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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aseelashah

Wonderful part

I loved it Anu

Happy to see u after so long

I think Zoya answered correctly & win the price

Pls update soon

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

Awesome!

Continue soon!


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Posted: 11 years ago
Sorry for late response Di!!
Ramadan is a busy month!! So I am coming less on IF!
and finally I got the clear view about AsYa's relationship...
Asad really loves Zoya!
want to know Zoya's thought, update soon di 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: swapno

Sorry for late response Di!!

Ramadan is a busy month!! So I am coming less on IF!
and finally I got the clear view about AsYa's relationship...
Asad really loves Zoya!
want to know Zoya's thought, update soon di 😳


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Posted: 11 years ago

PART 7

Zoya "but I am Asad, right now I am, the day when the talks of our engagement came into open, I denied outrightedly that I didn't want to get into marriage and relationships, I wanted to make a career for myself. My appi gave me an ultimatum that I had to agree to this alliance as the family is very good. I just said a No and walked out. My appi was very angry with me that she didnt talk to me for one long week. Then under her pressure I said a yes to this alliance. But fate had other games to be played."

"I had gone to give an interview somewhere and while returning I visited the orphanage where I used to find solace when my abbu and ammi had gone leaving us alone in this world. Appi and me used to spend time there, when Moulavi saab took us there in order to distract us from the pain we were suffering. I had some good memories of that orphanage and some nostalgic feelings also. Hence I dropped in to visit it and it was then I first saw you donating clothes and food to the inmates there. On enquiry I got to know that it was your father's death anniversary and it was a practice for you to come there and give zakaat on that day to the poor and the needy. I felt respect for you. Then I again saw you at a blood donation camp donating blood and go to know that it was your usual practice to do it. I felt some admiration for you. Then again I saw you helping an old lady in the market in carrying luggage as she was not able to carry it. The more I saw you the more I felt some new feelings for you, somewhere I felt my appis choice is perfectly right for me. I wanted to know you better and more and hence I agreed to marry you on one condition that I will stay at your house for sometime and in that way would get to know more about you. I literally blackmailed appi to allow me to stay at your house in return for agreeing to this alliance."

"But then you know the stay at your house was not at all pleasant for me. Everyday I got to know an arrogant and rude side of yours, the more I wanted to know about you, the more I got surprised. But still I was ready to give our marriage a chance, I was confident that I will be able to work it out but the arrival of your childhood friend turned everything upright down. I found myself the most despised one everytime you insulted me in front of everybody. Slowly the liking which I felt for you was turning into an aversion and that day was the limit. You aroused the sleeping feminist in me and I decided to put an end to this. I broke up with you, I called it temporary because I hadn't said anything to my appi and jiju about this and badly wanted to make it permanent and forever I even wished that I never met you again. But then the when I was sitting in the show something told me to phone you up and I still had a hope that you wont let me down, you will help me, which you actually did indirectly and which i didnt pick of course, but that made me to start detest and despise you as I thought you didnt want me to win the money and buy vehicle for you as it will be a big blow to your manliness. I was planning to end it today by buying you the vehicle and saying a goodbye forever, never to meet again Mr Khan as I had decided not to enter into a compromising relation with you which has nothing but mistrust and despise towards the other partner. But see fate had other games to play, you opened up and all the revelations. So now..."

Asad who had been listening very carefully her part and in hope that she will say at some point that she loved him but what he heard was everything else other than the word love, not able to take any more cut her in between "So now what Zoya?" Are you kidding? You want to say that you hate me now even after my revelations? Either its love or hate there cant be a midway, stop going around in circles and tell me what do you feel for me now" Zoya replied "nothing" Asad was flushed out hearing it and his face fell like a fallen leaf. Asad repeated choking his voice "nothing". Zoya "yes nothing, see Mr Khan, don't expect that after knowing the truth the aversion which I had for you will start suddenly turn into love as I never started loving you. I said I started to believe in appis choice and wanted to give our relation a try and wanted to know you better after getting a first glimpse of you but then things went out of control, at least for me, you should have kept me in the loop keeping me in dark is the biggest mistake you did Mr Khan, is that how you treat your would be life partner, wont you share everything and anything with her, at least I will, your first mistake was to keep the love you had for me locked up in a corner of your heart, I don't have sixth sense to grasp it and reciprocate the same nor I would get dreams that you are in love with me and I should confess too unless you say it to me directly on my face. You allowed your friend to insult me and you too whatever maybe the reason behind it insulting and saying things that outrage the modesty of a woman are not nice things to do however fake it may be. You planned everything but executed it very badly Mr Khan only if you had told me everything the story would have been different and we would not be here standing at the hilltop asking each other feelings"

Asad knew what Zoya was saying was true and correct, he shouldn't have kept her ignorant of the things. "You are right Zoya, I misbehaved with you, insulted you publicly knowing you were innocent, but at the same time I too was very much in dilemma, trust me, I did everything just to save your life, to keep you safe, how can I let you life..." Asad now fell on his knees crying burying his face in his hands and asked Zoya in broke voice "Cant you give me one more chance Zoya?" Zoya saw his pitiable situation and kept a hand on his shoulder "Get up Mr Khan, I didnt say its all over, I only said I planned it but you confessed to me your innermost feelings for me and that made me rethink my decision of breaking up with you" Asad eyes had hope "that means is it a yes" Zoya "when did I say that? I m saying I need time to trust you again, I really need time, love cant happen in one day, if you want to hear me saying that I love you you need to give me time and I can give that a second chance" Asad "Then we can start it all over again, I will not repeat the mistakes again, i will do anything for you Zoya" Zoya teased "oh so that means you will do new mistakes right" Asad "what, I now from did that come from, I didnt say like that, wait I didnt mean anything like that, I said I will not commit any mistakes, I will not let anyone come between you and me, not even our fate, I promise to keep you happy forever if you be with me forever, I promise never to hurt you, I promise to bring smile on your face, I promise everthing that will make our life blissful Zoya and I mean it from the heart"

Asad almost held Zoyas both hands and was again hoping that she will say love you, but Zoya was Zoya. She withdrew her hands and teasingly said "Lets see Mr Khan, you have tough time ahead, its not easy to win me and I m going to make it even more harder for you" Asad smelled a challenge in Zoya's words "Are you challenging me Zoya, then I love winning challenge for your kind information" Zoya smirked " really so, then for your kind information I too don't like to lose out on challenges( and in her mind " but this one I would love to lose") Asad " ok, then lets see, who wins, you can give me n number of challenges " Zoya "time will tell Mr Khan, your first challenge is to make me call your name, is it possible, conditions are 1. There should not be any mocking 2. Then I should call your name on my own, you cannot force me to do it 3. And the most important only we both know about this, no third person should know. Agreed. Asad "Agreed,( and in mind) now the game becomes interesting sweet heart." They both parted their ways at that hilltop by accepting the challenge.

After some days

Asad tried a lot to persuade Zoya to call him by his name but Zoya outwitted him everytime by saying Mr Khan. Asad was thinking of ways to make her call his name. He was as usual sitting in his office dealing with some clients when suddenly something struck him. He texted Zoya to come to a coffee shop in the evening after office hours. As said Asad and Zoya met. Zoya asked "Mr Khan why did you call me here?" Asad smiled and said "let play a game till coffee comes" Zoya confusedly "game? Why? You called me here to play game, you are gone nuts" Asad " I called you here to share a coffee moment and yes I m madly in love with you Zoya" Zoya "whatever" Asad "ok lets start, the game is "What comes to your mind" Zoya's eyes opened widely. Asad explained more "I will say a word and you should tell without thinking even for a moment the thing which comes to your mind on hearing that word" So lets start. Zoya in no time found it as a new way to make her call his name. She too decided to play along.

Asad stared "Blue" Zoya "sky" A " birds" Z "free" A "spicy" Z "pani puri" A "yummy" Z "chocolate" A "friends" Z "help" A "Sugar" Z "sweet" A "enemy" Z "alert" A "love" Z "selfless" A "hate" Z "hyprocites" Asad was going on asking but never Zoya said "Asad" she dodged it very cleverly. By the time coffee arrived. The waitor was eyeing Zoya which was noticed by Asad. He asked the waitor to move away as they will serve for themselves. Hot steaming coffee was in between Asad and Zoya on opposite sides. Zoya said "you thought me to be so stupid not to recognised this stupid game of yours?" Asad " you played well" Zoya "I knew it when you started it" Asad "too smart but I will get the first break through I will not lose Zoya at least not in this case" Zoya was elated to know that Asad was trying harder to fulfil her silly challenges. She wanted to spend some time with him and know him better and thats why she put up this challenge but now she too was enjoying the attention Asad was giving her.

Zoya said "I saw your were jealous when the waitor was serving me" Asad "he was not serving he was looking you in a very bad manner, I could see it clearly" Zoya "why I m not your property" Asad fisted his hands and raised his voice a little "Zoya, please dont say that again, I never said you are a property but since you were with me its my duty to protect you from any kind of danger and as a gentleman I did what was right in the situation please dont interpret things in a bad manner." And he jerked away his hand that hot steaming coffee fell on his hands. Zoya sprang up calling his name. She shouted "Assad" Asad at that moment forgot about his burns he was happy that she took his name on her own seeing something happen to him, today he knew something she cant see him pain and that was the first step for him. Zoya was blowing over the burnt part and had asked for ice cubes and was giving him first aid but Asad was lost in his Zoya. He was looking at her blowing his skin. Her hot breath was touching him. He forgot all the pain caused from the burn and was right now enjoying the moment. Suddenly Zoya shook him Asad, "is it still burning?" Asad smiled. Zoya confused "why are you smiling?" looks like you are very tough, that burns make you smile" Asad still flashing his smile said "I won Zoya, you called me by my name and had I known this earlier I would have risked my life before" Zoya almost brought her hands onto his lips to stop him saying that but Asad held it firmly in his grip without letting her to do it. They shared a brief eye lock which was broke by the waitor. "Sir, anything else" Zoya a bit embarrassed at her own action "nothing bill please"

After coffee moment, they both exited the shop and was on the road and the burn had almost become red and Zoya was glancing at her again and again from the coner of the eyes. Asad was happy, even Zoya too but didnt show it. She showed that she was pretty much affected by the defeat. Asad "so" Zoya "what so" Asad "your next challenge" Zoya "oh yah, no doubt you won the first one but I bet you wont win this one, this is too hard for you Mr Khan" Asad "now that you have called Asad, you can stop with this Mr Khan and call me Asad, after all we are going to be life partners" Zoya "you have decided it already" Asad "any doubt" Zoya "so then why are you accepting my challenges?" Asad "thats to make you assure the same thing that we are going to be together forever, you know my to be wifey is crazy sometimes and so she is giving me some challenges so I m like a to be stupid husband fulfilling each one" Zoya "you are over confident" Asad "I m confident about my love which is true and that will give me strength to pass each test, you still want to test go ahead"

Zoya "hmm so your next challenge is " you should stay in my house, in my way for one day without any complaints, as usual the conditions are appi jiju phuppi najma etc are out of this, this is between you and me only, Can you do it?" Asad "but Zoya how can I stay in your house without informing them? They will see me right and ask me the reason too, what will I say?" Zoya "thats your problem, Asad not mine, how are you going to convince them in agreeing to this and then staying all is upto you but they should not know about this challenge. Asad inserted a finger inside his collar to release the tension. Zoya "nervous" Asad "no I m not, agreed, as I said I love to win challenges" Zoya "hmm hmm, so meet you tomorrow at my place sharp 7 pm till then good bye" Asad waved her too now he had only 24 hrs or less than that to convince her appi and jiju and what will he tell, this time Zoya has played well, "you are right Zoya, this time its going to be harder but nevertheless I will give it a try but surely wont back off"

So at the end of Day 1 scores were Asad - 1 Zoya - 0

Lets see what happens now? Will Zoya be able to level the scores?

Wait for my next update, I know I wanted to end it in this part, but now something interesting like this came which I had really for another story but merged here and thought it will be apt. Without some challenges this story wil be boring and it would be too easy for Asad to get this love. So what you guys think. Do tell me in the form of comments. Shall I convert this into a SS?

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Excellent update
Each words zoya said to asad was right I completly agree with her.
Love can't be made in a day
Also I believe every deserves one chance in there life. I am happy zoya gave a chance to asad
Ya it's right asad shouldn't get zoya so easily like in the show
I am enjoying each challenges between asya
I will be the most happy person if you turn this one in to ss
Also eager to know what happened in kbc & how much zoya won
Edited by Az07 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing !! 👏 love the cute challendges ! 😳
I want this as a SS 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update dear..
Loved asya convo..
Loved their cute challenges..
So asad is winning by one point..
Waiting for next part..
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Finally You update it.
Thanks for Update.
It was very nice and Interesting part.
The way Zoya explains why she wanted to came Asad(KSG) home,was so nice.
Zoya didn't give up Asad(KSG) easily,it was very nice,I just loves it.
ASYA(KABHI) Challenge was so interesting.
Asad(KSG) won first challenge,it was nice.
It will be nice you convert it into SS.
Please Update part soon,I am waiting here.
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(ASAD will be KSG ONLY,ASYA=KABHI ONLY,MISSING ASYA(KABHI) Very Much)
PRIYAKABHI.


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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome! :)
I'm loving the challenges! 😳
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago

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