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Posted: 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Omg third time lucky today 😆

Superb update bubble 👏

Loved how asad guessed where zoya would be 😉

I love how asad ALWAYS knows what's going on with zoya..her expressions..her feelings...lies everything 😳

I hope they become good friends soon pretty soon 😳

Enjoy your vacations 😊 Btw what place are you going to ???

We will definitely wait 😊

Don't feel bad muaaah :*

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Posted: 11 years ago

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First of all... sorry for being so late to unres!!!

but today, i am very much determined that i will unres all my comments here in your story... 😳

so yeah... here it goes...my comment for Ch 5 😉😳

i always like the flashback scenes Bubba...

they increase my curiosity to know what exactly was wrong with Zoya's past...

Razia... i can't hate her more i guess... but, i my hatred for her is increasing in every chapter...😡😆

and Gafoor... such a spineless person he is!!!!

shame on him...

and Asad

he is just so lovable...

he doesn't let her be alone, yet respects her privacy...

such a gentleman he is!!!!

Awesome update Bubba 👏👏

going to read the next one now 😳

love you loads... ❤️🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

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again a fab update,..

oh mae Zoe really had all sorrows in her childhood,.. and i feel sorry for her,..

oh that man,.. am again locked up in fangirling,..🤪
i so waaana see this AAk in real life,..
he isa some terro reader,..no a face reader,..mind reader,..
o Boy,.. whatever he is,..he isa just ❤️

he was so cnfused if he should call her,.. so cnfused @ her back,..
buh on front he is sucha smart,.. not giving away even 1 impactless moment...
she tries to hide each n every thing,.. buh end up in getting caught,..
i love this complicated asya,.. and imagining mine kabhi on this story just takes me to some otha world,..
loved it,.. so so so much,...🤗

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Divya.S.R

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Poor Zoya.. That Razia, witch of the first order.. 😡why she compared Zoya with Zainab??

Seriously these people are so disgusting.. Ghaffur can never be expected to have an ounce of brains.. Couldn't he think if his daughter would do such a thing.. 😡

Poor thing was hoping to leave them after her education completed..

It's good Zoya ran away😊.. I think with Nisha's mother help she would be introduced to a career she never wanted to go.. 😭

😆Asad is just too cute.. He was continuously trying her number..

nice so Zoya is also being a little naughty around him.. 😉😆

not bad.. he knows her very to catch her lies.. 😉...

Love their talks and slowly their feeling for each other seems to be increasing even if it's in a small quantity... 😳

It was a short update but a lovely Asyalicious one.. 😉

p.s. Have a great vacation.. have a safe trip.. 🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

#386

Ressy Messy Classy Lionel Messi 😎

Aloha bubble 😃

update Bubble

Kameena ghafoor and kameeni Razi and that choti mosquito Saqia I will kill all three of those morons with my bare hands 😡

Ghafoor and Razia mouse all are their doings and blaming my Joyaaa baby 😡

Zoya shld do like this to them 🤣

Zoya badi hi dramebaaz hain pata hain phir bhi natak phone call par kudi badmaash ho gayi hain 😆

Aye shabash Asad no le hi liya Zoya ka kya socha Joya ne ke he can't have

her number 😡 😆

Asad is too fast for zoya 😆

Ahh haan zoya liked Asad's dressing style

Oye balle balle zoya ne kam se kam maana toh sahi ke she is becoming happy now

to see asad

Naseele aankhen jo teri dekhi zoya usme khone lagi

Sahi jawab diya zoya ne apne parents ke baare mein maaro maaro toofan macha do ghaffy aur razia par

Bechari Zoya she is in pain all coz of those 3 garbage ppl 🤢

Asad did saying in that german lingo 👏 😆

Bubble the update was so short but I will not ask for more coz this time I understand fully 😳 😆

Hopefully this shld not be my last comment on ur thread 😆

Congo for ur long holidays and best of journey to u 🥳

Thank You 😃 😳

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shreya mehra

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Posted: 11 years ago

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I AM REALLY SRY FR SUPER DUPER LATE COMMENT..

Chappi 5..

M really FEELING bad fr her..her past is full of torture..sorrows..huh..😭

Tis chudail n her aulaad chudail duo md her life like HELL..😡🤬

Ghafoor who was at first confused on all this, got more angry on Zohura after Razia reminded him of Zainab.

kk..m damn sure now thy md a FAKE STORY abt her mom character. .😭

Thnk god NISHA was there wid her all the tym..as bestie😳..bt she LEFT fr mumbai.

Bt I thnk sumtyms emotions CONNECTION is very much necessary thn the person's presence..n m gaamld thy MAINTAINED it..😳

Razia is such a bitch ..she wanted her to LEAVE the school..ugrh..saali kamini🤬

N u said its jst the BEGINNING. .maar h dalegi kya usko.😡

The whole FLASHBACK scene was so emotional..nw bck to PRESENT. .asad is waiting na..😉

Asad cald her..n the hot actress kept her PROMISE. .⭐️

Oho hw cn she DOUBT on his limitations..its just a no..😎

Waoh..MR KHAN SE ASAD...VERY SOON HA...☺️😳

Yeey..he knw her very well..n her LIES also. .😆

I like the convo btwn the my LOVE BIRDS. .😳

"And what place is safe for girls ?" She asked back sharply.

"Home !" He answered the obvious.

"Yeah right." She rolled her eyes and he felt something weird in her tone as if their was some hidden meaning behind her words.

omg..asad unknowingly SCRATCH her past..HOME ws nvr b a safe n peaceful place fr my poor zoya..🤔

N the best part the place ASAD found it weird...she spent her hours n hours widout ny problem..

Very STRANGE..😕😆

She HATE thm like nythng..that fr her..parents r dead..😔

Very EMOTIONAL update bubble...

Off to NXT chappi😳

Love

Shreya😉

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

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res for the lot!! 😉

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shreya mehra

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Posted: 11 years ago

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ja bubble

jee le apni zindagi

dia tumko 1 month..ash kro😎

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: --SH7_Sunny--

ankie 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

tu to abhi isi ko edit karne wala hai!! 🤣

mat kar.. kaunsa tu unres karga 🤣

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