Asad-Zoya FF:Zoya Proposes, Asad Disposes Thread II Chapter 22 Pg 137 - Page 95

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Posted: 10 years ago
"Asad, why do you love Tanveer? Why do you love anyone? Why does everyone need to fall in love and get married? Why can't you be just the way you are?" It was rich coming from a self-proclaimed match-maker, but she was feeling insanely possessive of Asad and everything related to him.

She felt fear grip her heart and she sat up. Losing even an inch of Asad was unnerving.


"What will I do without Asad? What will I do?" She asked the empty room. No answer came back from outside. "Will you be okay without me, Asad?" She whispered. "How can you be okay without me, Asad?" She asked in a small voice."




"She curiously eyed the man who was driving. He was wearing his favourite shades. His one hand was reaching out for that hair that fell on his forehead and annoyed him. The same hand wore the wrist watch which she knew was not a much liked piece in his impressive watch collection. There was a tiny cut on his jaw bone because despite being a meticulous man he cut himself while shaving more than an average. Light was falling perfectly on his chiselled features. He had annoyed expression which meant she must have taken the photo against his wish. His next expression would have been a scowl or a smirk depending on who won whatever argument they must be having. But she knew exactly where on his cheek those dimples appeared when he smiled. Her hand again reached out to caress his face this time without any hesitation. She felt such a strong surge of warmth and affection that she felt her heart constrict. She softly smiled as her hand that was caressing the photo reached her heart. She had felt the sweet ache of being in love."


In my opinion, the quoted text, has been the best you have written of Zoya!


@Orange: The intensity of her introspect after Tanveer left was extremely palpable - Really, this was a stellar scene!
Edited by p_s05 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Another beautifully written update from you. I loved the way zoya realized her love for asad. Her monologue was sooo drenched in true love. Already awaiting the next part.
P.S. I love Persuasion too but S&S- I have read only the summary. Whenever u decide to write you have one ardent follower at your service.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Interesting story. Loved AyRa. Zoya is a confused soul.
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow chapter 21 and 22 is amazing
finally everything is out
who is with whom lol
i missed asad
plzz update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
All the surprised became shocked for zoya & biggest one was tanveer with asad. She felt pain in her heart & realised that what it is. She is in love with her best friend, her Asad but thought it is too late. Now waiting for asad entry finally & solved complete mystery. Continue soon plz. Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update...
thank god radil ka confusion clear hogaya..
uffo tanveeer asad ki baatein karing. 😡 awww my Zoe

"Asad, how can you love someone else when...when you have me?"
wohooo Zoya is so possessive when it comes 2 asad...
last scene is beautiful...
miss asad...
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome chappy
Zoya finally realised she loves Asad!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Finally zoya realised her feelings for asad .
i think asad also feels the same for her . Maybe he must have already realised his feelings .
Well tanveer is gonna get hurt :(
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Posted: 10 years ago
Just here to hug this baby.



The thoughts of letting this one go...


:'(







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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: p_s05

"Asad, why do you love Tanveer? Why do you love anyone? Why does everyone need to fall in love and get married? Why can't you be just the way you are?" It was rich coming from a self-proclaimed match-maker, but she was feeling insanely possessive of Asad and everything related to him.

She felt fear grip her heart and she sat up. Losing even an inch of Asad was unnerving.


"What will I do without Asad? What will I do?" She asked the empty room. No answer came back from outside. "Will you be okay without me, Asad?" She whispered. "How can you be okay without me, Asad?" She asked in a small voice."




"She curiously eyed the man who was driving. He was wearing his favourite shades. His one hand was reaching out for that hair that fell on his forehead and annoyed him. The same hand wore the wrist watch which she knew was not a much liked piece in his impressive watch collection. There was a tiny cut on his jaw bone because despite being a meticulous man he cut himself while shaving more than an average. Light was falling perfectly on his chiselled features. He had annoyed expression which meant she must have taken the photo against his wish. His next expression would have been a scowl or a smirk depending on who won whatever argument they must be having. But she knew exactly where on his cheek those dimples appeared when he smiled. Her hand again reached out to caress his face this time without any hesitation. She felt such a strong surge of warmth and affection that she felt her heart constrict. She softly smiled as her hand that was caressing the photo reached her heart. She had felt the sweet ache of being in love."


In my opinion, the quoted text, has been the best you have written of Zoya!


@Orange: The intensity of her introspect after Tanveer left was extremely palpable - Really, this was a stellar scene!




Oh all that she said.



Damn. This is so overwhelming. My heart goes out to Zoya.





Noe, I agree? The quoted para... One of your best if not the very best.




Stellar writing indeed.


I mean.


Losing even an inch of Asad is unnerving.




*sniff sniff*

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