Do Dil Ek Jaan - an AsYa and AyRa FF (KSG n Vikrant) *ch 4*PG 18 - Page 3

this should be good
pm lz

Thanx for the pm
I'm in for ur ff 😊
Exited to read more
do pm me when u update
continue soon

Oh WOW Niru!!!


I absolutely love all your pictures!!!


An the story is so very interesting!!!!



Please do continue!!!!!



I would LOVE to read this!!!!!




And yes please do send me a pm for when you update!!



Mwahhh

Interesting plot dear,

Hey do cont soon it's amazing

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love the beginning of your story!!!!!!!!!!!!! Each of the character sketches are really good and they suit the personality of the character!!! I like it in your story how Zoya and Humaira have a sisterly bonding which is something we didn't get to see in the actual show. I am sooo excited that your story is based upon the two original couples of QH, AsYa and AyRa!!!! <3 <3 It feels sooo nice to read an AyRa fanmade story after a long time!!!! I miss AyRa sooo much!!!!!!!! Please continue your story so we can see the nok jhoks of AyRa and AsYa and the process of both couples falling in love with each other!!!!! I really liked it how you made Ayaan-Zoya (mona-robert) become friends and Humaira-Asad become friends. I wish we could have seen more bonding between Asad and Humaira in the show.

Originally posted by: armaanasadksg

wow very nice concept and thanks KSG as AAK. if raquesh as AAK hota toh meinkabhi read nahi karthi. Thankx 4 d PM. and pls update 1st part soon i just can't wait. BTW i just love ol ur writings OS. ur excellent writer

thank u fr ur luvly cmnt.
evn i luv KSG as Asad!!!!
will try 2 update d 1st chapter ASAP.

p.s. thynx fr readin my other works 222222.

Originally posted by: AyRa_Rocks

Sounds awesome. Thanks for writing on the original pairs which I love. Pls pm me. Looking forward to it:):)

thank u. such a luvly cmnt!!!
i luv dese pairs 2222!
will surely pm u.

Originally posted by: sasir

loved it.

but i want to know it will be asya only na.

if it is then plz pm me

i want to read it.

thank u fr ur wundrful cmnt.
it'll surely b AsYa.
n i'll surely pm u.

Originally posted by: awesome

Nice

thank u sooo much fr ur cmnt.

Originally posted by: Barbievishi20

Nice Plot
Plz update 1st Part soon :)

& Plz Pm me aftr updating 😊

thank u sooo much fr ur precious cmnt.
will update ASAP.
n will surely pm u.

Originally posted by: Simiseengh15

Wow...Awesome concept and story...

Already loving it...

Please please pm me too...

Waiting:)

thank u soo much fr ur precious cmnt.
will surely pm u.
will update ASAP.

Originally posted by: lovepkdh

All the verrry best my dear behna !! Rock it !The character sketches are suppeerrrbbb !!! Im eagerly looking forward to the update !! Please post it sooon !! 😊 😊 😃

finally!!!!! finally u cmntd.
thank u sooo much behna.
will update ASAP.

Originally posted by: Surbhibornstar

Nyc

thank u soo much

Originally posted by: nida2394

Lovely

thanks a lot.

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice concept
Continue soon
Plz pm me when u update
Thanks

thank u sooo much fr ur precious cmnt.
will continu soon.
will surely pm u.

Originally posted by: jawria123

nice concept
Continue soon :)

thank u soo much!
will continue soon.

Originally posted by: gowtu

Nc stry..
Intrstng stry line..
Continue soon nd do pm me..

thank u soo much fr ur wunderful cmnt.
will continue soon n surely pm u.

Originally posted by: Shubh007

Awesome & Intresting concept...👏

Just love it...😊

Waiting for nxt part egarly so update soon...😃

thank u fr ur luvly cmnt.
will update ASAP.

Originally posted by: aarzoo50

hey niru very nice plot...
loved it
plz continue

thank u soo much! such a luvly cmnt.
will continue soon.

Originally posted by: Linsie

interesting concept...

so all live together...family...

hook since kids...

thank u fr ur wunnefl cmnt!
yep... they r a family n hooked since babies!
will continue ASAP.