12. I OWN YOU. : May 25 LNK upd - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice i like it... with full meaning...👏
i own u
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Owning is not so bad after all, it doesn't mean being slave only, it means you belong someone who want to protect you forever..
Nice post..
And yes like SJ, AG is lucky to get a chance to prove her mettle in more dynamic role than cheap seducer she got before, but it is yet to be seen that how she will do.
Sorry but to me she failed as young Tanveer as she just showed same smirks over and over. I hope she spent good time rewinding some old QH1 episodes of Razia to get some tips, same old smirks will kill the show AGAIN..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: chicksoup




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I am just so thankful she is over her lust...and is into the mother cat mode..

She is ten times more destructive now...she has a litter to protect...NOt even sure she considers Aahil a part of that...I feel she will just use him...

I am just so thankful she is over her lust...and is into the mother cat mode
bold i am thankful to cvs for this😆Yes di she will use aahil and i will hate her even more 😡😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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great post! 👍🏼How beautifully you have opened up the character's inner traits! 😊Awesuum!!👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: chicksoup


May 25:

Dear diary,

Aahil loves to remind Sanam at every opportunity, that he owns her; even when she refuses to be treated like a slave. Sanam is under a misconception. She is more than a slave to him...she is his possession...and without realising it, Aahil is allowing himself to be possessed. He throws her around like a doll...like a careless boy with an interesting new toy...more than he himself realizes, he is getting attached to this new toy- so much so that he has it has become too private to him, a part of him- that he has even forgotten it was a new happening in his life...and Aahil supposedly shares every news with his Ammi!

I OWN YOU- a declaration that Aahil loves to impose, because he knows Sanam hates to hear it.

I OWN YOU- a sense of responsibility that is being evoked in him, without his knowledge...that makes him shout at his 'possession' for putting herself in danger..that makes him apologetic enough to shelter her...

I OWN YOU- an expectation that is slowly gaining root- from a possession... that would grow into an obsession and a necessity...

...through the troubles he is putting her through, Aahil expects this new toy not to break...not to malfunction...unknown to him, he wants this bond to stay strong for him...with him...to keep him strong when his step falters...

I OWN YOU- How long until Aahil realises that Sanam owns him...

I OWN YOU- a proud declaration he would want to hear from Sanam's lips...something he'd have to probably work at making her realize...would he then have to beg her to not turn a blind eye to her feelings for him?

Jallad Jinn...an endearment Sanam whispers as a curse ...she sees the reckless boy who loves to create havoc around him. She refuses to hear the child silently whimpering about a lost childhood...the man who wants to belong , as he cloaks her...She refuses the protection he offers, as she throws his coat down...

...how long until these two realize they can only be complete with the other...

A battle of wits and wills, it is now...neither willing to bow down ...both see only the logs in the other's eyes...

Rehaan: The brother who knows Aahil better than anyone else...Sanam may be a friend; he may be a well wisher...or more than that...but all his good will vanishes when he prefers to obey his brother's commands...he may not agree with Aahil all the time, but he will never disobey him...😳

Khaala and Khaalu: The only people Billi shows her true colours to...😲

Latifa: The chirpy, noisy bird that makes Sanam forget her woes...absolutely well written. 👏He is not a chamcha to anyone..has a mind of his own...but he is decent enough to want to bring a smile on Sanam's troubled face...

Munisa: Another feather in the writer's cap...not such a rare character in reality...so innocently foxy...👏..and so typically blind to her husband...

The Husband: He took some two minutes to settle into the show...by the time the aadhi gharwaali dialogue came, he was well and truly chilling..

Hayaa and Dilshad: Two helpless women...would the hiding relative turn out to be a blessing in disguise?

The Zia sisters: (Got it from Gita's post some time back...😆👏) Did Nazia plan to be seen by Bro- jaan as Shazia was sure to throw her out? And does Billi seem overtly concerned about this daughter? Nazia seems to may be know, where her mother is, unlike Shazia...interesting...

Tanveer: Now Amrapali can shut the mouths of her critics...this elderly version has so many exciting possibilities for an actress..AG is very very lucky!👏



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wow wow wow.You own us your readers.
Ahil is used to people cowering in front of him.He insults rehan but he does'nt get angry,He stays with him tries to plead with him.
Khala is a sponger.
Latif adores his laatsab.
the only person ahil listens to is his ammi.He will willingly give up anything for her.
Sanam isa mystery.A cook in his house she dares to raise her voice and stand tall and proud in front of him.She is proud of her upbringing and her khuddari.this ahil is not able to tolerate.But ,he has a sneaking admiration for her.when she speaks he listens open mouthed.Yes,Sanam is beginning to affect him.there is battle between them.Ahil wants to test her endurance nad gives her tasks.But Sanam daughter of Asya does'nt give up easily.Let's see who blinks first
Poor Haya sweeping the very room where her mom used to live like a princess.Muneesa's hubby has a roving eye.I hope haya confides in badi ammi.
Muneesa is tolerating dilhad and want her to be a maid.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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🤗 Excellent post Soup! 👏

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