ASYA OS: THE PROPOSAL - 21/04/2014

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sara..

@BelleAme

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Posted: 11 years ago

#201

Wow navi an os 😳

V ll read at night

Res for now...

😃

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NAVI55

@NAVI55

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Posted: 11 years ago

#202

Originally posted by: pinky06
Wow navi an os 😳

V ll read at night

Res for now...

😃

Hey Pinky😃

I will be looking forward to your comments

You are always so delightful

But be honest and tell me if it was a bit to weird...

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sara..

@BelleAme

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Posted: 11 years ago

#203

Navi navi navi this os was just wow

Hay so romantic*proporsal in a bathroom*...perfect ;)

I loved the way zoya was blabbering and najma told everything to Asad...lol

And finally he said so many sentences beyond woh actually..

I say we do it...zoya n al of us have gutter minds ...lol...

Omg tanveer hit by a bus...rofl...I like the comic element u added

Glad gaffur dint listen to anyone...
Even if meant 2 unhappy ladies..and I know for a fact If women r unhappy how cruel life could be..lol..

Anddd even endless shopping and suicide threats dint work..it's the first time m liking gaffur for staying fixed to his decision

Lovely os navi..awesome as usual...I like the romance filled update..and this os was truly romantic...

Keep writing..and update ur ss.. :)

Love
Pinky

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 11 years ago

#204

Navi u need 2 continue this OS😃

It should have part 2 what say😉

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Alone111

@Alone111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#205

Me too want another prt..
Plz continue...

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Aditi/Swathi

@CHOCOSWATHI

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Posted: 11 years ago

#206

so sorry for late rreply

i read this os just today😒

lovely and hilarious os

sunny bhai kidnapped Surbhi🤣

when did pinny became Don that too under world don😆😆

this was supposed to be serious matter but i was laughing imaging pinny as don...such a comedy scene🤣

zoya is a girl dreamt about prince charming,proposal,dating,blah..blah😳

but ended with boring asad😆

he is not though😉😆

good job by najma👏😆

proposal in washroom that too ladies wash room🤣🤣

we can expect that too😆

finally proposal happened

awesome work apri👏

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#207

Fantastic OS Navi! 👏

Totally loved it! ❤️

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#208

Originally posted by: NAVI55

😆😆🤣

Hello Ji😉😆

How are you?

Thank you for reading and commenting😳

I am so glad that you liked this piece😳

Bathroom Proposals😆 I hope it doesn't really happen...It will be just so weird😆

Lets keep this one to fictions only😆

Butterflies and gas...almost the same thing😆

Hello Navi Ji...😉😆

i am fine ji.. WBU?? 😳

ha ha... that's definitely going to be awkward... i would never want my would be fiance to be caught in a ladies' washroom, that too proposing to me 😆🤣

is it true the other way round too?? 😉😲😆

Edited by BeYourself - 11 years ago

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NAVI55

@NAVI55

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Posted: 11 years ago

#209

Originally posted by: BeYourself

Hello Navi Ji...😉😆

i am fine ji.. WBU?? 😳

ha ha... that's definitely going to be awkward... i would never want my would be fiance to be caught in a ladies' washroom, that too proposing to me 😆🤣

is it true the other way round too?? 😉😲😆