AsYa/KaBhi OS : The Hidden Side of Jahanpanah !

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Lasya Adiraj

@KSGmaniac_24579

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#141

Really dam cute story

Aww...

Loved the ending

Really short and sweet

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647704

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#142

hey

Lovely OS

it reminds me of geet

but anyways I enjoyed it..

really loved how he cares for Zoya.. changing clothes to making breakfast.. and uthao all her nakhras..lol

good job

and i guess everyone in this forum is complaining for less likes and comments.. even i m not getting the desired likes and comments.. 😭

and u also not commenting on my updates..

but its ok..

and i may get late in giving my comment.. but I'll comment on urs whenever i'll be free😃..

Do continue writing for ur friends and for ur loyal readers..

take care

Edited by ImmortalLove - 11 years ago

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Alone111

@Alone111

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#143

Wow tht was superb..

Loved it..

My babies..
Thy r so cute...

Nd plz dnt stp writing..

Thnks for the pm..

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fasiha

@fasiha_rocks

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#144

very lovely OS.

loved how asad is taking care of zoya

dont stop writing plzzz😭

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kalyani

@kals82

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#145

that is a cute update..

caring asad

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Gulaabo

@Gulaabo

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#146

it was so cute...caring asad is really sweet! i am in love with him...n zoya behaved like a real baby!!

don't stop writing...we all love u!!

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aniha

@Aniha

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#147

this is amaazing bano..asad care for zoya 😃 lovd it..hope ur niece get wel soon..take care 4 her..and pleash dont stop writing..with pout..continue more stories..

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Belle Collet

@AngreziKudi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#148

Thanks for the pm, finally manage to read,

Awe that ending was picture perfect, someone needs to capture that moment on camera 😆

I love reading about asad taking care of Zoya, It is such a treat.

Great one shot😃

Ps.. You can't stop writing

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Miss-Appy

@Miss-Appy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh
Awesome OS
Jahapanah nae ki kaneez ki khidmat
Asad care overwhelmed her as she was carving for some one love
& that love is Asad.
Thanks for pm

Thank you so much buddy !! 🤗
I'm glad you liked it !! 😃
Asad is her THE ONE !