SaHil FF - The Phoenix - Chapter 8 - Page 14

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Silvy

@SilverBell

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Wow Amazing FF.
Sehar Is Here.
Interesting.

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SimplySmile

@SimplySmile

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Buddy, if you keep the updates coming I'll keep the comments coming,😉

It was so eventful😲,

I guess Sanam looks at Rehan as a good friend who helped her out and thats why she's very greatful to him while she has an attraction towards Aahil,

The scene with Aahil trying to get Sanam out of Rehaan's arms and him not letting go of her, I read like 5 times, I loved it,

You describe all the characters emotions very well👏

Naughty little Aahil there not giving back the anklet,

He is starting to get really possessive of Sanam which will NEVER get boring

AHHH the ending SEHER, EEEPPP

Excited already,

Update soon😃

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Nitya Suresh

@TheAutumnFizz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Three chapters in one go!!! Oh my god.. That's nice ;)

Loved all three of them!! Rehan found Seher!! Whoa.. Lets see what happens next!! Updates soon.. :)

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Yuks

@-Yuks-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Nice update. Nice entry of Seher

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wreeti

@wreeti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Very nice. I feel bad that rehaan or ahil's heart would break.

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fanraya

@fanraya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Wow, very beautiful story, loved it, please update soon, Eagerly waiting, please PM me if possible..

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TVD-IANcrazy

@TVD-IANcrazy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

OMG, how did I miss this before. Thanks to my friend Pragya who told me to read this amazing ff. And I am glad she did. 🤗

You are amazing man. I just loved loved every bit of it. So beautifully written. Just finished all parts in one go. 😆

I loved every nickname you gave to Dr. Aydin, Sanam, Aahil. They were hilarious and so perfect. 😆 I loved how Aahil was going restless and all jealous seeing Rehan and Sanam together having nice time. I loved how he was dealing with his inner turmoil and finding some distractions. 😆 Urghhh, I loved everything about it. Brilliant.

Do continue soon. 😊

Edited by TVD-IANcrazy - 11 years ago