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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
Soup. This is one awesomely well written post man! 👏
I loved each and every bit of it. And do i have to tell how much i love the title of post. 😳
Likewise, You Own This Post. 😆👏

I seriously loved the different versions and explanations of this phrase "I OWN YOU". How beautifully you have put together them.

I OWN YOU- How long until Aahil realises that Sanam owns him...

This is one very deep and powerful explanation. Aahil doesn't even have an idea how much this girl is affecting/effecting him in so many ways, that even he isn't aware of, even existed in him.
He thinks only about how to give some crazy tasks to her and how to bend her down in front of him. Though he knows, deep down somewhere, she would complete it. He can't digest this girl is getting on his nerves so much. 😆

I OWN YOU- a proud declaration he would want to hear from Sanam's lips...something he'd have to probably work at making her realize...would he then have to beg her to not turn a blind eye to her feelings for him?

This is my second most favourite part . 😳 His inner self is so confused right now. How to accept those strange feelings he gets whenever he looks at her, talks to her, even thinks about her. He doesn't even want to consider those things. Infact he wants HER to make him realise those feelings. He doesn't even know what she is doing to him, forget the considering part. Oh. He is such a confused soul, not able to provide a suitable name to it, or even a thought.

I OWN YOU- an expectation that is slowly gaining root- from a possession... that would grow into an obsession and a necessity...

This is my most favourite part of this post. That obsession for his possession. That underlying feeling somewhere deep down in him, that is growing like anything. That intensity he feels when they are close to each other. Whether in hatred. The hatred has much more passion waiting to explode one day. That fatal attraction he feels towards her.. That awkwardness he feels when he mistakenly gets so lost in her.

I OWN YOU- a sense of responsibility that is being evoked in him, without his knowledge...that makes him shout at his 'possession' for putting herself in danger..that makes him apologetic enough to shelter her...

This is one very important part of him which he thinks never existed in him. Responsibility. He doesnt even know what kind of feelings this girl is dwelling into him. He doesn;t realise he is getting closer to the one he doesn't even want to see face of.

This girl is actually making him unmask all the layers he has hidden inside him under a mask of this rude, arrogant and a mean Jallaad.
The feelings, the emotions, that caring and loving heart, that obsession and possessiveness he had somewhere, just so blind to see them.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Surbhiholic.

interesting ?no di 😭 whether she is blind or she return's with 10 eyes ...it will be always torture for me 😭



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I am just so thankful she is over her lust...and is into the mother cat mode..

She is ten times more destructive now...she has a litter to protect...NOt even sure she considers Aahil a part of that...I feel she will just use him...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: Prags_Sociopath

Soup. This is one awesomely well written post man! 👏

I loved each and every bit of it. And do i have to tell how much i love the title of post. 😳
Likewise, You Own This Post. 😆👏

I seriously loved the different versions and explanations of this phrase "I OWN YOU". How beautifully you have put together them.

I OWN YOU- How long until Aahil realises that Sanam owns him...

This is one very deep and powerful explanation. Aahil doesn't even have an idea how much this girl is affecting/effecting him in so many ways, that even he isn't aware of, even existed in him.
He thinks only about how to give some crazy tasks to her and how to bend her down in front of him. Though he knows, deep down somewhere, she would complete it. He can't digest this girl is getting on his nerves so much. 😆

I OWN YOU- a proud declaration he would want to hear from Sanam's lips...something he'd have to probably work at making her realize...would he then have to beg her to not turn a blind eye to her feelings for him?

This is my second most favourite part . 😳 His inner self is so confused right now. How to accept those strange feelings he gets whenever he looks at her, talks to her, even thinks about her. He doesn't even want to consider those things. Infact he wants HER to make him realise those feelings. He doesn't even know what she is doing to him, forget the considering part. Oh. He is such a confused soul, not able to provide a suitable name to it, or even a thought.

I OWN YOU- an expectation that is slowly gaining root- from a possession... that would grow into an obsession and a necessity...

This is my most favourite part of this post. That obsession for his possession. That underlying feeling somewhere deep down in him, that is growing like anything. That intensity he feels when they are close to each other. Whether in hatred. The hatred has much more passion waiting to explode one day. That fatal attraction he feels towards her.. That awkwardness he feels when he mistakenly gets so lost in her.

I OWN YOU- a sense of responsibility that is being evoked in him, without his knowledge...that makes him shout at his 'possession' for putting herself in danger..that makes him apologetic enough to shelter her...

This is one very important part of him which he thinks never existed in him. Responsibility. He doesnt even know what kind of feelings this girl is dwelling into him. He doesn;t realise he is getting closer to the one he doesn't even want to see face of.

This girl is actually making him unmask all the layers he has hidden inside him under a mask of this rude, arrogant and a mean Jallaad.
The feelings, the emotions, that caring and loving heart, that obsession and possessiveness he had somewhere, just so blind to see them.


THank You...

I OWN YOU..

Through all the junoon moments this week, this one line kept repeating for me...

I am not watching QH leisurely like I used to, before...

U have elaborated that thought so much more further...THANK YOU...🤗

Responsibility, obsession. possessiveness...so many many emotions..

And the way he refused the sewiya and wept like a child...I have a feeling he will want Sanam to own him...All men are boys, afterall...😉😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
I own you! A perfect title👏.
"Dheere dheere aap mere dil ke mehman ho Gaye"😳
Aahil is losing his heart ...slowly slowly😳
I think you are right , Naziya is not so very goody girl like she pretends to be😊.Haya is in big trouble...aadhi gharwali Jo hai
So rahat will be the rescuer. And whenever I see Sanam in that kind of situation I feel like crying...she is the daughter of THE ASAD AHMED KHAN! And now she is struggling to earn some respect😭
Achhe din aayenge Sanam ji😆
Edited by subhkisonu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: penfriend28

Soup..

Missed ur posts...


🤗🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: chicksoup


THank You...

I OWN YOU..

Through all the junoon moments this week, this one line kept repeating for me...

I am not watching QH leisurely like I used to, before...

U have elaborated that thought so much more further...THANK YOU...🤗

Responsibility, obsession. possessiveness...so many many emotions..

And the way he refused the sewiya and wept like a child...I have a feeling he will want Sanam to own him...All men are boys, afterall...😉😆


@bold: 😆 True that. 😆 These type of stories always end up having the girl owning the guy. No matter how many times the guy shouts "i own you now" 😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That's one great post dear...
Aahil's nature, his thoughts, his unknown attraction towards sanam. , everything was beautifully portrayed in that scene..

His ego is still dominating his attraction..let the challenge gets completed...

That lady in kV, I think she is hinting them to go knowing her husband's intentions..raahat will be the saviour...
Zia sis. ...nice name...
(Gita may be right.she always doubts nazia)nazia may be the grey one...shazia is spoiled child just like aahil.

Do u know who is the elder one?

Just read about tanveer's entry...brilliant idea I can say...
Will she be a catalyst initially as in case of asya or tough time ahead for sanam...hope they don't ruin again


Edited by penfriend28 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Kya Khoob likhti hain aap... 🤗🤗

Yeh Ishq nahin aasaan... but kya Karen... apne bas main nahin hota hai .. pyaar to bas ho jaata hai...
Na to soorat ki baat hai, na seerat ka sawaal hai...
Hum tum par mar mite yeh to tabbiyat ki baat hai...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
awesome post dear!
sanam gives him perfect name jallad jinn.. wow!!
thats why always says i qwn u sanam..

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