.....Poetry game.....

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Diya Khan

@Crazy-Lover

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Posted: 11 years ago

SO lets play a little game related to poetry.

Okay so this is basically an individual game...but you can play it as many times as you like. But only if you keep some time in between.

How to play?

Write a poetry down it can be in hindi, urdu and english.

It can be any type of poetry.

I am also going to participate in this game.

let me start.

Aasma mein kaali ghata chai hai,

Aaj fir principal se mar khai hai,

Sab kehte hai sudhar ja,

Kya kare aaj madam fir sheela ban ke aayi hai

Ps this game is only to increase the activities of the forum. I hope u will play this game.

Edited by kabhi-forever - 11 years ago

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Diya Khan

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Posted: 11 years ago

Nobody is playing this game.

I am so sad I think nobody liked this game thats why nobody is playing😭

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sanah12

@sanah12

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Posted: 11 years ago

Wow nice topic!!
Here goes my shayri:
Ishq Ke Khayaal Bohot Hein;
Ishq Ke Charche Bohot Hein;
Sochte Hein Hum Bhi Kar Lein Ishq;
Par Sunte Hein Ishq Mein Kharche Bohot Hein!

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Diya Khan

@Crazy-Lover

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Posted: 11 years ago

Thanks sanah.Good shayari.

Here goes mine.

Phone mat kiya karo Dear,

Mom hoti hai near,

Papa se lagta hai fear

Baat bhi hoti nahi clear,

Isliye SMS karo Dear,

Witout fear & very clear

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713_Sparkles

@713_Sparkles

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Posted: 11 years ago

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/4059506/salvage-a-poem

Couldn't post it here because of some bizarre reasons, there's the link :)

Great post for a poetry lover like me! Tell me how my poem was :)

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Diya Khan

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Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: 713_Sparkles
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/4059506/salvage-a-poem
Couldn't post it here because of some bizarre reasons, there's the link :)
Great post for a poetry lover like me! Tell me how my poem was :)

I really really loved the poem.

You write amazingly good.

From now onwards I am fan of your writing.

Its really amazing.

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sanah12

@sanah12

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kabhi-forever
Thanks sanah.Good shayari.
Here goes mine.

Phone mat kiya karo Dear,
Mom hoti hai near,
Papa se lagta hai fear
Baat bhi hoti nahi clear,
Isliye SMS karo Dear,
Witout fear & very clear

Welcome😊 wow that's great shayri!

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Mylove_SJ

@Mylove_SJ

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Posted: 11 years ago

tum hame bhool jao hame koi gham nahi

par jis din hum aap ko bhool gaye us din hum nahi 😉

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sanah12

@sanah12

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

Ulfat ka yeh dastoor hota hai
Jisse chaho wahi humse dur hota hai
Dil toot kar bikharta hai is kadar jaise
Kanch ka khilona girke choor choor hota hai!!!

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Mylove_SJ

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: sanah12
Ulfat ka yeh dastoor hota hai
Jisse chaho wahi humse dur hota hai
Dil toot kar bikharta hai is kadar jaise
Kanch ka khilona girke choor choor hota hai!!!

wah kya baat hai 😊

Muskan Ban Jata Hai Koi,
Dil Ki Dhadkan Ban Jata Hai Koi,
Kaise Jiye Ek Pal Bhi Un Ke Bin,
Jab Zindgi Jeene Ki Wajah Ban Jata Hai Koi