AsYa OS And Then He Finally Kissed Me

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Heartbeats..

@Heartbeats..

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

I loved it. bas.

The way u wrote it 😳

It reached my expectation? nay...

it was way higher than mine

I am so happy u used emraan hashmi and ayaan... *just like i wanted* 🤣

And then Batman movie...😆

He uses his signature words here also 😎

And the end ☺️

Thanks Bubble...!🤗

I love you for this! ❤️

Edited by -Vaishnavi- - 11 years ago

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Awesome OS
Nice zoya & ayaan antics
Possessive Asad & hot kiss
Thanks for pm

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aseela sha

@aseelashah

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Oh Bubble its superb

Amazing

Adorable

Cute

Funny

Mind blowing

I love it dear

Zoya's state was😆

Pls keep write more

Thanks for pm

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-.-Mariam-.-

@-.-Mariam-.-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

That was really AMAZING OS..

Loved it Bubble..

Thnx for PM..

-Mariam-

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Prashni Singh

@-SilverSparkle-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

This was hilarious! 🤣

I literally laughed out loud. Bearing Asad's basic characteristics in mind along with the "nakli" marriage, how did he even manage good night kisses on the forehead? 😲 😆

"" Nakli wife really ? Because right now I am having all 'Asli feelings' for her." 😎 😆

They were adorable at the end! ☺️

Fabulous! ⭐️

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Nim

@Rarepearl

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Hey Dear,

This was super Sweet & Adorable, just Like AsYa. It made me remember the days when we so looked forward to their Nikkah which finally didn't happen... I wish we could have had something like this with them too. Well, its too late for all this. But this was really amazing.

Love..

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nikki.171

@nikki.171

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

It was an adorable OS. So like Asad and Zoya. Emotionally challenged Asad and quirky Zoya.

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Amulya

@Amulya9

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

aww..its so romantic n soo funny ...

trust me i want 2 quote so many lines ..they r amazing n hilarious too

bubble ur amazing writer

im grinning like an idiot while reading this...

he finally kissed her ...

yayyy..im like this now

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Muskaan

@sweet4shehzadi

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

amazing os dear
thanks for pm so sweet of you

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Bubble that was so cute and hilarious at the same time. Loved the way you wrote their seperate povs. It all felt so real. Like a scene picked out of QH1.

Loved it 😃 please write more of these one shots.