Random Drabble: Her ~ PM's Sent.. - Page 3

Originally posted by: mochhug

Aww thanks hun! 😳

yes it was written with someone special in mind 😆

But that's the beauty of using pronouns. No names! 😛

😃

Originally posted by: -LiveLoveLaugh-

Before I comment, Monica, your dabba...

My dabba? 😆 I'm not really sure what to say to that 😛

Anyways, OMG! This is my new favorite piece of work by you! 👏 The language was perfectly descriptive, elegant, and beautifully penned. It was magnificent. <3<3<3

Aww thanks hun! Chal beh it wasn't that good. Stapph! you'll make me a laal tamatar! 😳

She's happy, and she makes him happy. :) How beautiful is that? I really like the simplicity of the piece.

I especially loved how you didn't use names. I love it when people only use pronouns. The reader has control over who they want it to be about. And it creates a sense of beauty and mystery. 😳

yay! I'm so glad! It just came to me randomly, and I realized while I was posting, that it could actually apply to Asya and Kabhi so I decided to say that LOL. but yes! I have a full control muahahaha 🤣

I'm just gonna let my fangirl-mind make it about Asad-Zoya (KaBhi). 😆

Excellent work, Monica! 😃 Now go and finish MJ! 😡 Then start a new story. 😆

LOL! I will finish MJ soon! But about a new story, not sure. If I did start something, it might be something not so happy, or at least that stars out pretty intensely. Just to try something new. But the response nowadays isn't that great. SO! Still not sure if I'll start something else 😆

-Fari. 😳 ❤️

Love ya! 😳🤗

Originally posted by: SmileyStar

If you asked me to describe this Drabble in one word, I'd say Magical It seriously transported me to another world of happiness and unrestrained freedom 😛

I'm in awe here. I'm seriously in awe on your writing skills right now. How you've managed to show a simple rain scene with such an exquisite beauty. No words! I loved it! ❤️

You rock! 👏

"Your dabba", I was talking about this:

Originally posted by: -LiveLoveLaugh-

"Your dabba", I was talking about this:

Love ya too! 🤗

Originally posted by: -LiveLoveLaugh-

^😆

I'm going to force you to start that new story, response or no response. 😈 😆