AsYa (KaBhi) FF Chance One In A Milion Thread #3

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Aishu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Di, teaser is interesting

But when will u update ???

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Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

oh no asad... when u going to come out...

yes zoya u need to slap him...

nice teaser...

update soon

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Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Chahanya
Teaser 1 Chapter 12

"Suniye, abhi thodi der pehle jo aapne kahaa wo..."😕 😕 "Jee tehzeeb ke baare mein..."😆 "Nahi, wo nahi uss se pehle."😲 "Bacche ke kasoor ka..." 😕 "Nahi uss se pehle!" 😕 Zoya said irritatedly.😡 😡 "Mere bedroom mein kya bol gaye the aap?" 😡 "Jee, yaad nahi." "Kya aur kaise yaad nahi hai? Bolte bolte kaise bacche ki tarah sisak sisak kar ro rahe the!😡 Bole the na ki aap doosri baar apne baache ko kho nahi sakte." 😡 Asad looked down guiltily.😭 "Boliye, bole the ki nahi?" 😭 "Jee." "Toh ye doosri baar' ka kya matlab hai?" Asad was still standing with his eyes frozen towards the floor. 😆 😆He said while stil looking downwards. "Sorry, doosri baar aisa nahi boloonga." 😆 😆 😆 Zoya was irritated and angry to the very core.😡 😡 She felt like slapping Asad out of his yes, no, sorry mode.😆 😆 😡

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Ahida

@noya28

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

congrats chahat for new thread
but it is confusing yaar , so when are u going to update the next part yaar, update soon.😭

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zynia890

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Congratz for the next thread!!

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nilusoni

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

amazing teaser

plz pm me for updates

continue soon

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het27

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Chahanya
Teaser 1 Chapter 12

"Suniye, abhi thodi der pehle jo aapne kahaa wo..." "Jee tehzeeb ke baare mein..." "Nahi, wo nahi uss se pehle." "Bacche ke kasoor ka..." "Nahi uss se pehle!" Zoya said irritatedly. "Mere bedroom mein kya bol gaye the aap?" "Jee, yaad nahi." "Kya aur kaise yaad nahi hai? Bolte bolte kaise bacche ki tarah sisak sisak kar ro rahe the! Bole the na ki aap doosri baar apne baache ko kho nahi sakte." Asad looked down guiltily. "Boliye, bole the ki nahi?" "Jee." "Toh ye doosri baar' ka kya matlab hai?" Asad was still standing with his eyes frozen towards the floor. He said while stil looking downwards. "Sorry, doosri baar aisa nahi boloonga." Zoya was irritated and angry to the very core. She felt like slapping Asad out of his yes, no, sorry mode.

Nice teaser

BTW when will you update???

Agar jalidi nahi kiye toh teaser mein jo Zoya ke emotions hain wo mere ho jaayenge

Update soon yaar

I feel here Asad is like a child n Zoya needs to cajole him and use her wife card she uses every time

Jaldi I am waiting