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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for spams, continue spams next update after 105, can u???
AsYa FF-Not meant for love ??

credits: niya n reema di (thanks)
WARNING:" voilence in update."
CHAPTER 5 A

asad ran to zoya's room to find just empty room. Zoya already had left with naaz n amaan.
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zoya:"hum apko taqleef ni de skte" she replied fr amaan's offer to stay with him.
amaan:"zoya me tumhare vhai jesa hun na." he cupped her face.
zoya:"bhaijaan." she broke, she missed his brother haider, her life. Amaan hugged her. Naaz smiled.
naaz:"lekin sirf tb tk jb tk hume koi ghar na mile ok" amaan agreed n left with them.
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after 3 days...
asad went to outhouse
asad saw the bedsheet, creeches were visible of their love making. Asad broke down.
asad:"chutki mujhe maaf kr do laut aao" he cried wen his sobs were heard by haider. He came to outhouse.
haider:"asad ap yahan aise kya kr re he" asad turned then haider realised he was crying taking zoya's pic.
haider:"chutki mil jaegi maih ap usse itni mohbt krte he bin ause dekhe" asad's mind stick to their 1 meet, her eyes created magic on him.
asad:"kbi ni aegi vo mene use brbd kr dia" haider grew with confusion. Dilshad was standing out.
haider:"mtlb" asad narated everything, haider past stuck to him
flashback 30 days ago
shireen:"vo tumhe chorke chali gai haider, bht dur, islie keh ri hun mere khatir mehnoor se nikaah kr lo" haider was unable to accept that his love had left him.
haider:"ammi meri naaz jarur aegi"
shireen:"nai aegi vo dekhna, meri zoya kya gai sbki zindagi khtm si ho gai, haider tere nikaah ke bahane zoya to aegi" haider's eyes went moist at thought of zoya.
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now
dilshad went in shock at evil mind of his son.
haider came to his senses, clenched his jaws n punched asad hard.
haider:"meri behn ko haath lagaya" he kicked his face with his leg"tujhe me jaan se maar dunga" he kicked him hard n asad's back hit to bed hard, he moaned in pain.
dilshad only stood their with jaws clenched.
bt being a mother she made a call:" hello mehnoor(asad's said sister) beta asad ko sambhalne aja" all this she could say.
mehnoor lived in outskirts of city alone, she packed to come to bhopal.
***************
haider clutched his hair n hit his head on wall, asad dint protested just smiled as wanted to be punished.
haider:"meri chutki ki izat ka ye sila dia tumne use" he draged him to srairs n mercilessly. Asad hited hard
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Posted: 11 years ago
CHAPTER 5 B
neither zoya nor naaz was happy by moving here n there. They were in search of a house to shed them. It was the 3 day again hopelessly they returned to amaan's place
amaan:"zoya himmat mt haro sb achcha hoga" he cupped her face.
zoya:"lekin kese bhaijaan"
naaz:"itni asani se me asad ko jeetne nai dungi" she sat next to zoya "use maut bhi nai aegi jb vo chahega, tere saath hue har galat ka badla usse me jarur lungi zoya" zoya hugged naaz crying.
amaan:"asad ki krtut uske ammi abbu ko me btaunga" he clenched his jaws.
zoya:"mujhe kisi ko saza ni deni, mujhe sirf ghar jana he bhai ke pass" she cried.
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rashid:"mere bete ko haath kese lagaya tumne" he shouted on haider seeing asad in pathetic condition.
haider:"apke iss behaya bete ne meri chukti ki izat li he, me ise jaan se maar dunga" haider again tightly slapped him.
rashid:"ye kya bakwas kr re ho" he was abt to slap haider wen dilshad stoped him.
dilshad:"aj nai asad ke abbu, ye nalayak tha me chup rhi, isne kbi hmari izat ni ki mene kuch ni kaha, magar aaj ye ek hevaan he, meri kokh ko aj isne ganda kr dia" she slapped asad. "isne khud qubool kia he apna gunaah, sochie ek bhai ki halat kya rhi hogi"she turned to haider "ise vhale hi jaan se maar do, ye ammi mud ke nai dekhegi" she left with tears n anger.
rashid:"kahin jaake mar ja asad, hume baksh, allah jaane kaunse gunaah ki saza he tu" he too left.
asad:"haider, mera yakin kr mujhe nai pta tha vo chutki he" he holded his legs.
haider:"ya allah agar vo chutki ni hoti to tu us ladki ki bdnaami ka maza leta, sharam kr asad" he kicked hum n left.
asad supported him n went out.
rain drops poured his blood stains. He was alone. Yes all alone, for his rubbish act.
asad:"allah isse bhi jyada dard de mujhe, itna ki me is dard ke niche mar jaun, meri ammi ne mujhse muh fer lia, abbu ne mar jaane ko kaha, taqdir ne ishq dia, magar mene use khud se bht dur kr dia" he cried hard. Pain was more now.
a girl supported him.
asad:"mehnoor tu yahan" the girl holded his arms.
mehnoor:"bhai kaha tha tujhe to jb teri ye halat he to mene to ana hi tha" she dint told that dilshad had told her to support him fr her sake.
asad:"me toot chuka hun noor,," he hugged her.
mehnoor:"chal mere ghar" he quietly stood up n left with him.
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haider:"mohbt, nai hoti, aj meri chutki se jo insaan mhbt ka dawa krta tha usi ki zindagi tabah kr gaya." he holded his wallet "me tumhe aj bhi nai bhula paya naaz, lekin tumne mujhe apne fayde ke lie chor dia, lekin me dard me nai rahunga meri chutki ke milte hi me wappis jaake mehnoor se nikaah kr lunga" he cried.
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naaz:"majburi thi haider kash tum samaj paate, zoya ko jb dekha wahan jaan gai thi ki vo tumhari behn he tbhi use wahan se nikalna chaha, apni mohbt ka ehsaan chukana chaha, magar me haar gai" zoya overhears this.
zoya:"appa ap or bhai..."naaz turned n went in shock.
naaz:"zoya vo me..."
zoya:"apa kuch mt kahie vhaijaan ke paas jaate hi me apki safai dungi" she hugged her.
*********
amaan was watching tv me felt abang on door.
he opened it n saw a princess image of mehnoor.
mehnoor:"vo apke paas 1 aid hoga, me aj hi aai hun apke pados me, mere bhai ka accident ho gaya he" she smiled.
amaan:"ji me laata hun" he went in.
mehnaar:"allah kitna handsome he ye, agar meri sagai ni hui hoti to isse nikaah..." she stopped as she saw zoya coming out.
mehnoor:"sunie" zoya turned."ap unki begum..." she asked n hoped fr a no.
zoya:"nai nai, vo mere bhai he"
she relaxed, amaan handed her 1 aid n she left.
zoya:"unhone 1 aid kyun manga tha"
amaan:"unka bhai ghayal he" zoya's heart unknowingly felt a pang.
***********
precap: fight of mehnoor n amaan. Confrontation of asya
i hope u liked new character n concept. Let me clear it may look a bit confusing bt slowly n gradually things will became clear.
for pms buddy me
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res
unres

dear tht was gud nd i like it also...

Haider's anger was Justified..
So rashid nd dillu's..

But i just can't imagine asad in tht position..

So naaz was haider's love intrst nd aman's x..
Nd hw is tht possible..
Explain me plz..
Nd haider mehnoor se nikhaah karne wala tha..
Jo asad k behen nd aman k paane karrahi hai..

Bahut share revelation hue hai in dis prt..


How sweet naaz was..
She knew who zoya was..
Thts y she protected her nd nw also..

Does aman stillloves naaz?
Thy bth haider nd aman knw naazs truth..
Tht she was a prostitute..

Continue soon
Edited by gowtu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful update...this pain is nothing in front of that inflicted on zoya...
Interesting new characters...
Cont soon
Alone111 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
I ddnt expect dis..
U updtd so early..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Read 3 to 5

Really nice

Niyatiswaragini thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: gowtu

I ddnt expect dis..
U updtd so early..

r u making my fun :(.. Was it early :p
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: KaBhilove07

r u making my fun :(.. Was it early :p


loll dear..
Tht wasn't wht i mean.
I just asked u abt the updt on other ff's thread r8..
Nd u said it ll after wednesdy only..
Thts y..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: gowtu

I ddnt expect dis..
U updtd so early..

ajkal bht busy hun yr... Khane tk ki fursat nai :p now i m eating like a buffalo... Lol
Niyatiswaragini thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: gowtu

Res
unres

dear tht was gud nd i like it also...

Haider's anger was Justified..
So rashid nd dillu's..

But i just can't imagine asad in tht position..

So naaz was haider's love intrst nd aman's x..
Nd hw is tht possible..
Explain me plz..
Nd haider mehnoor se nikhaah karne wala tha..
Jo asad k behen nd aman k paane karrahi hai..

Bahut share revelation hue hai in dis prt..


How sweet naaz was..
She knew who zoya was..
Thts y she protected her nd nw also..

Does aman stillloves naaz?
Thy bth haider nd aman knw naazs truth..
Tht she was a prostitute..

Continue soon

thankss dear ... Everything will be clear in upcoming updates :)

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