||~ The Sunshine of My life #5 AsYa FF ~ Prt42A&B P125 THR6 PG 140 - Page 62

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Posted: 11 years ago
Mind-blowing updt Ankita
loved d way u wrote it
Zoya's maturity was beautifully penned
liked that u added Ayaan in this part
Anu is always a darling just love her 2 d bits
After listening Ayaan's story seems Shireen was also a victim
Brilliant job
loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
another beautiful update...
it was awesome...
zoya is always able to pull asad out if darkness...
n bw ayaan n zoya also bonded together wel...
they had a very intense talk ..
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
aahhh wat an update...first of all congooo for ur results!!!!!

update was superawsume
frm truth revelation to assad ahana zoe masti bhara dinner to ayaan zoe convo
sooo beautiful

waiting wat will be their rxn wen they ll come to knw abt gaffur being a man they r searching...zoe n asad rxn will be interestting !!!!!!!


ohkaay lets leave dat
zoe humming asad to sleep was super cute n adorable...!!!!
do cont super soon

lots of lov
shona
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Posted: 11 years ago
the one thg... tht i m very very sure abt is... i wish gaffur were nt zoya's father...
he is nowhr close to b like her... she is an angel... while he is too low to b even a human..

i mean ok.. u hd probs with asad... y drag his little baby into it... his mom into it... n fr once i might overluk wht he did to dilshaad... bt a baby, is absolutely nt to b put thru this...

i wonder wht wud zoya do once she realises tht this is the very person she had been trying soo hard to find... waiting fr fr soo long to connect to...

loved the ayaan zoya part... it was very sweet :) ... ayaan is very mature behind all the immature n kiddish thgs he does :) :)
n i agree with zoya... zoya n ayaan wud mk an gd team to play pranks on asad :) :)
wud love to see them team up against asad, :)
bt i wonder... wud asad b smarter, knwing these two really well... n beat them in their own prank :) ... he might :) :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
AWESOME UPDATE...👏👏

JUST LOVE IT...😃😃

UPDATE NEXT PART SOON...😊😊



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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: tanu3579

the one thg... tht i m very very sure abt is... i wish gaffur were nt zoya's father...

he is nowhr close to b like her... she is an angel... while he is too low to b even a human..

i mean ok.. u hd probs with asad... y drag his little baby into it... his mom into it... n fr once i might overluk wht he did to dilshaad... bt a baby, is absolutely nt to b put thru this...

i wonder wht wud zoya do once she realises tht this is the very person she had been trying soo hard to find... waiting fr fr soo long to connect to...

loved the ayaan zoya part... it was very sweet :) ... ayaan is very mature behind all the immature n kiddish thgs he does :) :)
n i agree with zoya... zoya n ayaan wud mk an gd team to play pranks on asad :) :)
wud love to see them team up against asad, :)
bt i wonder... wud asad b smarter, knwing these two really well... n beat them in their own prank :) ... he might :) :)


Even in QH I never wished for Gaffur to be Zoya's father, because he was spineless and a criminal. A man who let his wife be killed by his second wife, protected that lie and then pretended to be a respected man in the society which is horrible. A criminal is a criminal because he is not right, doesn't have the sense to differentiate between right and wrong. Their mind is fogged by dirt, anger, vengeance, greed etc. A crime can never be justified and that is why it's a crime. Gaffur will have a backdrop to explain why he became what he did, but that won't justify any crime he's committed.
Asad is an enemy for him because he's taken away whatever he had (Asad was right obviously) and he knows only one way to hurt Asad, attack his weakness, his family, his baby, later maybe even Zoya.

If you've observed I haven't given Rashid a chance to redeem, and I won't probably give Gaffur that too. I've just dragged my hatred for both the characters from the show here 😆

I am glad you liked the Ayaan Zoya part 😃 I really loved writing it too.


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Posted: 11 years ago
Such a cute chapter!
My fav part was anu food testing 😆
The way she ate kebeb and approved of it ...How much more cute is she gng to be ??😆
Loved ayan and zoya scene ...He has become very mature !
I always hated gafur but yaha toh hadd hi kar di ...itni chotee babay ko kidnao kiya !!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Ankita.M


Even in QH I never wished for Gaffur to be Zoya's father, because he was spineless and a criminal. A man who let his wife be killed by his second wife, protected that lie and then pretended to be a respected man in the society which is horrible. A criminal is a criminal because he is not right, doesn't have the sense to differentiate between right and wrong. Their mind is fogged by dirt, anger, vengeance, greed etc. A crime can never be justified and that is why it's a crime. Gaffur will have a backdrop to explain why he became what he did, but that won't justify any crime he's committed.
Asad is an enemy for him because he's taken away whatever he had (Asad was right obviously) and he knows only one way to hurt Asad, attack his weakness, his family, his baby, later maybe even Zoya.

If you've observed I haven't given Rashid a chance to redeem, and I won't probably give Gaffur that too. I've just dragged my hatred for both the characters from the show here 😆

I am glad you liked the Ayaan Zoya part 😃 I really loved writing it too.



i agree... if u r wrong.. u r wrong...
u might hv a reason behind y u r wht u r... bt tht doesnt mean its rt...

all it can mean... if atall... is tht ... u r a gd person, n can repent whole-heartedly...

bt, b if rashid or gaffur... both frm the show n here... i doubt these 2 hv the understanding of the magnitude of their misdeeds...

i believe in forgiving a person... bt honestly... how do u forgive someone... who left his own kids, who let someone, anyone.. kill his wife, abondoned his daughter, n then cries over it as if he is a victim... how do u forgive someone... who fr his revenge hurts a little kid...

i think i m going to put this on the request page... the ayaan zoya teasing asad thg :) :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: tanu3579


i agree... if u r wrong.. u r wrong...
u might hv a reason behind y u r wht u r... bt tht doesnt mean its rt...

all it can mean... if atall... is tht ... u r a gd person, n can repent whole-heartedly...

bt, b if rashid or gaffur... both frm the show n here... i doubt these 2 hv the understanding of the magnitude of their misdeeds...

i believe in forgiving a person... bt honestly... how do u forgive someone... who left his own kids, who let someone, anyone.. kill his wife, abondoned his daughter, n then cries over it as if he is a victim... how do u forgive someone... who fr his revenge hurts a little kid...

i think i m going to put this on the request page... the ayaan zoya teasing asad thg :) :)


My main motive to make a parallel track out of Asad's past connected to his father and Zoya's to her father ..is to put that question into the story that you just asked. That when someone whose your blood falters to such an extent how can you forgive at all? Forgiveness has its limitations. I just want to put in writing the feeling QH left me with in this story, the feeling that both AsYa's fathers were criminals, were wrong and their deeds were not redeemable beyond an extent. Because their actions caused a lot of damage and that can never be healed. I've made Gaffur a vicious, greedy and egoistic man here. Who can do anything for wealth and cannot stand anyone take that away from him. Of course everyone becomes a criminal out of an experience and not out of no where. So Gaffur's reasons will be explained but that won't be put here for a justification but because I'd want to explain the man better. As for AsYa, it's just to show how these two characters have such amazing mothers, but such disgusting fathers, and still even with that unbalanced and imperfect aspect in their life they can grow out of it and be the best parents and give their Aahana and their other kids (whenever they are born 😆) what they didn't get.

And oh did you put in your requests there? PLEASE do so, do give me ideas, could be anything happy/sad/romantic/emotional etc. I'll wait for it 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
gaffur siddquie is such a bad man, hope asad deals with properly when he finds out the truth of zoya's family
ayaan is such a nice and mature person
loved ayaan and zoya's bonding😊😊
update soon

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