Rehana hai tere dil mein: FS last part on pg 108

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Rehana hai tere dil mein: new asya FS

Part 1 below
Part 2 A on pg 15
Part 2 B on pg 27
Part 2C on pg 48
Part 3A on pg 61
Part 3B on pg 79
Part 3C on pg 91
Last part on pg 108

(This story starts after zoya planning to go back to New York & she declares it in front of khan family. Just before asad gave zoya an employment letter in DC )

Asad was too confused. Zoya is going back to New York. That's what he wanted from day 1 when zoya came into KV. But why he is disturbed with the thought that she won't be there in KV here after.He felt so frustrated. Even tough zoya is too messy & noisy he knows she has the heart of gold. She is innocent & naive. She is the most selfless person in this world. Her positivity & carefree attitude, her boldness & Indepentant nature, he has never seen in any other girl.
He knows he & zoya are extremely opposite to each other. For anything they can only argue never agree. So it's best that they stay apart. He felt severe pain in his heart. He remembered seeing zoya in dargha for the first time. The pain he felt when he saw her lifeless in mangalpur. It seems like his life had ended.
Is he love with zoya? No way! Aak never believes in love. He can never fall in love. That too with zoya. No it's impossible. May be this is just an infatuation. More like an attraction.

Same time in zoya's room

Zoya was also extremely upset. She came to Bhopal in search of her abbu but fate played a cruel game. Her abbu passed away years ago. In between these 2 months she had felt like KV is her own home. A place were she truly belongs. A home were she got a mother,sister & mr.khan she don't know who is he to her. A saviour? Or more than that. She knows even tough they both couldn't stand each other they both have strange feelings for each other. She knew they both like each other. If so then why he is not stopping her. Is he not in pain like her?
She went out to the garden. She saw asad coming opposite to her.
Zoya: you didn't sleep mr.khan?
Asad: no zoya.
Zoya: I has almost done my packing mr.khan. I don't know I feel extremely upset to leave this place & go.
Asad felt sad when he saw tears in zoya's eyes.
Zoya: it's really late mr.khan. You have to sleep. Good night.
Asad caught zoya's hand before she leave. She looked at him puzzled.
Asad: zoya. I don't know how to say. Do you remember the night when we went to the outskirts of city & accidentally we ate Bhang pakode. I didn't remember what happened that night after we came back. But slowly slowly it became clear for me. Due to the influence of Bhang we both shared our feelings for each other. Our fights, irritations, the support we give each other & even we agreed that we like each other.
Zoya: aap Kehna kya chahte ho mr.khan?
Asad: I don't zoya. I always wanted you to go away from here & from my life. But I don't when it's going to happen I feel miserable. The thought that I can't see you near me makes me suffocated. I don't know what's happening to me? Tell me zoya. What's happening?
Asad cupped zoya's face. She had tears.
Zoya: I too can't think of living away from you.
Asad smiled. He kissed on her tears. Then on her cheeks & then on her lips. Zoya too kissed him back.
Before they both could realise he lifted her & went to his room. They fell on the bed without breaking the kiss. They both poured out all there love for each other.

When it was early morning time both zoya & asad lied naked on each other's arms under the duvet. Zoya had tears on her eyes. Tears of satisfaction. She is in love with asad Ahmed khan. Yes they both are in love!

So should I continue?


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KaBhiKiBasanti thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res
unres

that was a lovely start
ab to zoya nahi jaegi!
finally they realized that they love each other
it was a nice start
cont soon
i loved the title alot
cont soinishetsy
do pm me!
Edited by riddhi1206 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice start...😊
cont soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh my god what a start👏
Asad realized his love😲
& now they r one😉😳
Zoya is satisfied but will it b enough 4 her 2 stop
& Asad will he regret now😲
excited 4 nxt part😳😃
awesome start👏
continue soon⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice start... . 😊
Continue soonl 😊
Edited by yumna.imad - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb start... 😊
Zoya's confusion on her feeling and Asad feel sad seeing her tears.. Awesome... 👏😳
And Finally both kinda realized their love 😃
waiting for more.. do continue soon... and can I get pm if you do send them out? 😳😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely start
Plz continue it
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome start dear.. Love it.. Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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omg asad is so expressive... unlike the emotionally challenged one🤣
hehe plzz update soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice start dear
loved it
i hope ab asad kuch na bolde

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