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mrs. varun dhawan but you can call me fari. :)

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

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Posted: 11 years ago

It was awesome & heart touching
If he is alive, she is his life
& both indeed each other life

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

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Posted: 11 years ago

Oh goodness gracious me!

This is so beautiful! How very endearing and so so so heartfelt.

Beautiful words just flow huh! You're amazing! And truly talented!

I'm illuminated by this grand piece of exquisite writing!

More!

I want more!

Thank you so very much for thinking of us as worthy a reader of your amazing work!

Mwah mwah!

FaRz

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SH7_Sunny

@SH7_Sunny

Elite

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Posted: 11 years ago

Ressy is the messy for the Great Lionel Messi 😆

Fari glad that u wrote something nahi toh ur SS Serendipity is not seeing the light of update 😆

It was an awesome piece of One Short 👏 😳 😃

Edited by --SH7_Sunny-- - 11 years ago

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Mehreeeen

@SurbhikiPankhi

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Posted: 11 years ago

This is so beautiful! <3333.

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hey Fari am glad you thought of updating. This was simply superb.

Beautiful use of words, simple, elegant, meaningful and heart touching.

Loved it. 👏

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AsYaLover..xD

@AsYaLover..xD

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

Hey thanks for the pm.. luvd it 😃 👏

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Tanvi

@KulfiBai

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

FARICAKES!

WHAT THE HELL DID I JUST READ?! 😳

A fabulously beautiful piece of writing is WHAT. OMFG.

YOU TALENTED BAMF I LOVE YOU. AND YOUR WRITING. AND YOUR BRAIN AND YOUR MIND AND YOUR IMAGINATION. AND YOUR ENGLISH TEACHER. FOR TEACHING YOU TO WRITE WITH SUCH IMPECCABLE GRAMMAR. AND AWESOMENESS.

I loved the whole she is the sunshine to his darkness thing :D

You liar, there's no way you're only 13

Or wait. HAVE YOU TURNED 14 YET?!

STILL. GOSH.

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

FARI!!!

Please tell me you lied. Tell you're not 13!? Or well it's been a year so maybe you grew 😆

BUT SERIOUSLY WOMAN! Your ideas, your descriptions and the way you compared him and her as darkeness and light was just..UGH!

AMAZING! MIND BLOWING!!

I LOVE YOUR WRITING!

I think you're an adult in the body of a 13 year old. SO LUCKY! Get to be so young and still write like a pro and touch so many hearts.

Hehe I know this comment is a tad all over the place. But hey it wouldn't be a comment worthy of you it wasn't showcasing just how ECSTATIC I was to read this piece 😳