AsYa FF: Not Mine to Have *UPD*CHAPT.6 on pg.45 (18-9-14)

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Priya_KABHI

@PriyaKABHI

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#161

Thanks for Update.

I am sorry for lately commenting you due to my Internet have some problem.

It was very nice part.

Zoya introduced Asad(KSG) to hr family and the way they treated him was very nicely explained.

What happened to Zoya ,Why she was crying?I thought The engagement was broke.

The way Zoya hugged Asad(KSG) was so nice.

Please update next part soon,I am waiting here.

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(ASAD will be always KSG ONLY,ASYA=KABHI ONLY)

PRIYAKABHI.

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mrs. varun dhawan but you can call me fari. :)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#162

Did her engagement break?

^Lol, that's really the first thing I thought when I read that she was crying. 😆

Anyways, GREAT update! Asad is just too attracted to Miss Farooqui's irresistible beauty. 😳 The spider part was cute, and definitely something Zoya would do. 😆

Waiting for the next part! <3 :)

-Fari.

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HoneySuckle

@HoneySuckle

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Posted: 11 years ago

#163

wait what? ur not gonna tell us why Zoya was sad??????????? nooo lol great chapter!!! i love readin your stories

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piksg

@piksg

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Posted: 11 years ago

#164

soo marriage broken ... yupiee (hopefuly)

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Prashni Singh

@-SilverSparkle-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#165

Three chapters into this FF and the 3rd one was exceptionally outstanding. ⭐️

"The smile that lit her face was worth it and she clasped his hand his hers pulling him through the crowd..."

"She was still hugging him tightly and just for a few forbidden seconds he let himself enjoy her arms around him and forgot that this shouldn't be happening. His hands on her shoulders drifted down and rested against her back rubbing soothing circles to calm her."

"he was her boss not her teddy bear?"

The portrayal of the interactions and emotions were fabulous.

Look forward to the development hereafter. 😳

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TaiLung

@TaiLung

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#166

loved it

but dd the marriage happen?

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shivbhan13

@shivbhan13

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#167

Just loved loved loved the story so far and cant wait for it to unfold. I love your style of writing and the humor laced dialogues. Simply superb!!!!! 👍🏼