SS Once Upon a Time Thread II CH9/10 Updated!!! Pg 122/127 (11th July)

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Ramlath

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Posted: 11 years ago

#371

Lovely update...
Now asad knows who zoya actually is... 😉
eagerly waiting for next part...
Pls do update soon... 😭

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potternerd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#372

Ha finally The truth is out !!

Brilliantly written 👏

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shreya mehra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#373

I DNT KNW WHR I RES'D MY PLC FR PREVIOUS COMMENT😕

SO M COMMENTING HERE😃

ASAD TRIED TO REMEMBER HER..BT HE WAS SO HELPLESS...

NO WORRIES..OUR AMAZING WRTR AASHNA VL HELP U..😆

I LOVE THE SCENE WHR ASAD TOOK HIS OLD MEMORIES OUT OF BOX...😳

CHAPPI 7

YEEYY..ATLST ASAD KNW ABT ZOYA...N HER SECRET CRUSH..

NN..HER SECRET CRUSH WAS OUR ROCKSTAR MR.ASAD AHMAD KHAN..YEEYY...😳

MANDY BETE ..RITE TYM PE ENTRY LI..😉

MM..SHE REVEALED HALF TRUTH ONLY..MORE IS YET TO COME..😉

INTERVW SECTION WAS BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN..

UPDAT SOON

LOVE U

SHREYA😉

Edited by shreya11mehra - 11 years ago

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#374

Aashna!! i missed out the first spots in the last two updates!! 😭

par koi baat nahi...😳

better late than never 😉

i am not unresing the last comment... but commenting here for both... 😳

i am so happy coz you have updated so soon!!!

i was eager to read more after the bite wala update ☺️

god!! maine to kaun kaunsi jagah soch li thi... ☺️

but i liked the place that he actually had to bite ☺️🤣

chalo, abhi serious ho jaati hoon...😆

Asad... darling...you need some Brainolia!!!

Badam khaya karo bete!! your memory needs to have a good polishing!!

he remembers so many things!!! yet he forgot her face! 😲

but that's not an unusual thing you know...

my mom meets a person on the roads... he/she talks to her... my mom replies back... they keep talking... later, i ask her who that person was?

my mom's answer is: I don't know!! 🤣

she is too bad, no, WORST when it comes to remembering faces!! 😆

so i can understand Asad's case very nicely!! 😆

and then, 😳

the hook moment was too good!! ☺️

and i loved it when Asad took out the box to have a look at his old things!! 😛

talking about Ch 7...

i am glad that Asad has found it out about Zoya's secret crush on him!! i was so eagerly waiting for this day!!

and Mindy is cool yaar!! 😉

but she didn't tell Zoya, her bestie that she had met Asad in the school..??. 😲

the interviews are very nicely written! i don't think i need to mention it everytime that how great a writer you are... 😳😛

this story is so simple...yet so captivating!!!!

and the credit goes to you for making it so good!!! 👍🏼👏

Awesome Work Aashna!!!

Keep it up!! 😳🤗

Edited by BeYourself - 11 years ago

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shreya mehra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#375

Unres'd my comment in a while

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#376

Originally posted by: shreya11mehra
Unres'd my comment in a while

i just did mine!! 😎

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laks_vish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#377

OMG I am falling in love with this story..Thanks Aashna for updating so soon.. Asad talking abt his deep thoughts, Zoya's jealousy are very well described!

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#378

Originally posted by: Divya.S.R
Res for Anks, Mrin, shreya, aniha, yumi, Niya, Teju, Maha and sunny

Thanks a lot Divya 😳🤗

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#379

Originally posted by: --SH7_Sunny--
res for

Divya

Shree

Maha

Ankie

Ritzy

Yumna

Chikoo

Mrinu

Hani

Apple

sorry if i forgot someone

Sunny... is that you?? 🤔

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shreya mehra

@shreya11mehra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#380

Originally posted by: BeYourself

i just did mine!! 😎

Yup..m still tired...mai vh soi nh...pta nh kisne ac bnd kr dia...halat meri khrb...thn subah mai mrng mai cousin mere samne para hua th..usko pillow faik kr jgaya ..ac chala be..us becharo ko b garmi kg rh th...

Usne ac on kr k remote apne pas mai rk lia..k ab koi bnd nh kre...

Tbi hum soe fr 30 mins🥱