Asad-Zoya FF:Zoya Proposes, Asad Disposes Thread II Chapter 22 Pg 137 - Page 97

Originally posted by: notagain

Res, finally the update,

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Pehle to it has been so long that I can't remember whether I replied or not and I may be replying one more time..sorry 😳.

Zoe Zoe Zoe...😊

Finally, it all makes sense, and yet not. The information overload spilling everywhere, and yes, all of it inverting everything she knows so far. Nothing is as it should be. Ayaan, Humeira, Tanveer. And most of all Asad. He is not what she thought he is and yet is. All of the world coalescing into that moment. When Asad became who he was meant to be in her world. Simply, easily, obviously. The awareness hit her like a luminous feeling. The subconscious is now conscious, she blushes, wondering how she could have missed it. And by so much.

Emma/Zoya's realization is very hatke. Jane did this so well. Once realized it felt as easy as breathing - natural, just the way it should be. It is a very very different type of love realization and I can't remember having it somewhere else. I am super glad that I could get it right here for Zoya.😊

What a lovely chapter. All of it so perfectly pitched, right from Zoe's confusion to Rashid's guilt, Dilshad's relief, Tanveer's confidence to Zoe's astonishment to finally her finding the hidden essence that was always within her. What a range of emotions and finally acceptance. 👍🏼

The last part, the ache, the realization, and the hope that seems fleeting and yet rooted in her being. This, that moment when it all comes together. Asad permeates and lives in her life like she never knew. 😳

Thank you. Last part was a pure joy to write. Well, it was about Asad, from Zoya's POV but about Asad. I am glad that it is being loved by all. 😳

Beautifully written from Zoe's perspective. 👏

This update was worth the wait. And now begins the wait for the next part. And yes, it's hard Noe, hopefully it will be sooner than later. 😳

Thank you for wonderful comments as always!

Originally posted by: potternerd

Res

unres

Hayee Noe maar dala...uff what an update

Thank you😳

Mayhem in Zoya's perfect world

Ayaan-humeira engaged...rashid-dilshaad concerned for zoya instead of rejoicing...zoya thinking about Tanveer...Tanveer thinking about Asad

OMG Zoya be like what the effin hell's goin on here !!!!

''He was not Ayaan, he was not Akram. He was Asad'' WOW

''How can Mehak be someone else's niece?''

''This was her own doing''

Epic update Noe with some super epic writing kudos to you 👏

After the Chaudvin ka Chaand chapter this one is my favourite !!

Aww..thank you. Ab main aur kya kahoon?😳

Loved how Zoya's love for Asad just flowed out of her mouth '' When you have me'' 😳😳😳

Pyaar to kab se tha...bas samajane ki der thi.

And then the acceptance...the blushing...the realisation that it was too late

Mind blowing

So many emotions so many realisations...so so so powerful

Only you could do this Noe 😊

Cheers !!

Thank you very much for generous words! I am so glad that you liked the update.😃

Originally posted by: -ABI-

unres
first thank-u for updateing
about Update
It was pertty interesting
finally fighting with lots of confussion,Zoya have realize she was in love with Asad
can't wait for Asad's return&Zoya dealing with this mess😉
CONTINUE SOON

Thank you very much. Glad that you like it.

And...that Mangalpur pic...haaye...Asad and Zoya

Originally posted by: jazmeen

Finally u have updated man

And finally zoya has realized she is in love with asad

Yayyuu I was so waiting for this

Can't wait to see asad back and how zoya will deal with it

Plzz plzzz con soon plzzz I will b waiting for next part so impatiently lol

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Heyyy...Noe...thanx for the P.M dear...it took you so long to update and we can understand...so but you compensated with this update by realizing Zoya that she is in love with Asad...though Asad was not here in person, he was everywhere in the update except the first half ...i really loved Zoya"s self confession part...continue soon.

Originally posted by: gowtu

Akhir zoya mein akhal Aa hi gai.. Uuufff...
Amzng updt.. I loved it