AsYa/KaBhi OS : The Hidden Side of Jahanpanah ! - Page 17

Originally posted by: TaiLung

loved it

Thank you so much dear !! 🤗 😳

Originally posted by: jeevika1234

Really dam cute story

Aww...

Loved the ending

Really short and sweet

Awww Thank you so much dear !! 🤗
I'm glad you liked it !! 😃
Thank you !! 😳

Originally posted by: ImmortalLove

hey

Lovely OS

it reminds me of geet

but anyways I enjoyed it..

really loved how he cares for Zoya.. changing clothes to making breakfast.. and uthao all her nakhras..lol

good job

and i guess everyone in this forum is complaining for less likes and comments.. even i m not getting the desired likes and comments..😭

and u also not commenting on my updates..

but its ok..

and i may get late in giving my comment.. but I'll comment on urs whenever i'll be free😃..

Do continue writing for ur friends and for ur loyal readers..

take care

Hi !
Awww so sweet !! Thank you !! 😳
Really ? I take it as a compliment ! 😆
Indeed, Ms. Farooqui being crancky and Asad handling her 😳 😆
I know their silent treatment !! 😡 😭
Actually if i dont comment means i didnt read because nowadays what u r writing is mature and i dont read mature, i'm 15 ☺️
Awww thats so sweet ! 🤗 Thank you !! 😳

Originally posted by: gowtu

Wow tht was superb..

Loved it..

My babies..
Thy r so cute...

Nd plz dnt stp writing..

Thnks for the pm..

Awww Thank you so much Gowtu !!! 🤗
I'm glad you liked it !! 😃
Indeed they r ! 😉 😆
Then tell silent readers tobreak their silence ! 😡 😭

Originally posted by: fasiha_rocks

very lovely OS.

loved how asad is taking care of zoya

dont stop writing plzzz😭

Awww Thank you so much dear !! 🤗
Glad u liked it !! 😃
Then please do comment and tell others to do so too ! 😭

Originally posted by: anjali9996

loved it

Thank you dear !! 🤗 😳

Originally posted by: kals82

that is a cute update..

caring asad

Thank you so much Kalyani !! 🤗
I'm glad you liked it !! 😳

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

it was so cute...caring asad is really sweet! i am in love with him...n zoya behaved like a real baby!!

don't stop writing...we all love u!!

Asad makes every girl twirl around him 😳
Thank you so much buddy !! 🤗
I'm glad you liked it !! 😃
Awww thats so sweet !! I love u too !! 😳
But i want comments !

Originally posted by: aniha20

this is amaazing bano..asad care for zoya 😃 lovd it..hope ur niece get wel soon..take care 4 her..and pleash dont stop writing..with pout..continue more stories..

Awww thats really sweet !! Thank you so much Aniha !! 🤗
Awww Thank you dear !! 🤗
Then please tell silent readers to comment !! 😭

Originally posted by: B3ll3...

Thanks for the pm, finally manage to read,

Awe that ending was picture perfect, someone needs to capture that moment on camera😆

I love reading about asad taking care of Zoya, It is such a treat.

Great one shot😃

Ps.. You can't stop writing

Haha i know ! 😆
Awww Thank you so much !! 🤗 even i love such scenes !
Then please tell these silent readers to comment, their silence makes us disheartened of not getting feedback 😭