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aYASHIKA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#941

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

chahiye toh bolo😆

Are neki aur puch puch...jaldi de do...aur thoda bada dena plzz 😳

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anura7281

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Posted: 11 years ago

#942

Originally posted by: aYASHIKA
Tum dogi teaser srash???? 🤔

This is such a beautiful story shras I m in love with it

The innocence of love yet pain is perfectly portrayed here

Somewhere I wanted to slap humi but waited for your story to unfold i know without some drama a story is not enjoyable.

Liked the progression of the story, I was of for a month and hence didnt comment on ur story dear

yeh sab chaps ke liye ek saath comment kar diya

U made haseena good one here? Oh something new

I know this time zoya's task is more himalayan one becoz she gave hope and snatchd it away

I was pained to see Asad condition more becoz his demand was innocent and selfless, he just wanted her to be with him forever, and i was overwhelmed seeing that part in which he tries to stop her by giving her ammis saree which earlier he had scolded her for touching, then flowers, then behaving good with humi, then being a good boy, sleep at time, I was touched by his manofying Zoya to stay back somewhere I cried imagining that scene.

Eagerly waiting for the next update shras

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Gulaabo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#943

TEASER:😃

HEY GUYS!!

THIS IS THE COLLECTIVE TEASER FOR NEXT FEW PARTS...ENJOY!!

WILL UPDATE TOMORROW OR ON SUNDAY...😳

Hearing his voice, two of the ward boys came along with the nurse and tried holding his arms to tie him to the bed but Zoya went to the nurse and asked her to stop them...

"Please! Don't do this! Let him be free..."

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"What?"

"Zoya you can't live here. I mean...um...woh...I mean...you are a relative and we usually don't allow them to stay for so long. You are here because I have allowed you unofficially. But only staff members can stay here not outsiders. So I think you have to trust us and leave him here. I assure you that he'll be fine. You can come and spend time with him in days but at night you've to leave

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She missed the feeling of those silky locks that caressed her fingers when she had ruffled his hairs before. She calmed herself down somehow and laid his head down in her lap. She caressed his head again and again

He was reluctant...but she made gestures of enjoying the cool breeze...clapped on seeing the birds fly high above and curious as he was, Asad joined her after few minutes...

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She wondered if he knew how the babies came into existence and then when she realized that what she was thinking she hit her head lightly to reprimand herself on such thoughts.

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"I pray for him everyday...I am doing everything that I can...when will he speak to me like he used to do before?? I want to hear him say Zoya...I want him to scold me for leaving him alone...I want him to say anything...a..ny..thing..." Zoya was crying by the end. Humi held her closer and let her speak out her miseries...

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I HOPE YOU ALL WILL TRY TO BE MORE LENIENT TO ME AS I HAVE GIVEN YOU A CLUSTER OF TEASERS!!

WAISE BHI TOMATO AND ONIONS ARE TOO EXPENSIVE THESE DAYS🤣

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Alone111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#944

Originally posted by: srashti21

Yup dear😃

Huhhh 😕

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aYASHIKA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#945

Awesome teasers..

Really interesting..
Zoya and her thoughts whether asad knows from where the babies come. . 😳 😆
Waiting for next part...
Jaldi se exam do aur update karo.. 😉

Edited by aYASHIKA - 11 years ago