AsYa SS: Going Back Thread 2 Epilogue page 35 07/06/2014

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aseela sha

@aseelashah

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

congo for the new thread dear.

Enjoy ur family time dear

The update was so touching

Zoya's diary made me cry😭

Poor girl how much she love him

And now she is getting his love but didnt recognize it

Pls update as soon as possible

Thanks for pm

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Alone111

@Alone111

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

That was awesome as usualll
I loved it
Superb prt

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shonayaa

@shonayaa

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Fab update thanx for the pm 😛

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sasir

@sasir

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

beautifully written

its amazing.

awesome.

spell bound.

did i ever tell u u r a wonderful n gifted writer.if not i will tell u now.

u r one of d best.

its heart touching.

loved it to core.

will be waiting eagerly for next update

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Gourav

@Shubh007

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Congratulations for new thread...👏

Update is amazing...👍🏼

Just love it...😊

Waiting egarly for nxt part so update soon...😃

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Sammy

@sammy4u

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

nice part dear

beautiful poem

its fine dear

enjoy the wedding

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Nim

@Rarepearl

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Hey Dear,

Congrats on the second thread.

This part was so so nice. I am glad Humi made this decision. It will be the best for both Asad & Zoe.

I feel bad for Asad for he has to go through so much for his one mistake that he committed in ignorance, but then that's Life for you. He has to walk down this path of life, alone, torn, betrayed & lost. But his selflessness will eventually heal his own heart once he sees Zoe recover & all his loneliness & broken heart will mend when she accepts him in his life. But this all is far away & painful for time being.

Zoe's words in her diary made my eyes moist. They seriously showed her earnest desire to be with Asad & expressed her deep love for him. It showed her inner battle, how she knew that her love wasn't reciprocated & might never be but still her heart couldn't accept it.

You've made all of this so so real. Its just how we feel. You are just amazing Dear.

My fav part was when Asad pulled her close to himself & kissed her hair after reading her diary. I feel that the betrayal, hurt that he feels will change his feelings towards Zoya into love.

I hope you get well soon & enjoy your bro's wedding.

See you later.

Love..