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anura7281

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Posted: 11 years ago

#951

chalo teaser se ek baat sabit hoti hai

zoya is missing asad and is in tremendous pain

ab humi kya kare, she was the sole reason for this pain, without thinking she dragged zoya away

ab rone se aur dilasa denese kya faydaa bhukatna tho bechari zoya aur asad ko hi hai. she can only be a spectator.

Anyway eargerly waiting for the next chaps

Ek double update milega? puppy face!

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Gulaabo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#952

Originally posted by: anura7281

This is such a beautiful story shras I m in love with it
The innocence of love yet pain is perfectly portrayed here

Somewhere I wanted to slap humi but waited for your story to unfold i know without some drama a story is not enjoyable.

Liked the progression of the story, I was of for a month and hence didnt comment on ur story dear
yeh sab chaps ke liye ek saath comment kar diya

U made haseena good one here? Oh something new

I know this time zoya's task is more himalayan one becoz she gave hope and snatchd it away
I was pained to see Asad condition more becoz his demand was innocent and selfless, he just wanted her to be with him forever, and i was overwhelmed seeing that part in which he tries to stop her by giving her ammis saree which earlier he had scolded her for touching, then flowers, then behaving good with humi, then being a good boy, sleep at time, I was touched by his manofying Zoya to stay back somewhere I cried imagining that scene.

Eagerly waiting for the next update shras

Thank u di

I knew it that u r on a vacation...i was waiting for ur comment😊

Just like u...others also wanna slap humi...

I am glad that u recognised that sari scene...i planned it with my very dear friend and due to the separation in that update...very less people noticed that!!!

U too cried??!!😲

Well...next update is on the way...

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Gulaabo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#953

Originally posted by: aksasya
Interesting baby...continue soon...

Thanks😊

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Gulaabo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#954

Originally posted by: aksasya
here bhi me first...🥳

😆

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Gulaabo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#955

Originally posted by: gowtu

Huhhh 😕

Kya hua😆

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Gulaabo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#956

Originally posted by: aYASHIKA
Awesome teasers..

Really interesting..
Zoya and her thoughts whether asad knows from where the babies come. . 😳 😆
Waiting for next part...
Jaldi se exam do aur update karo.. 😉

Thank u😳

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Gulaabo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#957

Originally posted by: Niya_789
Bohut hi dardnak teaser hai😭
I am sure they have tied Asad with those chains😭
Amd that doc isnt allowing Zoya to stay with him 😭
Zoya trying to make Asad sleep 😳zoya humi cono 😭
Chalo now update jaldi 😳

Baby...kuch dardanak nai hai...u r thinking in a single direction...

Just wait for the update😃