AsYa OS - Beyond - Page 12

I just popped in to say Hi😃

Beyond being the formative word..let me just incorporate it in my comment... This story's beyond words to express my feelings...it was a state of mind...it was a moment in time...a time when you think you are lost and ready to give up.But then you find soemthing within you, that pushes you, builds you a possibility that makes you wanna stand up again and move further... Be it love or inspiration, be it company or solitude...wat you want your mind creates...its just a matter of time when you decide to make it real...

Originally posted by: -StarsLinedUp-

Beyond being the formative word..let me just incorporate it in my comment... This story's beyond words to express my feelings...it was a state of mind...it was a moment in time...a time when you think you are lost and ready to give up.But then you find soemthing within you, that pushes you, builds you a possibility that makes you wanna stand up again and move further... Be it love or inspiration, be it company or solitude...wat you want your mind creates...its just a matter of time when you decide to make it real...

Love..it..your concepts are unusual and intriguing...I need to scratch my brain cells a lil to try and decipher your underlined meaning but despite the fact if I can or cannot I still feel hypnotised by your vision...The words they live and breathe on their own and constantly reproduce..fresh emotions that stir the soul...keep up the good work gal!!!😉

Originally posted by: Zanutix

Oh my God! Thank you so so much Stars! 🤗

Many thought the ending to be a sad one.. but I didn't. Does death always mean end of life? Can it not mean starting a new journey? He is where he wants to be, with the one he wants to be, doing what he loves. How is that not happy?!

Oh, and, your praising has really buffed up my self obsession! 😆

Sweetheart..I dont shun or celebrate death...but I dont believe in giving up...Yes the ending was not the most forgiving..but he let go..and left it to fate..and he relieved himself from the pains that didnt let him move on with the actual life..What I liked more than the end was the prose..the way you wove this story...n how it is still openended...I can always think..that his old regressive self died..and tommorow he will wake up a new man...so ya..

Originally posted by: -StarsLinedUp-

Sweetheart..I dont shun or celebrate death...but I dont believe in giving up...Yes the ending was not the most forgiving..but he let go..and left it to fate..and he relieved himself from the pains that didnt let him move on with the actual life..What I liked more than the end was the prose..the way you wove this story...n how it is still openended...I can always think..that his old regressive self died..and tommorow he will wake up a new man...so ya..

As for u adding onto ur self obsession..gal charity begins at home..love thyself first...and how u do that reflects how u would love someone esle..so I am all for it😉

The book...

Awesome!! It was amazing!! He escaped into a diary!! I read stories escape from realities of life!!!

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet

Awesome!! It was amazing!! He escaped into a diary!! I read stories escape from realities of life!!!

Thank was a brilliant piece of writing! 👏

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

Thank was a brilliant piece of writing! 👏