After all whats in a moustache Epilogue up

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KSG is Asad in all my fictions

First Shot - page 1

Second Shot - page 4

Third shot - page 10

Fourth shot - page 15

Fifth Shot - page 21

Sixth Shot - page 25

Epilogue - page 31

Asad's House Bhopal

Zoya :Asad please try and understand, I know you hate a moustache on your face but my Dad is obsessed with it. What to do, the day I declared that I m in love with a man, the first thing he asked was not your job, but do you own a splendid moustache?

Asad : Zoya please, this is matter of my choice, if that's your father's obsession, I can't help it, it's his problem, not mine

Zoya : Please Asad, otherwise how I will marry you, he wants only moustached son in laws.

Asad: You know what your Dad is crazy, he is gone nuts, after all what's in a moustache?

Zoya : The answer for that even I don't know, he thinks moustache is the mark of man

Asad: Bullshit

Zoya: You know aapi's hubby Anwar Farooqui, he didnt have a moustache, when appi's proposal went for him, my Dad forced him to keep one, which he is sincerely grooming till now whether he likes it or not

Asad: Do you expect me also to do the same? Then forget about it, I give you a choice, either me or your crazy dad obsession.

Zoya yelling: Assad, behave yourself, he is much senior to you in age, and you know what if you can't tender to such a small thing, how are you going to adjust after our marriage, there are so many things, so I guess let break up you go your way and I go my way. Its much better than a broken marriage.

Zoya was about to walk out that Asad yanked her back and she fell against his chest. He grabbed her hair to bring her close and kissed her on her lips. Zoya "mmm" "mmm"

Asad: don't say about going away from me I love you so much Zoya, I will find a way through; don't worry, to please your dad. Zoya : even I love you too, but what about Dad's obsession.

Zoya: Asad, there is no way, you have to grow one, even I don't like moustaches but what to do, he will not let me marry a man without a moustache. He had checked and inspected the moustache of jiju by pulling it before he married to see its not a fake one. So you cant fool him too with a fake one.

Asad: okay, I will temporarily grow a moustache for the marriage and then after wards I will take it off, then whenever I come before your abbu, I will fix a artificial one. Hows my idea?

Zoya: What if abbu comes to know about it? He will kill you for shaving that

Asad: Aha, he wont, how will a father make his daughter widow with his own hands

Zoya: Asad this is not funny, i m serious, you are going to do it for your whole lifetime?

Asad: But this is the only way through for our marriage and for your father's consent.

Zoya: I don't know where its going to end.

Asad: Dont worry, nothing will go wrong, I m not going to stay at your house after marriage, i will meet your abbu once in a month or so. So that will go well with a fake one too. He can't catch me and if at all I m caught, you are there na my personal drama queen. Zoya pouts.

Zoya: okay then we will select the shape of your moustache, a good one to impress my father.

Asad: Zoya is that really needed?

Zoya :yes very much, anyway you are going to grow one, so why not a stylish one?

Asad kept his hands on his forehead on the antics of his to be wife. Zoya called Asad to her I pad,

Zoya: Asad see this one, how is it? Asad: it looks like a woman's boobs, no way Zoya: wide eyed

Zoya: what about this? Asad: Chinese moustache, are you gone crazy zoya, what makes you think that I will adorn that, it looks like two strings of a pyjama.

Zoya: Okay tell me about this one? Asad : I don't want to look like Hitler

Zoya: What looklike Hitler you already are, but without a moustache.

Asad: oh so this is the opinion you hold about me see the truth is coming out slowly

Zoya whacked him on his arm : See this na Asad , how is this? Asad : looks like toilet brush, yuck

Zoya: how about this one? Asad : I would look like a dacoit adorning that

Zoya: Okay this? Asad: This looks like a birds's nest

Zoya: Asad please select one na, we have to decide which one to grow

Asad : I guess this one will be okay, its simple and plain and I don't need to maintain it too.

Zoya :Okay so this one decided. Finally you have selected one and you will meet my Dad right after one month, till then I will say something and manage the situation.

After one month at Bhopal (this pic shows his moustache not is hairstyle)


Asad came to Gaffur Ahmed Siddique's Mansion to claim his Zoya. He kept a hand on his moustache and checked it before he entered. He was escorted by Zoya. Zoya was do happy to see him.

Zoya to Gaffur: Dad he is Asad , Asad Ahmed Khan, he is a cardiac surgeon in AIMS. New Delhi.

Gaffur welcome him inside. He looked Asad from top to bottom and then keenly on his moustache.

Gaffur: Take you seat Asad. Zoya go and arrange for tea and snacks, and tell you mom too.

Asad : Good day sir, Zoya and I met in a seminar when she came to interview me and then slowly we bonded and then in turned into friendship and...

Gaffur completed for him : then into love, right.

Asad nodded. Gaffur was looking at him intently Asad knew that his eyes were on his moustache.

Gaffur: you like keeping moustaches Asad cooly : not like that, I don't have any obsession with moustache, sometimes i adorn it sometimes I shave...

Gaffur glared: Asad once you are married to Zoya you are not supposed to take it off.

Asad just nodded again. Gaffur: I don't like clean shaved guys, they don't look manly.

Gaffur: Moustache makes a man, you want to see how, come with me

Asad meekly followed him. Gaffur took him to an array of photos hanging on the walls of the mansion

Gaffur: This is Zoya's great grandfather,Janab Tayyib Mohammed Siddqui, his moustache had a handsome length of 10 cms on either side, see the grandeur of his face. Asad touched his own moustache and felt it very meagre in front of that. Gaffur move to next. This is Zoya's grandfather, Janab Jalal Nawaz Siddiqui, he has adorned a stylish moustache of his times, thick one, yet not too long, not too short. He had his own personal barber to trim and groom that in a particular shape. People took oath on his moustache, it was that perfect. Asad wiped his face now with his hanky. Gaffur moved to the next painting this is Zoya's uncle Janab Ali Mubarak Hussain, he was a great fan of Hilter so adorned his moustache. Then see me I don't have any stylish ones, but still I feel moustache is the mark of man. Even my elder son in law adorns a simple moustache. So now you do have too. Dont you think so Asad Ahmed Khan? He looked at him.

Asad: I don't think so, Janab Siddiqui Saab, that a man is known by his moustache ,but by his deeds.

Gaffur laughed: I respect your opinion but still that moustache of yours will be there after marriage, in no case you will take it out. That's tradition of men of this family either be it sons or son in laws Gaffur raised his hands and took a test of his moustache by pulling it. Dont mind it, not a fake one.

Asad sweated now. Thank God Zoya came with tea and snacks. Nikah was fixed. Nikah took place in a quiet ceremony. It was their wedding night and Gaffur announced that it was tradition of their family to hold wedding night in bride' house, So Asad had to agree for that.

Asya's Room

Zoya was all decked up in heavy jewellery and make up along with heavy dress full of gold and silver brocades, Her dupatta simply weighed 2 kilos. Her bridal lehenga supposed to be heirloom weighed 5 kilos. Zoya was damn tired. She was made to sit in the middle of the bed and wait for Asad miyaan to come. She was hell bored of adorning of all those heavy things. She wanted to yank them off and get into a light nighty or something which was more comfortable at night. At last that moment came, Asad entered the room after giving a huge sum of money to his sisters and brother. Zoya heard the creaking of the door and soon Asad was literally pushed in. Zoya giggled at him. Asad locked the door and proceede towards her.

Precap: Zoya : Asad, Your moustache is tickling me, please shave it now"

Asad : and what about your dad's obsession?

Zoya "do hell with that, I don't want our wedding night to be spoiled like this. Go and shave it or else I will do it for you"

So how was it? It was just a random writing which came to my mind. Please tell me whether I should continue or not by giving your likes and valuable comments.

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Az07 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
It's too cute
Continue
Very funny also
KSG is too cute here
asifiqbalsh thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res
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Interesting
Ghafoor obsessed to moustache
Asad & zoya married
Zoya ordered him to shave
Let's see how ghafoor react
Continue soon
Thanks
Edited by asifiqbalsh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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beautiful one anu..
bechara asad...
obsessed gafoor ...
and cute zoya. ..
loved them
Moochh nahi to kooch nahi...lol
continue soon
Divya.S.R thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#5
nice story.. a romcom types...
yaar Gaffur and his weird likes.. 😛
hehehee poor Asad had to grow a mush...🤣
various styles of mush huh!! 😆
now he is going to shave it... Gaffur what are you gonna do now?? 😆
can I get pm for further updates please.. 😊😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh God Anu it was soo funny😆
Guffi & his obsession 4 mustaches🤣
Asya fight over d issue was so cute
& then mustache selection was hilarious🤣
Guffi told Asad not 2 shave it off & Zoya want it off😲
now what will happen 2 Asad in d morning
updt nxt part soon Anu😃
i so want 2 read it😉🤣

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: aarzoo50

beautiful one anu..
bechara asad...
obsessed gafoor ...
and cute zoya. ..
loved them
Moochh nahi to kooch nahi...lol
continue soon



lolz i loved this line Arzoo Moochh nahi to kooch nahi...lol🤣🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Guffi moch dekh ke ladkon ko mardangi ka licence deta hai🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This specimen undoubtedly looks great with facial hair but a moustache 😒 that picture 🤣

Look forward to the next chapter! 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Az07

It's too cute
Continue
Very funny also
KSG is too cute here


I found that pic then i though may be i write a asya fiction on a moustached Asad
but it came out like this

anyway glad you liked it
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