AsYa FF - Across The Shadows - Chapter One To Three

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--Bubble007--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#461

Originally posted by: BeYourself
i am going to comment on both the chapters together 😳

okie 😳

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#462

i guess one more comment to go then 😳

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--Bubble007--

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Posted: 11 years ago

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#464

res

unres..

Bubba 🤗🤗

mwah :*

You don't know how happy i am coz you have started a new story..

this is going to be one awesome piece, just like Italy...

you are too good in writing these kinds!!👍🏼

God bless you.. keep writing more...😳

and you know, i couldn't res my place for the first update

but i took the first place in this one

so this comment is for both the updates 😳

Zoya is an actress.. now that's going to be fun!! 😉

poor Wajid!! 😆

but Zoya is very good at heart it seems 😳

Asad...

this man never ever fails to steal my heart!!! 😳❤️

i am sooo eager to read the next update which is already posted but i haven't read it yet

can't even say update soon 😆

see you.. just after few lines i guess 😉🤣

I am back with my comment for the second part!! 😎🤣

Bechara Prasad... 🤣

Asad kitna tang karta hai isko har ek story mein!! 🤣

i loved their first meeting!!

and it's so true Bubba...

whatever happens in life, it's we who should know that we want to be a strong survivor or a weak victim!!

it all depends on us... we should not dwell upon the past, but concentrate on the present and future... 😊

Extremely well written part that was!! 👏

and..and.. and..they have finally met!!! 😳

this is going to be an AMAZING story Bubba!! my intuition's saying so!! 😛

i am so so so excited for the next part.. and the best thing is, i will not have to wait for it... 😉😎

see you just after few pages!! 😉😆

lots of love❤️

Ankie 🤗

Edited by BeYourself - 11 years ago

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shreya mehra

@shreya11mehra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#465

CHAPPI 2

fab update bubble...👏

oh gal..m in love wid dis ff nw...😳

3 thngs tk my whole ATTENTION ..🤓

1. he ws in his home town..bt cnt go to his own house n meet his family..😲

2. he strtrd FALLING fr zoya.that he cudnt stopped himself to click her pics..😳

3. VICTIM or SURVIVOR🤔

it was Germany then he would have drove his own sports car and have reached home in five minutes

omg..m imagining KSG nw...driving a sports car.. 😳

Bubble plz i want u to show him driving a SPORTS CAR in the story.plzzz😛

mmm...as i said earlier...he ws in his HOME TOWN..he was in mumbai aftr 10 long years..n he DIDNT want to go home..kyu..bhy😲🤔

a girl sitting on the opposite side of a lake which made his world stop for a few seconds. It wasn't much of a water full of lake but a smaller one with greenery from all sides but what caught his eyes was the beautiful girl sitting beside it.

I imagined the whole scenery while reading it..n it was so beautiful..hy gal frm whr u gt the idea of CREATING tis scene...its simply beautiful n elegant..😳

"MashAllah !" He exclaimed while admiring her beauty and he was unable to blink his eyes just to make sure that the view won't lost from his eyes

kya baat hai..his frst wrds fr zoya were...DIES IST INTERSSANT...nw MASHALLAH...mmm..❤️☺️

She was dressed in a red strapless, silky gown which hardly covered her bosoms with her hair straightly falling on her shoulders and naked arms hugging her knees lightly. The only jewel she wore was a diamond ring in her middle finger.

she was looking damn BEAUTIFUL..undoubtedly...asad ka pagal hona jayaz hai..😳😉😆

he clicked PICS of her..hmm..☺️

zoya was unknown fr him..he cudnt saw her in TEARS..n tried to calm her down...❤️

he gv her the LESSON what he tk frm his own life...

I know its difficult but its on you if you want to live as a VICTIM or a SURVIVOR. You are still a victim if you are letting them destroy you. You cannot change that person or your past, you can only change yourself so try doing that.

damn...asad is a VICTIM...or sumthng like that...bcz he was telling thngs wat he learnt frm his own life...😲🤔

WHAT THE f**k😲

hu RUINED zoya life..y she alwys thnk negative...😒

he wanted to FOLLOW that beautiful gal..bt ye unki tameez tehzeeb ki limit se bhar hai...😆

VISHAL tk him to zoya's success party..😉.

asad found her so DIFFERENT frm lst nite..😳

thy both were dumbstruck bcz of obvious reasons ...n atlst knw their NAMES nw...😃

dis gal hvng MASK on her face of happiness...she is all alone deep inside her heart...

loads of questions are in my mind...🤔

m gtng desperate to knw their DARK PART of their life...which is ruining their present..compelled thm to stay alone ...evn aftr being so successful...in their respective careers..

update soon bubble...

LIEBE DICH..mwah😳

Shreya😉

p.s. i want 18+ stuff in dis ff nw...

Edited by shreya11mehra - 11 years ago

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-AppleOfMaEye-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#466

may i add up a song in mae comment plz,..🤔
res

unres,..

frst thing frst,.. i just loved th update,.. ❤️
it was awesome,..

poor him,. i doon know whats wrong with AAKs family,.. in your ff they are just so so far away,. though i dooon know th reason buh know he can't be wrong,..
in mine ff too dilluu is so off th track of being a Mother,..🥱

that scene at th lake side was written just beautifully,..
AAK,..clicking pics of some unknown grl,.😲
he is surely attracted towards her,..😆

their POV towards is totally different,.. and i would love to read how they would come together and see through their life,..

th grl is living 2 lives at a time,..A MYSTERY,.. A BIG ONE,..

I know its difficult but its on you if you want to live as a VICTIM or a SURVIVOR. You are still a victim if you are letting them destroy you.

this line,..i loved it,..

am glad that you liked and chose this title,..😆

Edited by -Maliha- - 11 years ago

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#467

res for the whole lot 😉😆

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aniha

@Aniha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#468

res
unres...
this is awesome bubba 😃
i think this time i unresd soon 😳
if it was Germany then he would have drove his own sports car
in one update i want to see him in sports car 😛
his family in mumbai and he dont want to meet him 😕
Unknowingly, he started driving to roads which were taking him nowhere, giving him peace of mind for some time.
yeah his destiny is there 😆
he is mesmerised and he takes snap 😲
her red dress seems gorgeous to her and asads clothing ☺️
bechara caring about her but buddhi zoya farooqui is not interested with him and she finds him only quite attractive
they met again and introduced bcoz of cool vipul 😉
enjoyed long update want like this always 😳
update soon...
lots of love to you 🤗

Edited by aniha20 - 11 years ago

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aYASHIKA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#469

Awesome update...
if it was Germany then he would have drove his own sports car ...
I want to see him driving a sports car with zoya... 😳
Asad came to his home town after 10 years and still doesnt want to meet his family... 😲
He also must be having some dark past..
Asad found zoya the most beautiful girl on the earth and cant stop himself from taking a pic of her 😳
Loved asya first encounter...
Asad started to develop feeling for zoya and wanted to know more abt her 😳 😳
Zoya admired him...
Asad only wants to help zoya but zoya showed him attitude.. 😆
She doesn't even told her name...poor asad
Asad thought of stalking her bt then dropped that idea...
I love vipul ...becoz of him only our asya met again 😳
Zoya got shocked after seeing asad ...
I m loving this ff 😊
Updare soon...

Edited by aYASHIKA - 11 years ago