||Teri khamoshi ne di mere dil pe dastak|| Kabhi ss *chap 3* pg30:) - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

^^ I'm half way down with the chapter. hopefully aaj raat update karungi!


oh excellent !!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
Nice idea
Zoya is mute & married to asad
Both are living separately
Asad wrote a book on his life & life changing moments
Continue soon
Do pm me plz
Thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice idea
Zoya is mute & married to asad
Both are living separately
Asad wrote a book on his life & life changing moments
Continue soon
Do pm me plz
Thanks


sure but likes and comments are compulsory 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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*~Chapter Eine ~*



"If you break someone's heart it's you who are not worth it , it's not that the person is not worth you . So true these words are , so tranquilizing , so grieving that for a moment I went back in a flashback of my life . How it was so much like heaven my family , my mother , my sister and...my wife . Gosh ! I love her so much now , but as its said once a jerk always a jerk ,yes I was a big jerk to treat her the way I did we lived in India 3 years ago . I worked in a journalism office as an MD my english and maths were my plus points at school as well as at oxford university ..."


"I've studied at Oxford well my father died long back when I started my college and being the most successful businessman in entire Mumbai there was a lot of fuss about my father's death . It was an acute case of cardiac arrest there was no way he could be saved my mother changed completely after that she became stone cold towards everyone . Me , Najma but no not towards my wife . She was a darling to my mum although she didn't speak ever . No don't get confused she couldn't speak , she was mute and that was the thing that led me in hating her even more ..."


I was going to go to bed when Najma called she's the only one left to whom I can talk and she forgive me after mom's death 2 years ago . I am 30 now an author and that's the reason Najma calls me once in a month I know if she didn't want to tell me on what numbers my book is on the best seller she would only call me once in 3 months ...


"As-salaam-walaikum bhaijaan !..." She wished me .


"Walaikum As-salaam Najma !...Kaisi ho ? "


"Bhaijaan your 12th novel is still on the bestseller list and on top 5 its been 4 months since it released and even now is the best ...Congratulations bhai ! "


"Thanks Najma !...how is Zubair ? "


"We both are fine bhaijaan but today I've called you to give you an awesome news about me ..."


"Umm...you read my novel and now want me to write a new one with you as main protagonist ?"


"Ha ha ha ...very funny bhaijaan ...now shut up ! and listen ..."


"Okay ...what ? "


"I ...I ...bhaijaan ...I am pregnant !!! ..."


"My god Najma that's a great news !!...Congratulations ..."


"Umm okay bhaijaan i have to go Zubair is calling me bye take care..."


She kept the phone and I went back to my reverie if SHE would have been there with me . We must be also having children now . I would have confessed to her that I love her . What an idiot I was I was so over paranoid about my insecurities that I even called her a prostitute ! . How can I ? how can I call a girl prostitute who lost her virginity to me ? Though I wasn't in my complete senses i still don't remember that was that night by her will or I really forced her into all that ??


My anger rose to its peak and I punched the wall where I was standing. This was me , this was my life I'll be alone . Alone ! forever and because of myself only . I was an idiot to let her go and idiot !!! ...




Some where in New york city . Eathen sloane square house 44 ~




There stood a girl inside her house watching the kid move taking his first steps . The delight on both of their faces were visible but suddenly the boy fell causing a loud scream to be heard .


"Amm...Amm..ammi !!"



"je je..je !"


the kid spoke in some jestures and she instantly rushed to the kid taking him in her Arms she kept nodding her head in no ...


"This is all because of you , I don't want my child to be as me forever i live alone who'll teach the kid to speak ? "
thought the girl and the time froze in newyork !/...



~ In Germany~


"Gutten morgen ...Herr. khan wie sind sie ? "

( good morning mr . khan how are you ?)


" Gutten morgen Herr martinez ich bin gut und sie ? "

( good ,morning mr. martinez i am good and you ? )


"Ich wollte meine Glckwnsche und meinen Dank fr den Erfolg von Liebe ist blind "

(I wanted to congratulate and thank you for the success of love is blind )


"Dank Herrn Martinez und ich habe vor, schreiben einer Autobiographie mein Leben wird Sie sie verffentlichen? "

(thanks mr. martinez well i am planning to write an autobiography of my life will you publish it ? )


" Der Kurs von Herrn Khan warum nicht und in der jetzigen Phase sind sie einer der am meisten geliebte Autor in Deutschland. Ihre 70 Seiten Romane haben sich zu einem Trend hier ! "


(of course mr. khan why not and at the present stage you are one of the most loved author in germany . Your 70 pgs novels have become a trend here ! )


"Dank Herrn Martinez fr die Berechtigung und Sie wil nur verffentlichen Sie keine sorge okay gut bye fr heute..."

(thanks mr . martinez for the permission and you wil only publish it don't worry okay good bye for now )


"Auf wiedersehen herr khan fr heute ..."


(goobye mr khan for now ! )


I kept the phone back and looked at my type writer and exclaimed in a sigh before exciting up my nerves ...

" Ich bin mir sicher das familire interessant sein und ich hoffe, dass Sie dies lesen ein..."

( i am sure this willl be interesting and i hope she read this one )

Well i can't help you'll have to learn german if you are in bundes repblic Duetscheland (germany ) plus writing indian novels here in english have given me good fortune as i am a rare breed of indian living in germany and writing english .


sighing i kept the intrument aside and slept on my double bed thinking about her !! ...





*~ End of chapter Eine~*


Okay guyss so as promised i have updated in two days ...
but still i didn't get the response i needed only 32 likes and barely 5 pages of comments as this time it's me who have been replying to each comment ...
friends please give me a decent response for the story as it is a good one and just need to be flourished ...
and as for the german convos i don't need help i have learned german and rest two three words could be given by german translator ...
so please try to understand and please hit the LIKE button at least the silent readers _ kuch tho bolo muh tho kholo ...
ek comment n like me aapka kya chala jaayega ?? ...
and people getting pms please COMMENT AND HIT LIKES 😡😳


Auf wiedersehen for now !!!
Edited by ASYA4eveAAA - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
Hey people i hv pmed everyone in the pm list in any case i hv forgotten anyone i am sorry i must have forgot to enter the following username in the Pm list ... 😃😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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beautiful start...
so asad is a writer...
and is very much famous but is living in guilt for his doings in past...
he made his wife to leave him but now is in love with her...
planning to write his biography... with hope that his wife might read it...
at another place his wife is living with their child... who has js learnt to take first steps... but she is sad abt the fact that she being mute... who vl teach her child words of life...
loved it ritz...
waiting for the story to unfold...
continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: aarzoo50

beautiful start...
so asad is a writer...
and is very much famous but is living in guilt for his doings in past...
he made his wife to leave him but now is in love with her...
planning to write his biography... with hope that his wife might read it...
at another place his wife is living with their child... who has js learnt to take first steps... but she is sad abt the fact that she being mute... who vl teach her child words of life...
loved it ritz...
waiting for the story to unfold...
continue soon...



Thanks heena right ???
well i forgot your name 😳😕

sorry !!!

thanks again i will try to update but i m needing likes and comment ss ...
for that 😭🤢
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: ASYA4eveAAA




Thanks heena right ???
well i forgot your name😳😕

sorry !!!

thanks again i will try to update but i m needing likes and comment ss ...
for that😭🤢


yup.. heena it is...
dont worry abt the likes dear... mil jayenge...
u conc. on writing...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: aarzoo50


yup.. heena it is...
dont worry abt the likes dear... mil jayenge...
u conc. on writing...


OKAY !!!
but come to everything burns i need to discuss something !! 😭🤢
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
Wonderful start👏
Asad is successful writer living in Germany😊
so as much as i got about story😎
some misunderstanding happened btw Asya🤔
Asad called Zoya prostitute than forced himself on her😡
later got 2 know she was pure & regretted
but Zoya was gone b4 he could apologize or confess his love😭
now Zoya lives in NY wid a son😃
& she is afraid that she can't speak so who'll teach her son 2 talk😲
interesting will she come back 2 Asad😉
or mayb after Asad launches his AB than after reading it👍🏼
continue soon dear😉
I m lovin it😛
& thanx 4 PM😃

maine comnt kar diya 😳OK😆😉

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