5 years later part 5,6,7& epilogue added - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome!! Loved it!!
Do update soon!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is very intriguing,

Wonder who Rehaan is, he doesn't seem so bad,

Update when you can and please PM me :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ch-2

Humieria ends the call and Zoya is worried because she has to go to Bhopal now . She gets up and fells a little dizzy so she sits down . She thinks of consulting the doctor but she does not have time as she has to go Bhopal. As soon as possible .

Lets introduce u to rehan shaik business man handling a company in Bhopal named A&Z construction and is a part time detective . He was recent handed the gudiya factory case . Rehan was 2 years younger than Zoya they grew up togeather as best friends as he was anwar's cousin brother who's partners died he has a younger sister suhana & bro wassem . And since answer and zeenat died 2 years ago all three of them stayed with Zoya till last year when rehan wanted to open a branch of A&Z constructions in Bhopal . Havering been new their . Zoya asked hader if he could just help him out in Bhopal . Hader obliged and introduced him as his cousin . From tha day rehan stays their and handles the business in Bhopal while Zoya handles it in mubahi. A few days ago rehan called Zoya and said her

Rehan - Zoya di I think our business in Bhopal will become a huge success

Zoya - that's great rehan

Rehan - but it will only reach more heights if u Also come here and we both handle the business

Zoya - rehan u know na why I don't come to Bhopal .

Rehan - till when will u run from past Zoya di u have to face it someday

Zoya - I will think about it .

Rehan - thanks

Now I have to go to Bhopal for Abbu anyways so I think I should leave mumbai . Because once I reach Bhopal they won't let me come back to Mumbai Thought Zoya

Mean while in Bhopal

Asad - it has been 5 years since u went Zoya and trust me I miss u every day I wish u come back to me I am really sorry . Just then he felt a tug in his hand he looks down to find zain there

Asad - yes zain

Zain - Abbu u miss ammi na

Asad - yes beta

Zain - I also miss her . When will she come

Asad - Very soon

Zain goes from their and asad gets lost in remembering what happend 5 years back

Flashback

The morning Zoya left humieria called everyone in the hall and says

Humieria - Zoya baji left and told me to read this for u guys
All are shocked especially asad

Humieria - reads zoyas letter

I know u guys are wondering why I left so suddenly without informing u guys . The truth is that what happend yesterday after that I am totally broken . I never expected mr. Khan would even think of giving me divorce because I thought he loved me but I was wrong and a fool to think so because if he loved me he would not have slapped me in front of all of u . I have learnt from my ammi that nikha is not a joke that when u want to do it u do and when u want to break it u break it . I don't have the corrage to disobey my ammi . So I am going with out taking divorce from mr . Khan . Please do not try to find me as I want to move on on my life and I hope that u all can also move on . Do not worry about me I can take care of my self . And one more thing if u r angry on me please don't take it out on humieria. As u all know she is my sister . Hader I wana tell u that its not In everybody's fate to get true love u got it form humieria please respect it . And humieria now I am not their so I want u to take care of ammi , Didi , dost & especially najma cause she will need someone behind from now on . Ammi I am sorry please forgive me and take are of your self

Love
Zoya

After listening to this every one are throwing dead glares at asad . Dilshad comes and slaps him hard . Asad is to shocked to react .

Asad goes to his room on the way he hears someone laughing in a room and goes near it to see who is thier . And what he sees shockes him to the core .

Tenveer - poor asad he doesn't even know that I pushed his father from the balcony . Thought his father is saved but my plan worked . I wanted Zoya out of asad's life and see that only happend . Zoya ha ha this is the punishment of coming in between tenveer and her motive . Haaa...
Asad hears this and goes to his room
Asad - what tenveer did all this and I thought siddique did it . Ya Allah what have I done I have lost Zoya forever I should have trusted her . Now what to do

"If u want to do some thing then give this to the police came a voice . Asad turned and is shocked to find hader & humieria standing thier .

Asad - what

Hader - if u really want to do some thing for Zoya see this viedio and hand it to the police

Asad - shocked seeing the veido . It's the same thing that he just heard tenveer say and it was recorded by humieria & hader

Asad - I will go to the police Now any give it to them .

The next day police comes and arrests tenveer and siddique was bailout . When siddique comes humieria comes and hugs him . Siddique. Glares at asad for doing this to his daughter .

After a few days police calls asad and tells him had tenveer wants to meet him . Asad goes and asks

Asad - what is it

Tenveer - asad I know that u r angry on me But I asked u to come here for some other resion

Asad - what is the reason

Tenveer - asad now I will never be able to come out of here that is why I want u to go to the orphanage and adopt my son zain .

Asad - and what made u think that I will adopt him

Tenveer - because I know u asad . Even though u r angry on me for what I did u will never take it out on my son .

Asad - what if he asks about his mom

Tenveer - tell him that Zoya is his mom

Asad - I will think about it

Asad goes home and tells everyone about it . Dilshad comes and says

Dilshad - what u did with Zoya was wrong asad

Asad - sorry ammi

Dilshad - if Zoya would be here she would have adopted tenveers son asad . And I want u to do the same

Asad - ammi

Dilshad - I know asad what she did with u was wrong but we can't punish zain . Zain will grow up in this house only and he will be raised up as zoyas and ur son .

Asad - ok

Flashback ends

Asad - from that day Zoya zain has been raised up as our son . Please come back to me I will never hurt u again Zoya . Just give me one more chance Zoya . I assure u I will never let u down .

Mien while on the other side of Bhopal a guy is waiting for someone just then someone keeps a hand on his shoulder he turns around and hugs her .

Guy - u came finnialy

Girl - I had to come rehan . But till when will we keep meeting like this . We stay in the same house but then also we have to meet freely

Rehan - I know nikhat and trust me as soon as the right time comes I will tell di that I want to marry u . And don't worry she knows I have a girlfriend

Nikhat - buy the way u never told ur di's name

Rehan - he was about to answer when nikhat's phone rang

Nikhat - ayan Bhaijan hello

Ayan - nikhat were are u

Nikhat - I went to meet a friend Bhaijan

Ayan - ok come fast ammis wainting

Nitkhat - ok and cuts the phone rehan I have to go u also come fast ok and goes

( ayan came back 2 years after Zoya left and was shocked to is hader & humieria married and hopelessly in love )

rehan gets zoyas call

Rehan - ji di

Zoya - I am coming to Bhopal rehan

Rehan - really di that's so nice to know When r u coming di

Zoya - Tommoro

Rehan - really is every one coming di

Zoya - no only me azan sanam & shear are coming wassem and suhana will be coming after sometime

Rehan - good I will inform everyone

Zoya - no rehan u will not inform anyone . And how is ur girlfriend

Rehan - she's fine di

Zoya - ok listen I have to go ok bye

Rehan - bye di

Next day

The police comes to arrest gaffur . Gaffur looked at humieria and humieria nods her head in no .
Just then a voice comes

One minute inspester

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Posted: 11 years ago
#14

Second Part?

He he he

I just asked for it but it was already there

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Galti se I am first

Ress

unres

Loved it

I hate when a man slaps a woman

So zoya left without a divorce

How will Zoya react on seeing Zain and him calling Asad abbu? More MUs

Rehaan and Nikhat

Waiting to see AsYa meet again

Edited by Chahanya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Good story
One correction it's seher not shear
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Posted: 11 years ago
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The story is definitely interesting..Zoya is coming to Bhopal!! Waiting for the next part..Continue soon.. (:
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice story
Asad is really a bas***d
Plz, don't make Zoya forgive him ever
A slap is a slap whether he slapped her while alone or before everyone
How can he slap her however angry he is?
He even threatened her for divorce after using her body
Make Asad regret a lot like Zoya slapping him n not letn him meet their kids
A marriage cannot be a lifetime if ur husband is jerk
Hope Zoya herself asks for divorce so dat Asad can realize
I really hope she don't forgive him soon like always n give him tough time cuz Asad always tuk her granted n raised his hand again on her
Edited by angel_juhi04 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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superb updt
Asad adopted Billi's son
Zoya finally came back in d end
continue soon😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chap - 3

All turn to see Zoya standing at the door . All r happy as well as shocked . Humieria , rehan & hadder come and hug her every one is confused as How rehan knows Zoya . Humieria cries .



Zoya - everything will be ok humieria don't cry

Inspector - yes u r

Zoya - I am gaffur Ahmad siddiques eldest daughter . And being his eldest daughter I have the right to know on what basis are u arresting my father .

Inspecter - Dective rehan has Found proves against him which clearly say that he was involved In the grudiya factory murrder

Zoya - she looked at rehan and signels him to come a side

Rehan - excuse me

Zoya - rehan what is going on here

Rehan - it's true Zoya di look he has him self confesed and shows her the recording ( the one witch rashid records when gaffur tell him ) Zoya is shocked .

Rehan - and di do u know the person he murded was zainab aunty ur mom

Zoya - what

Rehan - yes

Zoya - goes to gaffur a d tells u killed my mom

Gaffur - disent say any thing

Zoya - goes to humieria and says this is the truth humieria
I am sorry

Humieria - u don't have to be sorry aapi I am the one who is supposed to say sorry . Because of my parents u lost ur ammi I feel disgusted thinking about it

Zoya - u don't have to beta it's not ur fault . Inspector take them from here

Razia who was standing next to a police inspector slowly takes the inspectors guy witch did not go unnoticed by Zoya . Razia pointed it at rehan and short but Zoya came and pushed rehan and took the bullet on her shoulder . Every one is shocked the police takes gaffur & rashid ( cauz he put the fire ) raiza with them

Rehan - di what did u do are u mad

Zoya - so what could I do stood and watched u get short . And I have promised Appi that I will take care of u suhana & wassem

Hadder - rehan by the time we reach the hospital it will be very late I have a friend he stays near by I will tell him to come .

Asad. After 5 years he saw her and she was still beautiful but she looked different she looked Like she had suffered a lot , she looked weak . He was seeing her after 5 years and he could not afford to lose her now

Just then sanam & saher come and seeing Zoya shout

Sanam / saher - ammi kaya hua

Zoya - az...an azan kaha hai

Then azan comes in

sanam / saher shout - bhai jan
Azan sees Zoya and run and comes to her

Azan - ammi what happend rehan Chacu do something please

Zoya - azan

Azan - ammi please don't leave us

Zoya - takes sanam s and sahers hand and puts it in azans hand and says take care of ur sisters azan

Azan - ammi

By then the doctor comes and they take her to humieria's room . While sanam & saher are crying continuesly

Azan - sanam / saher look at me stop crying nothing will happen to ammi Mai hoon nai . And u remember ammi promised us that she will not leave us alone . And ammi heats the. Kids who cry . So stop crying here drink some water .

Every one thier is shocked to see azan , sanam & shear calling Zoya ammi . They assumed sanam & shear to be zoyas kids but azan . And then sanam & shear calling him Bhaijan . Asad is shocked to see sanam &. Shear calling Zoya ammi .


Azan - rehan Chachu.

Rehan - yes

Azan - sanam & shear are felling slepy can u show me in which room to go

Rehan - yes come to my room

Azan takes them to rehan's room and pated them to sleep

After sometime the doctor comes and says that

Doc - first of all she was very weak and then the bullet made it worse for her . But don't worrie she will be fine

Rehan - can I meet her

Doc - yes but she is unconciues. Right now .

Rehan - ok

After a few hours azan comes to the living room with sanam & shear and starts finding rehan . Just then sanam & shear look at asad and screm

Sanam & shear - Abbu

Asad - shocked & overvelmed by the fact that Zoya as included him in thire life even after what happend 5 years ago . Asad bends down and both sanam & shear come running In his arms . But what confused asad was the look on azan face when he saw asad's . It was noware a happy one infact it was an angry one .
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Posted: 11 years ago
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gr8 update
hope asya got together
plz pm me for next part
continue soon

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