... ummm... It's a part of AsYa convo for sure

3) Asad to Zoya is my guess


Lets see what's next... I am really excited 😃


P.S. scroll for more comments (though your stalkers have spoiled my rhythm)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
You got to be kidding me

A lot happened in this update

OMG!

Wow

I was just smiling like an idiot all the time

Asad actually came to meet Zoya

This is the best thing ever

You are one writer who inspires me to write on AsYa

Whenever I read Zehnaseeb I feel like writing on AsYa

You know this is my fav story of yours now

My favourite

I loved the Zoya and Haider bond totally

The end of the chapter was just the best

Love you loads
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
I am loving the dialogues in the story

Beautiful conversation between Asad and Zoya

I loved how they were so comfortable yet a bit reserved with each other

I knew of course that they will agree

The honest words they said to each other indicates that they will make a great couple

I loved this part totally

They both have reservations and also of course are ready to take the new step

They little jokes they cracked were amazing

Asad is already worried about Zoya and Zoya already helping Asad

I loved how Asad said "inka hone wala mangetar"

That was superb

Can't wait for the next one

This is the best story on I-F
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
Now I'm done consolidating my comments! 😛

Now listening "Mitwaaa... Ishq pe zor Nahi!" ❤️

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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
Ahhaan THREAD 3 already??? winking winking rock on!

But it wasn't a big surprise !

Your story deserved this and much more threads ! rock on! rock on!

Zehnaseeb : It's a beautiful fiction since it's on our favorite AsYa and moreover because it's written by a wonderful writer like you ! batting eyelashes

The way two complete strangers comes to know that their family want them to get married to each other. Those phone conversations ( BEST PART OF THIS FICTION happy ) that helped them know each other and take the biggest decision of their life : The decision of marrying each other.

Which reminds me one more reason to love this fiction : THE STORYLINE SEEMS SO REAL ! happy happy

Thanks for presenting us such a beautiful story dee...

I love you so so so much ! love struck kiss kiss

P.S Thanks for the shout out ! 😳 😳


Edited by Aneezarp27 - 11 years ago

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