||~ The Sunshine of My life #4 AsYa FF ~||Part37 PG130 15/06/14

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Aashka

@Chillichick

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#791

I sooo loved this update...!!

It's like they are confessing their love for each other once again...!!!

Too beautiful!

Thank god Zoya let out her reasons...!!

But she is so caring...!!

Beautifully written...!!

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rads73937

@rads73937

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#792

Beautiful update.

Loved it.

Thanx for the pm. Take care.

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#793

Awesome update
Zoya doesn't want to to nikkah soon bc of many reasons
She was afraid that asad is angry that's why he avoiding
She let out her fear & told asad everything
Asad assured her that nothing will happen
The way he confessed was beautifully written
Proposal talks between asya was amazing
She told asad that her family is more important to her than finding her father
Asad wanted to give zoya complete life & for that he has to find out abt zoya roots
Nice aahana cheek pulling scene, she doesn't like it
Continue soon
Thanks for pm

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aseela sha

@aseelashah

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#794

Ankie such an outstanding update yaar

Its so so beautiful

I love it to the core

I want to write more about this update but i am in a hurry

I want ASYA nikah soon then u can proceed the story further

Pls update soon

Thanks for pm

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TaiLung

@TaiLung

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#795

Awesome update

This is why Zoya hesitant to marry

But Asad's beautiful words are awesome

So they will marry soon?

Please update fast

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-Anku-

@-Anku-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#796

This is not a tantrum, not a complain.. because I have no reason to.. I have wonderful readers who regularly comment and give me the needed feedback. But I've noticed that there are many people who used to comment on my FF earlier and have just stopped doing that now.. I won't take names, they surely know who they are. But I see the likes, but not comments anymore. I don't think I am writing THAT badly, OR making anyone wait for updates am I? And even if I am writing badly.. I could be told that by a comment. I put in a lot of work for the updates and I make sure I update more than I promise.. I don't think asking for comments is unjustified is it? I hate putting notes asking for comments when I already do have plenty of them.. But there are 150 likes or so, and obviously not even half of those people comment.. It really doesn't take so long guys... Please remove 10 seconds from your life and leave a comment. It makes a difference..

Thanks to all those who comment.. just going to reply to all of you right now 😃

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

Viewbie

+ 46

Posted: 11 years ago

#797

Sorry I'm late.. But my WiFi wasn't working but now I'm back! 😳

This is getting even more beautiful day by day!

"What do I to make you feel better Asad?" she mumbled.

"Be with me always!" he whispered and opened his eyes slowly, gazing at her sleepily.

How can you not fall in love with this guy?

"I need to get used to this now.." Asad commented.

"Huh?"

"Used to being fed by you.. I already like what you make so much, I am going to tend to overeat when you feed me.. mujhe nahi lagta mere six packs bachne wale hai.." Asad remarked.

HAHAHA.. Too cute! 😆

Asad angry..😡 Poor Zoya ko explain bhi nahi karne diya!

FINALLY.. Asad Zoya conversation was so beautiful! Well done Anki! 👏

I like Zoya's decision of not looking for her Abbu and rather live in her present and think about her future and I'm glad Asad is with her in her decision! 😳

After a few minutes of silence he looked at her," Toh.. nikaah karengi na mujhse?"

"Propose kar rahe hai aap?"

"Something like that.." Asad retorted with a smirk.

"If yes, then Mr Asad Ahmed Khan, this is no way to propose your lady.. "

"I know only this way 'My Lady' .. take it or leave it.." Asad said haughtily, tugging her closer.

"Now that's not a fair deal.." she frowned.

"It's the best deal, you get an Akdu as your husband, and an angel as your daughter.." he pointed out.

"Well then.. if I say yes, it won't be for Akdu.. it'll only be for the angel," she replied smartly outwitting him.

"That I already know.. ki meri kitni kadr hai.. " he huffed

This was heights of cuteness! 😳 Totally adorable! 🤗

I loved everything about this update yaara! ❤️

Love you loads ❤️ and do continue soon!

Cheers!

Rock on!

Mrina

Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

Viewbie

+ 46

Posted: 11 years ago

#798

one more! <3

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This one is Just to tell you that I simply love everything about your work! ❤️

😳

Bye!

Update soon!

Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago

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-Anku-

@-Anku-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#799

Originally posted by: SleepingBeauty.
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Aaahhh on the same page I reserved on the same page yayayaya

okay firstly, I ABSOLUTELY LOVEEED THIS :| Glad that they came clean with their feelings to each other. Im soo happy to see how they are just moving one step closer to each otherr..

Secondly I am sooo glad these two understand each other soo well. its like they are already married. They love each other irrespective of whatever negative qualities they have.

Thirdly, love how these two care for each otherr. If they arent together they just cant stop worrying for the other. Its just each other for them and I find that sooo cute..

Fourthly, This update was just sooo cute. Loved how u took their relationship and understanding on a different level this time.

Fifthly, I can go on and on abt this update and still cant shut up. One of the best updatesss. Can u get them married first and then continue with the story? I want them married :(

Sixthly, GO FIND ME A GUY LIKE ASAD! OKAY? I WANT A GUY LIKE THAT. U created this character now u find me. Thanksss :))

Ilyyy Ankuuu :**

🤗 Thank you so so much Ana, you're so cute yaar.

I am glad you like the development in their relation. It's quite tough to understand how to narrate a growth when you don't have an Asad or Armaan of your own 😆 You know what I mean..

Mereko khud ko Asad chahiye, tereko kaha se dun 😆

Marriage mai time hai.. and after marriage I'll end the FF .. like about an update or two later. But OS series hai na 😆