ASYA FF : THE DARK SHADOWS THREAD 2 Chapter 21/79 25th jun 15

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Posted: 11 years ago

#101

Babe 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 take this!! I LOVE THE DARK SHADOWS

That's all I wanna say.

About the part, Asad 😡 go die.

N man, zzoya surely has guts to stop asad for the first time.

Continue soon!!

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Scarlet

@buttercups2020

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Posted: 11 years ago

#102

Hello 😳

Two quick updates!! 😃

M I great? or M I great??? 😆

Thank you every1 for liking the last part and hey, COMMENT!! 😡

and those who did!! Thankie mankie!! 🤗

This update is for my baby Riddhi! M sorry sweet, I should have put an age barrier in the last part but I thought it wasn't that adult. M sorry you couldn't read but you still commented!! I so love you for this!!!! So this part is SPECIALLY for you, I hope you'll like it!!

AND I hope every 1 will like it! 😊

THE DARKER SHADE OF RED : PART 2, A CONSPIRACY!

Zoya stood stunned for a whole minute, with asad still clenching her shoulder. Her sobs were finally heard when her mind comprehended what had happened. Her eyes shed the tears of anger and her heart ached in rejection.

" I SAID LEAVE ZOYA.!"

He screamed.

She took a step back, his voice was so loud and thunderous that she no longer heard what he said, just the way he said it, made her shiver. He had become a whole different person within a blink of eye. His eyes that had always been her weakness, now changed to a dark and gloomy black, that scared her to death. His teeth clenched together and veins protruding.
Zoya wiped her tears and took small steps to go back.

"you are a heartless beast"

she whispered. He heard.

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HEADQUATERS :

A man walked towards the room which read 'head Office'. He looked through the glass doors and saw officer aaryan talking to someone so he sat in one of the armchairs outside the room. He looked around the plush waiting room and saw a trophy case. Well it was like really very long and was filled with trophies. No wonder they were the most efficient police force in the history of states.
Aryan came out of the room and shook his hand.

"Aaryan, M haider sheikh, Undercover agent that was reporting to you."

"Aah mr. sheikh, its good to see you. I must say, m really impressed."

Aaryan smiled and gestured him to come inside.

" so what you have in store today"

"Do you remember junaid?"

Haider asked.

"Yeah, the one who once worked for khan. His men are under arrest and the force is after him now. It wont be long to catch him. Why?"

Aryan replied. His eyebrows scrunched up in confusion.

"Because Junaid and khan, both are now after mill's jewels, which is now shifted to Manhattan by the government . Its been heard that khan had an eye on the jewels over past three years now. There's something very catastrophic he has planned for the city which is yet to be known. But if informers are to be believed, junaid has already sent his men who are watching khan's every step. If we somehow manage to catch those people, it will be easier to reach khan .Keeping your sister there, I guess did not do much help as khan has completely cutoff all her communication with people outside his mansion and office. She's allowed to go to college once in a week that too, two of his men are always with her. We hardly get any information out of her. Do you really think zoya is safe there.?"

Aaryan heard him and gave him a very patient smile. The man was surely good at his work.

"Here, officer sheikh. Come, have a look on my PC"

Haider's eyes widened in shock when a looked at the screen. His Sharp intake of breath made Aryan chuckle. Haider did Unconscious twitch of fingers.

"Isnt it Khan mansion? How did you do that?"

" M an old player offer. And, its zoya that we are talking about right? She's my sister. Risks run in our blood. I asked her if she needs to come out but she said she's doing fine there."

"But that doesn't answer my question officer siddiqui. Cameras in khan mansion? How?"

"Do you remember I once sent ayaan to meet zoya few days back?"

"That was months back sir"

"yes, so the chip and the hidden cameras accompanied the letter. I don't know how, but zoya did it. She did exactly the way I asked her to do and so, we'll be the first one to know about khan's every single action. And this explains why zoya is safe there! But that's not end here. Its time to execute the plan haider. You know what you need to do right? Here's your fake ID and your visiting card"

"what about khan?"

"Zoya will take good care of him. You don't worry" Aaryan smirked.

"You are cunning man.!"

"That's my work haider."

...

Zoya rushed to her room and crashed on the bed. Her damns finally gave in and she cried. Cried hysterically. To say she was hurt, would be an insult to her feelings. She felt devastated. The harshness asad threw on her cut her heart so deeply that she felt chocked, she felt dead. She was no S*** for heaven's. She had never kissed anyone, leave having S**. Zoya was angry on herself for letting herself lose for the man who thought of her so low. He really thought her care had intensions behind? Damn it she cared because she's not inhuman like him! She cried feeling disgusted of herself. She dreaded what would have happened if asad didn't stop. She needed to get herself clean. Washing herself, she tried to get off every damn kiss from her body, which obviously wasn't possible. Not physically, not mentally. Her mind flashed ever sec. what they did in the room and she felt appalled. She scrubbed her face and it was then when she saw it. Zoya gasped loudly. Asad had marked her.

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Please NOTE : This is the last update till 28th of this month as i have my last exam scheduled on 28th. Wish me luck and press the like buttons and leave comments 😊

Edited by eshita.kabhi - 11 years ago

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aYASHIKA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#103

Yay!!! I m first [:D/] ...
Lovely update 👏 👏 👏
Feeling really bad for zoya 😭 😭 😭 ...
Cameras are installed in asad house 😲 😲 ...
Asad marked zoya 😳 😳
Update soon...
All the best for ur exams 👍🏼

Edited by aYASHIKA - 11 years ago

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Basanti 🦄

@KaBhiKiBasanti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#104

oh thank u so much fr the dedication!
i knw i read the highlights bt commenting may make ppl think that i dnt have any problem , i m quite young , just 13 ,so fr that it was young
no doubt i love dark stories n urs is one of my fav
well forget that
it was like i was just WOW!
i mean such a big game is being played !
u knw i read this one by u on myeduniya, i m nt a member bt just read!
it was something different there
bt wen i read it here i was srsly just
its excellent
such a master mind u knw!
realy!
are gadha h asad ek no. ka!
i am doubtful is he having personality disoders?
god knws!
poor zoya
bt that was so good
haider n aryan's convo!
i really never excpected this
letter having chips
wonderful
i m really loving the mystery here!
so awesome
one of the best mystery one
its so intrudging
muwah love u fr the update
even zoya
she can never b [redicted
she has actually played master mind
thank u so much fr dedicating one of my fav chappy till nw!
i really loved it
superb
wonderul
amazing
awesome
lovely
fabulous
fantastic
i really loved it alot
admiring it so much
believe me i read it 3 times!
loved it so much
thank u so much fr dedication
loved it
love u !
update son
n yep all d best!
rock ur exams!

Edited by riddhi1206 - 11 years ago

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Basanti 🦄

@KaBhiKiBasanti

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#105

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Basanti 🦄

@KaBhiKiBasanti

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#106

This update is for my baby Riddhi! M sorry sweet, I should have put an age barrier in the last part but I thought it wasn't that adult. M sorry you couldn't read but you still commented!! I so love you for this!!!! So this part is SPECIALLY for you, I hope you'll like it!!

my reactions when i read this:

first of ol genuinely i read it 6 7 times
i was so happy
i was so eager to read that i kept my brunch aside n just concentrate here
hm with full attention
i jumped so much
i reAlly loved it alot
actually i avoid mature parts
n fr 13 yr ol its mature actually!
bt i really loved it
awesome part\
thank u so much