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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
Awesome updte
i hope asad is not humera fiance
asad n zoya hug was cute
con soon
cannt wait to read more
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
lovely update...
aaaww the were so cute in childhood...
asad proposed zoya when he was only 10...
plz continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: asyafreva

Hi guys...! I'm back with the 2nd chapter...! I seriously still cant believe with the response i've got! I'm so overwhelmed with the love i've got from you all...! Hope you guys like it! I would like to thank Farz for her editing and constant motivation and also Saima di, without her encouraging words and help i really don't know what i would have done...!😆

Chapter 2:

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">As I finally made my way home after the mad but fantasticparty, I went to the attic to take out some albums to once again refresh mymemories of Bhopal. The Siddiqui clan and the Khan clan were family friends andthe Khan clan were one of dad's childhood buddies and also business partners soall in all we all shared a strong bond. After my mother's sudden death, Raziakhala, Humeira's mom and Dilshaad Khala, Assy's mom took over my responsibility
and never let me felt that I no longer have my mother. But after dad shifted toMumbai slowly the contact started fading since dad had started a whole newbusiness but I still remained in touch with Humeira. Oh! Speaking of Aasy umust be wondering what sort of a name is that! His actual name is Asad AhmedKhan, son of Dilshaad Khala as already introduced. We three used to always hangout together and were known as the 3 monkeys since we never left a singlemoment to make mischief and got on everyone's nerves! But we within ourselvesalso fought like monkeys especially me and Asad. I was a bit healthy when I was youngerand he used to tease me calling "Motti"! How mean, right? The next picture was ofme and Asad in a pool hugging each other as tightly as possible. That incidentstill makes me laugh and also embarrassed. It was the month of April and Asadwould continuously make an April's fool out of Dilshaad Khala since shewas always the easiest! We were having one of our poolside picnics andAsad and I were having fun splashing about in our water tubes when suddenly DilshaadKhala screamed, " A crocodile!" We both were so scared that Asad ended upwetting his swimming costume which was already wet and me hugging him tightlyand trying to scare it off! Later when we came out everyone started laughingsince the so-called "crocodile" was none other than Rashid Uncle! Everyone usedto tease me, "Look at the way she is sticking to him, as if he is hersuperhero!" which made me blush to no ends! The next picture was on Asad's 10th
birthday and I still remember what he had asked from me as his birthday gift.
He had proposed me and said, "Zoya, I know I'm not that perfect but for meeverything is perfect if you are with me. I am asking you to go out with me sothat we can always remain perfect and I promise I'll always take care of you,no matter how heavy you may be. But in the end all that matters is that I loveyou. Would you gift me a yes for my birthday?" He said chuckling and smiling
sweetly. Also not to forget making myeyes go as wide as saucers and I had ran into the house and complained toDilshaad Khala, " Khala your son, has become so shameless! He is proposing to meand trying to get romantic with me! Chi..! Boys are so ugghh...!" At first shewas shocked but started laughing on seeing Asad's reaction! From that dayonwards we did not do anything that normal people would do, ignore each other,but instead fought like wild dogs! I cant believe it still makes me laugh! Whatfools we both were?! I wonder what he is doing now since the last time we spokeor rather fought was before I left for Mumbai. I decide to call Humeira but seeing the time Ithought better of it and head back down to see that it's already dawn! You can never understandhow time flies when you get lost in memories.</font>

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">So that's about it for now..! Will be eagerly waiting for your reviews...!😳</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Aashka</font>



Nice update :). So the three of them are childhood buddies. Is Humeira in love with Asad? What about Asad and his feelings? Looking forward to read more. I hope the next chapter is longer. Thanks and you are doing an awesome job :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
Hai Aashka,
Its getting interesting more now?
So asya & humi are childhood buddies& Asad proposes Zoya on his 10 th bday😆
And Zoya complaint for it😆
Pls dont make Asad & Humaira engaged😕
I had a gut feeling that u are up to this😲
Pls update soon.
Thanks for the pm
P.S pls give us long updates.Want to know Asad's POV also😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
A VERY CUTE UPDATE...👍🏼👍🏼
love how asad proposes zoya in very young age and zo complaining to dilshad...😳😳
eager to see the meeting of asad and zoya...😊😳
plzzz update soon...
and pm me if u can😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
wow.. humeria zoya asad are childhood friends.. gr8

and he proposed her on his tenth birthday.. 😆

and Zoya complained to dilshad.. so embarrassing for Asad

but isn't she loves Asad..

will wait for next update..😃

and why i didnt got PM




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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
Awesome update
It was cute update and beautifully written
Loved it loads!!
I really loved asya's childhood scene
Asad proposed to her wow how sweet and zoya was complaining hahaha
I hope humz fiance isn't asad otherwise it will terrible to see zoe and humz friendship breaking
Maybe humz isn't happy to get married to asad and she likes someone else.. And zoya is gonna help her out maybe
Can't wait to see asya's scenes together
Do continue asap
Thanks for the pm saima
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
So cute part buddy..
Loved his proposal at his 10th b'day..
That crocotile scene was cute loved their hug..
Looking forwars to read wat next..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
I m so in love with this !!!
That was really funny but really cute !! 😆 😳
When Zoya complained to Dilshad, it cracked me up !! 🤣
But really cute 😳 looking forward for next update, so update soon 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70


wow !!nice story !!
it sounds quite interesting !

why do i have the feeling that asad is humeira's fiance !
hope i am wrong !
best wishes with the SS :)

Saima di pm ed us and i am glad she did !!
you write really well !!
please do continue soon :)
i would love to read the rest of this story !


love
-kiki😳

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