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@saruu.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Paint.It.BlacK.
this one is just amazing!!!
Soo sooo beautifully written!
Your words are soo wonderful in depicting emotions..i lost count of time!
Marvellous!!👏 please keep writing more on SAahil 🤗and if possible please pm me when you post anything!😊

thanks you so much <33

aww *hugs back*

yeah, ill have to buddy you for that :)

thanks so much for the wonderful comment love <33

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sardeeeeeep

@saruu.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: peppygeek
Completely MESMERIZING. I am spellbound.
You need to be on roll more often!

thank you so much.

haha yeah i know, i get so much done when im on a roll- otherwise i just get this massive writers block and it is awful.

thanks so much for liking my work love <3

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Aishah8

@Aishah8

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Omg amazing why did u have to stop ur writing is excellent please write more!

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sardeeeeeep

@saruu.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Aishah8
Omg amazing why did u have to stop ur writing is excellent please write more!

hahaha thank you so much love <3

i will :)

thanks for the kind words <3

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-RohitMaxwell-

@-RohitMaxwell-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

aww lovely.. you are amazing writer

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sardeeeeeep

@saruu.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: -RohitMaxwell-
aww lovely.. you are amazing writer

thanks so much for reading and commenting on my works love <33

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mrs. varun dhawan but you can call me fari. :)

@daydream.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Wow, you really are on a roll! xD

Rage. I love it. <3

Can I just say - how do you come up with all your titles? They're all so brilliant; each and every one of 'em! :O

Sanam is pathetically easy to break.

She is made of bones that are brittle and do not bend, that break and shatter underneath pressure or tension or weight. There are soft muscles and tissue that can be torn, that cushion veins which are easily punctured and drained. She is covered in skin that is stretched thin, that rips and shreds like muslin to scissors. Her body is a vessel easily overtaken, easily broken, and it heals slowly and tentatively and sometimes not at all.

There is strength of will in her, that can't be quantified or measured, but it is wasted in a surrounding weakness it cannot exist without.

There will be bruises forming under her eyes, deep crescents the colour of the midnight sky, and they will fade slowly achingly so, only to come back the next day. There are small ragged cuts pressing incessantly on her frail wrist- courtesy of a wayward potato peeler - a twitch away from puncturing absurdly fragile layers of skin, and the press of the blade can feel the movement of her veins, the solidity of the bones holding her together.

For all her frailty, Sanam is surprisingly strong.

^This whole entire thing really stood out to me. Your descriptions are perfection, your grammar is impeccable, your concepts/ideas are amazing, and your writing is just unbelievable.

Your language and vocabulary are just WOW. You seriously render me speechless with each new piece you write. :O

I absolutely, 100%, completely adore this like i n s a n e.

Please write more.

-Fari.

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sardeeeeeep

@saruu.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: -LiveLoveLaugh-
Wow, you really are on a roll! xD

Rage. I love it. <3

Can I just say - how do you come up with all your titles? They're all so brilliant; each and every one of 'em! :O

Sanam is pathetically easy to break.

She is made of bones that are brittle and do not bend, that break and shatter underneath pressure or tension or weight. There are soft muscles and tissue that can be torn, that cushion veins which are easily punctured and drained. She is covered in skin that is stretched thin, that rips and shreds like muslin to scissors. Her body is a vessel easily overtaken, easily broken, and it heals slowly and tentatively and sometimes not at all.

There is strength of will in her, that can't be quantified or measured, but it is wasted in a surrounding weakness it cannot exist without.

There will be bruises forming under her eyes, deep crescents the colour of the midnight sky, and they will fade slowly achingly so, only to come back the next day. There are small ragged cuts pressing incessantly on her frail wrist- courtesy of a wayward potato peeler - a twitch away from puncturing absurdly fragile layers of skin, and the press of the blade can feel the movement of her veins, the solidity of the bones holding her together.

For all her frailty, Sanam is surprisingly strong.

^This whole entire thing really stood out to me. Your descriptions are perfection, your grammar is impeccable, your concepts/ideas are amazing, and your writing is just unbelievable.

Your language and vocabulary are just WOW. You seriously render me speechless with each new piece you write. :O

I absolutely, 100%, completely adore this like i n s a n e.

Please write more.

-Fari.

yeah man, 3 stories in 36 hours, its probably like a new record for me :P

really?!

i get them from shuffling my ipod and using the lyrics from the first song that comes up 🤣

thank you so so much love, though my grammar is like the worst 🤣

i adore you for such kind words <33

yeah, im writing a new SaHil fic- its actually gonna be a long one- its AU and inspired by SPN.

really cliched and out of the box at the same time too 🤣

thanks so much for reading love <3

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nikki.171

@nikki.171

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: suds.

EEEK DON'T DIE MAN 🤣

you are beautiful, and you are making me blush.
do you write anything?
you should.
you seem like you would be fantastic.

Im writing more atm 🤣

thanks for you kind words love <33

You might just kill me with the stuff you write. I am not complaining though, loving the writing spree you're on.
OH. Did you notice mine was the first comment *does a happy dance*
I do write. But only for myself. 😳 Plus, I am not even half as good as all you writers out here.

Saw the other stuff you've written! Eeks! 🥳

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Preeti

@FaultInMyStars

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#40

Omh girl are you actually for real? This is excellent 👏

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