A Little Thing Called... Love! SS Part1 Page2

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The plot of the SS is slightly different So I just hope You all will accept it that way. I can Only say that I am new here and very very big KVB fan. I Love him.

Regarding SS: Characterization would not be done separately, It will be explained in the parts that will follow.

Last but not the least, Its for You, Radzy! (Radt), I L U, You convinced me!😉


INDEX

Prologue- Page 1
Part 1- Page 2




A Little Thing called... Love!


The magnificent gates opened on their accord by the remote and the shinning black BMW entered the premises of the glass adorned building. The doorman opened the door of the car and a suave man clad in the black suit piece came out. His everything oozed of elegance, the way he walked, the way he was talking business on his blackberry and the way he nodded at his employees. It was like a film, like he was Prince out of some fairytale.

He not being distracted by any comment or gazes of his female employees entered his luxurious glass cabin. Just when he was about to sit in his chair, his throne precisely, a tall but lean man knocked twice and entered the cabin. He was asked to take a seat by a nod in his direction. He sat and waited for the King to end his call.

After a while when he thought the time was right he opened his small mouth, "Sir. The Noida Project is on full swing, but Malhotras are insisting on a meeting to be set, in your presence, and... " he paused to which his boss cocked his eyebrow at him and thus he continued but with distracted confidence, "...Sir, Ashok Khanna would be their too." he finished, and saw no expected outburst or fury came and sighed in relief and then mustering all his strength, asked, "Sir may I leave?"

"Uh..Oh...! Yes. You may Rehaan, but not before bringing the file of our contracts with Khanna." His boss, the mighty Aahil Razaa Ibrahim said in a very quite tone, deprived of any emotion other than indifference.

Rehaan was surprised at his unusual behavior and his quite demeanor that he was scared, and uttered a quick, "Yes Sir", and went out.

"Ashok Khanna" he uttered as if taking the same of his biggest demon, just before purging it away, and gave a swing to his chair watching it go round and round, and then moved to the glass window to glance beyond the present.

*****


Red santro stopped in the parking of the Taj Hotel, and a woman clad in simple cotton suit came out, with the dupatta flaring due to morning breeze. Her lips adorned with genuine smile as she wished a way out through all the co worker and friends who greeted her and waved in her direction.

"Chef Sanam!" a man with a handsome face and beautiful smile showing full pearl set called. He stood before her with a over friendly grin.

"So what did you think? Are you coming?" He asked expectantly.

Sanam looked doubtful and distracted, but she smiled and nodded, "Okay Chef Aamir."

"Its just Aamir for you... Okay then See you at 6." he said excited and went away.

Sanam stood their for a moment too long and the sighed as if tired and turned her heels towards kitchen.

***

"I am telling you Sanam, He is into you... I mean what are you waiting for girl? He is a Head Chef and handsome too and he likes you... I think you should give him a shot." said Chef Sneha excitedly.

"Sneha, Its just a dinner, We are friends and Its nothing more." Sanam exclaimed.

"But..." Sneha continued but was cut off by Sanam.

"You know everything about me... How can you think I can ruin someone's life? And you know that I can never do this... It would be a big failure." Sanam said.

"Sanam, That was past you know. I mean that period is over, you have all your life, are you planning to give away your life like that. You want to waste it because of that stupid flint?" Sneha asked exasperatedly.

Sanam remained quite and when she was about to answer their first order came in and Sneha knew convo ended.

*****

"Life is never hard, Its just sometimes we don't know how to operate it successfully."

It was what he thought, looking out at No where didn't bring any lost memories or conclusions that would help him achieve what he wanted. People who didn't knew would say,'He has everything.' and who knew him would comment, 'He is still not satisfied and that he is greedy and doesn't understand emotions.', he never could make them understand his situation nor they would, even if he tried, they knew how to criticize and that is what they would do, well he didn't wanted them to know too. It was like mutual. He had started to enjoy their criticism.

After a while he heard a soft knock and their re-entered Rehaan with the blue file.

"Sir", he exclaimed confidently, "Here is that file sir."

"Terminate all the dealings with Khanna, Rehaan." Aahil Said simply.

"But Sir..." Rehaan mumbled Shocked.

"...Expose them, ruin them... I don't care how you do it... but I want results. And in 48 hours too. Is it clear?" Aahil said in a cold and threatening voice.

""yess Sir!" Rehaan frantically nodded before leaving the cabin dazed and slightly shivering.

*****


Okay!
That's a small prologue.
I hope you'd like it. Its a SS and It was seven equally short parts.
Please do leave your comments and Please Press the Like Button.
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First of all wlcum in QH Forum and Wow Sahil story Gr8
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Originally posted by: ...Maha-Srk...

First of all wlcum in QH Forum and Wow Sahil story Gr8
awesome prologue
its interesting so eagerly w8ng 4 next plz continue soon n plz pm me.


Thanks a lot...

I hope you all will enjoy the story as it proceeds... *fingers-crossed*
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Awesome start, looking forward to reading your story.
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Priyuuu! 🤗This looks amaaazzingg! I always was sure you are 'talent ki khan' and this is perfectly my type.
I loved the beginning. And the beshtest part...you're not fiddling alot with the characters since you know am such an Aahil deewani.❤️
Your writing style is so cool! You keep it simple, yet marvellous and are so good at creating imagery.😎 UPDATE sooon!☺️ i am gonna trouble you till you don't. I hope everyone else blackmails you into turning it longerrr.😈
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Part 1



It was almost 5 PM when Sneha barged into Sanam's space which made Sanam jump in surprise as she was much involved into her work in hand.

"Aah", cried she cried as her hand touched the hot surface of the tawa.

"Oh! I am extremely sorry!!", Sneha apologized getting panicky.

"Its okay" said Sanam who was still in pain and then turned towards Sneha.

"Chef!!" Sanam turned towards Sneha who was still standing behind her guiltily and asked, "What are you doing here?"

"Sanam, did you forget your Date?" Sneha Chirped

"Sneha... I am working here." she said at she pointed at the dish which was now almost ready. "And well... Its not a DATE but only dinner." Sanam continued with indifference.

"Same difference Sanam." Sneha huffed.

"Sneha... I'll talk about this after work, Please." Sanam sighed.

"Okay. How much more time would you be needing with this?" Sneha asked looking at the dish.

"Just few minutes more", Sanam answered while going back to her vegetables.

Sneha nodded and left.


*****

"Sir... a team of officers has been sent at their Gurgaun site and inspector Salim has promised to help us expose Khanna. We have different evidences to support our conviction." Rehaan said while standing infront of him.

"hmm... Good. And what about the meeting with Malhotra's?" Aahil asked while still looking into his BlackBerry.

"Sir, Its fixed on Thursday this week."Rehaan answered promptly and continued after a small pause, "Sir... we got a call from Saira Madam, She wanted to talk to you... I said you are busy but...now She is waiting for you outside." Rehaan completed in a wavering tone.

Aahil looked at him for fraction of second and then asked him to escort her in there.

Rehaan went out only to come back with a beautiful woman in chocolate colored saari, everything about her oozed elegance and richness.

"Saira" Aahil acknowledged.

"Aahil", Saira nodded and sat gracefully opposite to him.

*****


"Are you finished yet?" Sneha peeked in after half an hour.

"Yeah" Sanam sighed getting up and walking towards the door.

"So what you are going to wear?" Sneha Asked excitedly.

"This...", she pointed down towards her suit.

"Are you out of your mind? How can you even think to wear THIS on your first date!!" Sneha exclaimed horrified.

"Sneha... Its not a DATE. Okay?" Sanam said frustrated.

"Yeah, whatever." Sneha huffed.


*****


After an hour Sanam found herself sitting across the most frustratingly flirtatious guy she had ever seen. She never liked boys like him, well to be straight she never liked anyone. And in her limited experience she had admired her Jiju, Rahat. He was most decent man she had ever seen and she wanted someone like him who would be caring and decent and loving, which she thought was not possible. Her Jiju was unique and her sister was lucky. Rahat was like a big brother to her and he at times would act as her father. They discussed her aspirations and life.

All the while she kept quite while on her *Date*, as he was continuously speaking without giving her chance to answer. Most of his talks were comprised of Flirt. She was getting bored. And just then her phone rang giving her some hope.

"Oh! I am sorry, I thought I kept it on silent mode.", Sanam apologized and then looked for the mobile to turn it off when the number flashed with the name, "Surbhi Calling".

"A moment Chef Aamir", Sanam said as she took the call.


[One sided chat-Sanam]

"Hello. Surbhi... Everything fine?"

"Ohh!"

"No... I was just having Dinner with a colleague."

"No, Its okay."

"Yep... I'll be there."

"What's his name again?"

"Mr Ibrahim. Okay, I'll be their in 15 min."

She cut the call and looked at Aamir apologetically, "I am sorry Chef Aamir, I'll have to go... Its urgent."

"Ohh! I understand. But only on one condition I'll let you leave", Aamir smiled mischievously and said with a cheeky grin plastered on his face, "Only if you'll call me Aamit and not Chef Aamir from now." and grinned wider.

Sanam looked uncomfortably towards him and gave a small smile and nodded, "Bye Che.. err... Aamir"


****


"Aahil... You forgot! How the devil you forgot? " Saira exclaimed annoyingly

"Its Okay Saira... I am also human being.. I could commit mistakes too you know Its not a big deal and I agree that... I was over confident..." he said trying to calm," Where is the Darn Chef?." Aahil hauled

"She is on her way sir." a one of the workers answered him nth time.

"Darn! from how much time she is *on her way*? Saira lets go somewhere else." Aahil said angrily.

"Aahil... she is the best here, wait its hardly 10 min since we are here." Saira tried to make him understand.

"Whatever." Aahil huffed.


*****


Sanam reached the Restaurant and walked towards the lounge, the place looked tensed, she rushed towards the Waiter who was outside the lounge and asked, "Rohit, Where is Mr Ibrahim?"

"Oh! Chef Sanam! Thank god you came, your patient is inside, God he's making ruskus, I mean I have seen customers but he is such a child." said the 19 year old with a tinge of mirth.

Sanam rushed inside her cabin and found a woman sitting on the chair while a man walking to and fro, from left to right and right to left, as if frustrated.

"Mr. Ibrahim?" Sanam called.

Hearing her voice Saira looked up, "Thank God Chef you came we were in so much delima and..." she trailed off and she abruptly stood up and exclaimed absolutely shocked, " OMG!!! Sanam Ahmed Khan!"

Sanam looked shocked too but said meekly, "Saira".

While Aahil turned towards two women and came to halt. And said indifferently, "I am in hurry here. Vaise hi itna late ho gaya hai."

Both women looked towards him, one was surprised and one was amused.

"Mr. Ibrahim, Please." Sanam motioned him to take a seat and also took her self, "So why you called me here?" She continued in business tone, surprising Saira while Aahil remained indifferent.

"We are sorry, you had to rush, hope we didn't disturb something important?" Saira asked amused.

"Nothing much, I just rushed from a DATE." she didn't know why she said it, but she did.

"Ohh! We are extremely sorry in that case."Saira apologized.

"Its okay. So the purpose of you here?" Sanam wanted to come back to business, she didn't wanted to interact with them.

"Oh! We were just arranging an international business party and our most important delegates are visiting, and we would need some really classy cuisines. I know you would be best for the purpose Sanam. I have heard so much about you... and this place, Only if knew that, that Sanam was actually you." she said with a smile.

"Saira, we would do our best. But for this I'd have to talk to our hotel manager first. So I'll get back to you by tomorrow if you don't mind. When is the party by the way?" Sanam asked politely.

"Ohh... its this friday." Saira informed.

"Okay then, We'll contact you tomorrow." Sanam said. Then looked at Aahil who was all the while busy on his blackberry, "Okay then see you... Saira", and then turned on her heels and was about to leave the lounge when a voice halted her steps, "We need the best Miss Ahmed Khan."

"What I do is always best Mr. Ibrahim, otherwise you won't be here." and with that she left the lounge and a surprised man behind.


* * * * *

Okay now.
I'll stop here, Do tell me how you found it.
I have not got much of a response yet... If you are not liking it then I'll stop.
Thanks.😊
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Originally posted by: radt

Priyuuu! 🤗This looks amaaazzingg! I always was sure you are 'talent ki khan' and this is perfectly my type.
I loved the beginning. And the beshtest part...you're not fiddling alot with the characters since you know am such an Aahil deewani.❤️
Your writing style is so cool! You keep it simple, yet marvellous and are so good at creating imagery.😎 UPDATE sooon!☺️ i am gonna trouble you till you don't. I hope everyone else blackmails you into turning it longerrr.😈




HAILA! Your Comments always leave me amazed and full of motivation. I am feeling energized so I am answering your comment with my 1st Update!😊
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Shit! Does Aahil know Sanam already? Was he the past she was talking about?
"We need the best Miss Ahmed Khan."
That's so Aahil! Ha!

"What I do is always best Mr. Ibrahim, otherwise you won't be here." and with that she left the lounge and a surprised man behind."

Okay! Am 100% sure they were a thing. Eeekss! Next kab? Next kab?

I don't like Aamir.

I dont know why buttt... Rahat reminded me more of Anwar (Zoya's Jiju) than Rahat (Haya's One-n-Only). I guess that is okay in a way. Rahat would, one day *fingers crossed* become more or less Anwar-ish.

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