ASYA FF : THE DARK SHADOWS THREAD 2 Chapter 21/79 25th jun 15

radadolcevida

@radadolcevida

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Posted: 10 years ago

#511

good to see this story back and what an update, beautiful one.

First , I didn't like the end, because it was TOO SHORT for those who love Asya like me. Arrgh, why did you stop here? 😆 I was almost yelling when you stop at this point, it was so intense *sigh*

The progression of Asad's feeling was really beautiful painted here and what to say about the end, the cherry on the cake, he was in love and for a change, he wasn't scared to say and to recognize it.

but the beginning gave me shiver, Asad's belong to criminal group and he will maybe fall in Zoya's end, even if I know that the end will be sad and I hate sad ending,however, I can't stop myself from reading your story, it's gripping one.

I don't know how you will manage for the upcoming chapter but I guess it will be denial from her but from his side, he will trust her more and more and he will be vulnerable. And this will be his end. So Sad for Asad 😭 (this is how I imagine your story).

Anyway, hope to see the next chapter soon.

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Gourav

@Shubh007

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Posted: 10 years ago

#512

Awesome Update...👏

Just Love It...😊

Every Scene Is Mind-Blowing...👍🏼

Update Next Part Soon...😃

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Amin21Khpulwak

@Amin21Khpulwak

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Posted: 10 years ago

#513

wow

its just great to have an update of your ff

I was thinking you leave it discontinue

but feels good to have you😉

ok about the update

who said you are not good at writing romantic scenes yaar

it was out standing

wonderfuwonderfully written👏

zoya - haider convo was so emotional

felt really bad for zoya😭

hope before things get worse asad at least give zoya hints about what he feels for her.

and who the hell is helping the system😲

I think before zoya doing anything asad will misunderstand her and instead of this helper he will pumish poor zoya😭

please I know its a dark story

but at least give some happy asya scenes before all that emotional ones.

so asad did accept he loves zoya right😲👏

the last scene was so so lovely

hope it remains longer 😊

really enjoyed reading this update yaar

love it

do update asap

eagerly waiting for next

and little longer one😉

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Amin21Khpulwak

@Amin21Khpulwak

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Posted: 10 years ago

#514

good to see this story back and what an update, beautiful one.

First , I didn't like the end, because it was TOO SHORT for those who love Asya like me. Arrgh, why did you stop here? 😆 I was almost yelling when you stop at this point, it was so intense *sigh*

The progression of Asad's feeling was really beautiful painted here and what to say about the end, the cherry on the cake, he was in love and for a change, he wasn't scared to say and to recognize it.

but the beginning gave me shiver, Asad's belong to criminal group and he will maybe fall in Zoya's end, even if I know that the end will be sad and I hate sad ending,however, I can't stop myself from reading your story, it's gripping one.

I don't know how you will manage for the upcoming chapter but I guess it will be denial from her but from his side, he will trust her more and more and he will be vulnerable. And this will be his end. So Sad for Asad 😭 (this is how I imagine your story).

Anyway, hope to see the next chapter soon.

I hate sad endings too specially when its about asya 😭

but these dark stories are just worth it 😉

and who knows if eshita give it a happily ever after ending 😆

what say dear😉

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Amin21Khpulwak

@Amin21Khpulwak

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Posted: 10 years ago

#515

good to see this story back and what an update, beautiful one.

First , I didn't like the end, because it was TOO SHORT for those who love Asya like me. Arrgh, why did you stop here? 😆 I was almost yelling when you stop at this point, it was so intense *sigh*

The progression of Asad's feeling was really beautiful painted here and what to say about the end, the cherry on the cake, he was in love and for a change, he wasn't scared to say and to recognize it.

but the beginning gave me shiver, Asad's belong to criminal group and he will maybe fall in Zoya's end, even if I know that the end will be sad and I hate sad ending,however, I can't stop myself from reading your story, it's gripping one.

I don't know how you will manage for the upcoming chapter but I guess it will be denial from her but from his side, he will trust her more and more and he will be vulnerable. And this will be his end. So Sad for Asad 😭 (this is how I imagine your story).

Anyway, hope to see the next chapter soon.

I hate sad endings too specially when its about asya 😭

but these dark stories are just worth it 😉

and who knows if eshita give it a happily ever after ending 😆

what say dear😉

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Amin21Khpulwak

@Amin21Khpulwak

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Posted: 10 years ago

#516

Sorry it got two times posted😊

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#517

Woww...it was an amazing update!!

Finally gathered time to read the update!!

What say...it was really nice!!

Thank you so much for the pm!! 😊

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Javeria

@Surbhiholic55

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Posted: 10 years ago

#518

Beautiful update. Loved the way you described whole rain scene so beautifully <3
And banjara perfectly suiting the situation. Love it
Continue soon and please also update your other story "offer can not refuse" one

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