5 years later part 5,6,7& epilogue added

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I have writen another ss hope u like it

5 years later



A lady in her late 20's is sitting in a room when three kids barges in she looks at them bends down and spreads her arms around them and ask

Lady - how was ur day kids

Kids - it was good ammi

Lady - that's good to know

Just then a maid comes

Maid - Zoya bibi the washed cloths r here

Yes the lady was none other then Zoya .

Zoya - thanku asma . Azan app saman & shear ko laka Bhahar jao beta

Azan - ji ammi ( azan is Zoya 9years old adopted kid & Sanam & shear are her own kids )

As soon as they go Zoya starts rembering who she landed in mumbhi

Flash back starts

from when after rashid is pused from the Belcony (. Tenvire. Just pushed him she dint stab him in this story ) and he lands in front of asad . Asad is shocked and looks up to find gaffur their every one is shocked . Asad sees that their is still a chance of saving rashid and takes him to the hospital were he is eximined and said that he is save but unfortunately paralyzed . Asad phones the police and tells them to arrest gaffur as soon as possible . After an hour the police phones asad
( asad is in the hospital )

Inspecter - mr khan their is a lady here who is not allowing us to do ur job

Asad - wait there I am coming

Inspector - ok

Asad reaches their to find Zoya standing between the police and gaffur . He comes there and asks her to move and let the police do the job

Zoya - no mr khan I won't my Abbu did noting . He is inocent

Asad - he is not inocent u understand that ( angrily)

Zoya - do whatever u want to do mr khan but I will not let them talk my Abbu away from me

Asad -( slaps Zoya so hard that she falls on the ground and gets hurt )

Hader - asad r u mad

Asad - yes I am mad and till the police doesn't talk him away I will not give up

Zoya - oh really mr khan guess what I will also not give up so easly u understand me

Asad - is that so then if u want to talk his side then I will divorce u

Zoya - ( shocked ) u will divorce me mr khan . U will break all ties with me

Asad - yes

Zoya - ( doesn't say anything but goes from thier )

The police takes gaffur away .

Humieria. Is in her room crying

Humieria - till now I hated Zoya because I thought because of her all problems are created in my life but today when I came to know that she is my step sister why am I not felling that she is bad why am I not able to hate her .

Hader - Because u knew that she is not the one causing problems in ur life . But then also blamed her. And today when she stoud up for ur father which u didn't u fell guilty

Humieria - I want to meet Zoya . I have done a huge mistake . I want to appolize to her

Hader - come with me

Zoya is standing in the pool side when hader & humieria come

Hader - chutki

Zoya - ( turning ) yes

Hader - humieria

Humieria - baji

Zoya - ( stocked) humieria

Humieria comes and huged her tight

Humieria - I am sorry

Zoya - u don't have to be humieria it's ok And I am sorry I coudnt save Abbu

Humieria - that's ok baji at least u tried . I didn't even try

Zoya - stop crying and go sleep good night

Humieria & hader went to thier room . While Zoya goes to check on dilshad & najma . She sees them lost in thoughts and goes to them

Zoya - ammi Najma

Dilshad - Zoya beta I am really sorry for what asad did ( seeing the mark on zoyas cheek )

Zoya - ( ignored ) ammi u eat dinner

Dilshad - no

Zoya - what ammi u have to take care of ur self na and najma even u

Najma - sorry

Zoya - u have to be carfull in such conditions wait here I will bring food

Zoya makes them eat and makes them lie on the bed and is about to go when dilshad holds her hand

Zoya - ji

Dilshad - sleep with us

Zoya - ( this is probobly the last time I am slepping here ) ok
She comes in the middle and both dilshad and najma come close to her and she raps her one arm on najma & other on dilshad and sleeps .

Asad comes home late night and finds hader in the living room doing his work . He says

Asad - assalamalakum. Hader

Hader - ( giving a glare at asad )

Asad - why r u looking at me like this

Hader - u r asking me that asad . Do you even realise what u did to Zoya infrount of everyone today .

Asad - listen hader I was worried about my Abbu that time

Hader - u know what asad I used to think that my chutki has got the best husband but today I regred thinking like that . U were worried about Your Abbu that much that u dint even care of Ur wife . U didn't even think once befour saying u will divorce her . Asad do u even know How much she loves & respects u & ur family that even after this much happend she made sure that ur sisters & mom eat their dinner and rest

Humieria - ( comes from the back ) who r u explaining hader . Don't wast ur time explaining him he's not worth it . Come let's go

Asad - shocked and goes to see his mom but the scene he sees their made him fell guilty

He sees his ammi & sister sleping comfortably in zoyas arms . He thinks

Asad - tommoro I will ask zoyas forgiveness and goes to sell in his room

Next morning 5:OO

Zoya wakes up and all the event from past night comes in her mind . She gets up carefully and makes her way out of the room . She slowly enters to her room and finds asad sleping . She takes her cloths , I pad , mobile every thing and goes out of the room . She is about to step out of the house when she fells someone holding her hand her hand she turns around to find humieria crieing . Humieria comes and hugs her

Zoya - humieria

Humieria - please don't leave me and go . I just found out that u r my sister and u r leaving me .

Zoya - humieria do u want me to stay with a man how dosent care about his wife's respect

Humieria - no di but please take me with u

Zoya - no humieria I want u to stay here and take care of ammi , najma , nitkhat & Nuzat they need u right now . Tell hader I am sorry for not informing him and in the morning when everyone asks u were I am u read this letter to them . And don't worry we will stay in contact i promice but u will not tell anyone expect hader about it ok.

Humieria - ok

Flash back ends

She is brought back to reality with a noice from her laptop . She sees it and smiles seeing humieria at the other end but the next moment woried seeing humieria's face which is dull

Zoya - humieria what happend

Humieria - baji it's about Abbu today Police came to ur house and said they came to arrest Abbu . When we asked reason they said its about gudiya factory baji even rehan bhai is on the police side . And the worest part is that Abbu is not saying anything in his defense . He just asked them to give him 1 day . Baji he wants to meet u he asked me to contact u and tell u everything baji .

Zoya - u don't worie I will be coming . And I will speak to rehan about it . [FONT=Arial]
Chapter 2 - page 3

Chapter 3 - page 4
Chapter 4 -page 5
Chapter 5 & 6 - page 6
Chapter 7& epilogue - page 7
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interesting story Urs
but u mentioned some rehan in d end
was that typing error u typed rehan in place of haider or what
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