AsYa TS- Rain Rain Go Away!-Part 2-Pg 37- 24/6/14

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#191

Originally posted by: Az07
It's awesome dear
I too love rain
A simple & cute asya story
Want to know what happens next
Is zoya going to join DC?
Loved to see an indepentant zoya
One doubt zoya said a degree in computer science does it mean engineering or simply Bsc
You have quite few stories do you have a corner? If so could you give me a link

Thanks a lot..i am glad that you are liking it... 😛

it is going to be a two-shot story... so i won't be going into that much details whether Zoya will be joining DC or not...

it will just be having their POV's... 😛

you can consider anything that you want to... 😉

have sent you a PM.. 😊

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#192

Originally posted by: farz_parachute
Oh whether the T is two or three or twelve or thirteen or Thirty okay okay I should stop now- I'm in!!!

What an amazing start!!!

And I love this Zoya! Every bit!

Wowww!!!

Very impressive writing!!

It dies feel like I'm listening to the actual Asad and Zoya and their inner voices!

Incredible feeling I get reading this amazing first part to possibly 29 more parts *heee*!!!

Mwahhh!!

Hope you get all the likes!!

Coz this is an awesome start! Waiting to read the next part! So very eagerly!

:)

thank u thank u thank u so much Farz!!

i am just too elated to know that you are in for a three/twelve or even a thirty shot!!! 😃

but i guess this will be a two shot only..

this is one of the best comments that i have ever come across!! 😛

i was not much sure while i had started it... i didn't know whether it will be liked or not...

coz there isn't going to be any dialogues or too much of a direct conversation between Asad and Zoya in this story... 😊

i hope i will not be disappointing you with the next one.. 😛

will try to update tomorrow... 😉

even though i did not get the usual number of likes 😆

Edited by BeYourself - 11 years ago

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#193

Originally posted by: nilusoni
Awesome
thanx for pm
plz pm me for next part

Thank You...i am glad that you liked it..

will surely PM you when i update next 😊

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#194

Originally posted by: Amulya9
awesome update... I loved it
happy 2 cu back soon with ASYA TS
I love this rhyme 😛
school days yaad aying
ok for a change rashid is super hero fr asad 😉 ...
Mr.Perfect wants 2 c gals face
Zoe ki chakkar me stalker bangaya 😛 ..I love it
Zoya is so clever

I was dissatisfied too, as this was the first time when I was not being noticed by any girl. Not that I craved their attention, anyway. But for this girl, I did crave and wished and demanded her attention, mentally...

awww that's y I love him 😳

continue soon

thank you so much Amu!! 😃

ha ha.. i had to...thanks to this rainy season that i came up with this 😉😆

yeah... i love this rhyme too.. 😳

i love any nursery rhymes actually!! 😆

ha ha.. true... otherwise Rashid is always portrayed as a very bad character in every story 😉🤣

yeah.. 😉

i wanted Mr. Perfect to turn Mr. Stalker for a change...😉

oops!! he isn't a stalker.. remember? 😉😆

i love him too.. 😳

and love you too for this lovely comment.. 😛

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: Amulya9
belated happy budday to Divya, ritzy, mahu, ridhi,Anitha.. 😊

Originally posted by: Amulya9
Advance happy budday wishes 2 Messi n bubble(my cliffy queen) 🤗

thanks on their behalf.. 😳🤗

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#196

Originally posted by: p_s05
Love at first sight in the rain! - Charming!

"But there was someone new with her, another kid, whom I knew was not a part of the orphanage. I knew almost all the kids here, and I had never seen him before. He was glued to her like her own baby.. Wait.. Baby?? What if he was her own baby? What if she was married? I had never tried to find that out.. Leave alone that, I did not even know the name of Ms. Stranger. I had to find it out, before the rain hit again and I was left to sulk at my fate."

Intriguing - Look forward to the next chapter.

thank you so much dear...

😛

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#197

Originally posted by: drunkiiebabe
Awesome part Loved it <3

Thank you so much... i am glad that you liked it... 😛

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#198

Originally posted by: Surish

Thank You 😛

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#199

Originally posted by: SimplySmile

Hola!!! (no I do not speak Spanish, only what Dora taught me)

Aloha! (and i don't know Hawaiian language either) 😆

Loving the concept of the story here, it is so simple yet well described and amazing. I am glad to see that Asad isn't the broken sort of man here, he seems normal (not that he wasn't normal in the show, oh who am I kidding?? The guy was half mental, to me that is)

thanks..i am glad that you are loving this Asad who does all the normal activities... 😉😆
Stalking isn't anything normal for him though 😆
he is different here.. 😛

Anyways back to the story, it is interesting to see the great AAK so caught up with a girl. Of course he is the same OCD kind of guy, but he seems very sweet and kind. The poor guy is so caught up with Zoey that he's beginning to stalk a girl, oh sorry NOT stalking a girl that is.

ha ha... right...
Whenever i write something, i always take up the characters from the show..and the rest has nothing to do with the show... like, it's not necessary for Rashid to betray Dilshad always 😉😆
similarly..this Asad is different from that of QH.. yet reserved! but not emotionally challenged exactly.. 😊
but he is also not able to accept that he is actually stalking.. coz that's so unlike him..it' the first time for him 😉😆

Zoya seems like very typical Zoya. She's nice, sweet, traditional yet modern and a new yorkian, if that's even a word.

you can surely make that one! 😆
New Yorkian sounds good! 😉

I hope that Asad gets over his emotional disorder and musters up courage to at least talk to the girl. I mean don't just leave her hanging or otherwise she will really think he is a stalker.

nah..this time, he is going to muster up the courage..

BTW, there is going to be POV's only in this story...
no direct conversation or dialogues will be included.. 😊

Loved the first chapter,
Thank you for making it long, appreciate that, please PM if you can, buddy request has been sent,
Update when you can:)

- Sonny:)

thanks a lot Sonny for this long and lovely comment...
you have mentioned about your expectations from this TS.and also what you have liked in it..
that is really appreciable..😃
it's always a pleasure to have new readers.. 😛