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@saruu.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: Foreverdukhi
Romantic and passionate. Enjoyed it!

thankyou so much love <33

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bewafa

@bewafa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

I have decided I don't like OS stories. They end. So damn soon.

I love your writing! Love it! And I was VERY disappointed when it just ended. SO quickly. WHY?

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sardeeeeeep

@saruu.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: bewafa
I have decided I don't like OS stories. They end. So damn soon.
I love your writing! Love it! And I was VERY disappointed when it just ended. SO quickly. WHY?

Haha I was on a road trip when this happened- Western Australia and being in a car in WA for 28733937 hours? awful.

So I decided to write SaHil instead :P

I'm sorry it ended so soon!

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bewafa

@bewafa

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: suds.

Haha I was on a road trip when this happened- Western Australia and being in a car in WA for 28733937 hours? awful.

So I decided to write SaHil instead :P

I'm sorry it ended so soon!

WA...LOL you poor thing. It's an expanse of space. That's it.

Yeah well I hope you get bored a lot more often :P

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Larae

@Larae

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

omg this was so good. I love it!! please write more in the future. Love your writing

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-Devanshi-

@-Devanshi-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Dude this was awesome! I absolutely love the way you have written the one shot from the first word to the end. The vocabulary, the descriptions, the thought, feelings---everything was very well penned down. Describing sanam's contradicting physical fragility yet her mental strength was bull's eye :). And Aahil's reactions and his words...brilliant. Really!!

Loved it. Will try catching up on more of your stuff :)

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sardeeeeeep

@saruu.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: Mehar23
omg this was so good. I love it!! please write more in the future. Love your writing

thank you so much for liking my stuff love <3

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sardeeeeeep

@saruu.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: -Devanshi-
Dude this was awesome! I absolutely love the way you have written the one shot from the first word to the end. The vocabulary, the descriptions, the thought, feelings---everything was very well penned down. Describing sanam's contradicting physical fragility yet her mental strength was bull's eye :). And Aahil's reactions and his words...brilliant. Really!!
Loved it. Will try catching up on more of your stuff :)

thank you!

i used a lot of synonyms from word tho, thats like my favourite feature on the internet :P

again, thank you so much for reading and liking my works love <333

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Pagalpinky

@Pagalpinky

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#59

Woah that was outstanding
Have been reading all your stories for the past few mins
This was my favorite

I'm seeing a vulnerable ahil
And sanam handled him so well

Amazing job! I really hope there are some of your stories that I've missed so I can go into sahil-land again

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sardeeeeeep

@saruu.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: Pagalpinky
Woah that was outstanding
Have been reading all your stories for the past few mins
This was my favorite

I'm seeing a vulnerable ahil
And sanam handled him so well

Amazing job! I really hope there are some of your stories that I've missed so I can go into sahil-land again

thank you very much love!

i love it when the heroes are the vulnerable ones, it makes me want to squish them up <33

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