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Posted: 11 years ago

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rakshaanra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#842

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DevikaRavish

@DevikaRavish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#843

That was a cool update Aashna...First scene how Zoya kept on blabbering without realizing that he had answered his phone was so very cute...He avoided answering but asked what she remembered and later she realized it was his clothes she was in ...great...He shouted back at her telling that he does not want to deal with her tantrums and to grab her husband ...She snapped her phone which hurt him and she got hurt because of his words... cool..😊

What each other do or tell no doubt has a great impact on the other...😉

So the culprit is out... It is Shahid.. Asad's presence in Zoya's house does have a reason I feel... since Shahid is on his way to harm her...

Asad handled Ms. Farooqui very well in her house... The way he shouted back and make her understand about the previous night...and finally they spoke about Rihaan.. Asad thinks that she is being so very demanding which is why Rihaan is backing off from her...and he gave her advice towards the end but I feel it is gonna happen with them and not with Rihaan...😊

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Young And Horny!

@Perfectionist2

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Posted: 11 years ago

#844

Ok first things first- I know it is not Shahid.

Second- I have never connected with your Zoya.
This was just another tedious tirade from her end.

Asad was being the appropriate gentle man. But I really
Didn't like his last piece of advice. Privacy of bedroom as much as his intention n discomfort was evident I have a sour taste for anyone who says that. He fell from divine grace by giving bedroom advice.

I liked the bickering and very well scripted but I thought the 2 steps forward they took when zoya was there in his room drunk. They seem to take two steps back here.
Maturity was missing for me.

I throughly enjoyed the read Aashna you are a fantastic writer but now I am confused where this is going.

I am sure you will keep this interesting.

So you have me glued.
I have the flu so I am a little late here.

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aseela sha

@aseelashah

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Posted: 11 years ago

#845

Ashna its wonderful update yaar

Zoya & Asad's outburst is superb

Asad lose his calm ,

Zoya needed that scold from Asad

Only Asad can handle her

Both hurts cause of each others behavior or words

Zoya had some serious issues.Why cant she discuss the matters calmly

Asad also lost his patience

Now SHAHID is coming in the picture

And he also think about Najma and thinking to harm Zoya

But i know Shahid is not the real culprit

Yaar pls update soon

Thanks for pm

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Heena

@aarzoo50

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Posted: 11 years ago

#846

wonderful update ...
zoya is zoya... ye b pata nahi chala ki saamne bande ne call recieve krli...
asad is fed up with her screaming n shouting n accusing...
Bus aj mai bolunga aur tum sunogi...lol
he reached her apartment ...
and kya bola boss...
zoya is totally dumbstruck...
and asad is amused... bhai afterall its a rare sight vd zoya... stuttering...
is there another attack on way for zoya... or should i say another saving affair for asad...
plz continue soon...