Thrd 5-The Butterflies!Chap-33A, Pg123, 9 May

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Young And Horny!

@Perfectionist2

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Posted: 11 years ago

#531

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--
Noo it can't be possible I trust Asad !
and I hope Zoya is going to trust his heart or eyes or whatever instead of his words ??

He can never do this their is something which needs to be cleared I guess ,,

or is he being blackmailed by that bitch ?? 😡

wasn't expecting all this but beautifully written loved reading all of it ❤️

plzz try to update sooon waiting eagerly to see Zoya's reaction !

Oh Bubble,

Thanks for reading. Now I only need Zoya to show this faith in Asad,

Or make you Asad's Zoya.😆

Kya KAron, I still have so much of lose ends to tie.

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@Perfectionist2

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Posted: 11 years ago

#532

Originally posted by: SimplySmile

at the beginning of the post...

at the end...

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🤣 God you are funny! I loved the GIFS. Thank You!

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Young And Horny!

@Perfectionist2

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Posted: 11 years ago

#533

Originally posted by: Divi.C

patience...that i can't have... I'm just thinking about this story the whole day...n my fav part of the last chap is...

Leap of faith the butterflies cautioned. Who said it would be easy. It's not about what you know or what you believe. It is more than actions and words put together. It's not black or white nor is it fifty shades of grey. It is the test of time. It is the test of trust and Faith, about all the promises made...

..in ur story there is not only love,..joke,,adult things which make me to read ur stories but also reality of life...like trust..faith in love...which 1 has to keep in their love life though some time we make mistak but trust is the only aspect that keep our love alive...

n my fav line is..

What doesn't kill you makes you stronger.".

now i seriously feel there r really some butterflies in me also...

n i love these butterflies of zoya also...

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n plss update soon as for now npt me but butterflies r hanging on cliff..😉

Hahaha I will see what I can do.

Thanks for the passionate reply. I am touched that so many people are effected. that means my writings are convincing enough.

I will fix the mess. It's a promise😃

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#534

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2
Anki,

You are seriously counting,😆

Do you have faith in Asad and butterflies or not.

i am counting coz i believe i am an efficient spammer 😎🤣

Asad and butterflies are a part of the story, i am counting for the writer to update soon 😉😆

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ishka virani

@LilApple

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Posted: 11 years ago

#535

see I told u na writer r wicked souls
so if my songs threat didnt worked
I will make u eat momos sauce
and believe me
it is so spicy dt I just licked it by finger tip and my ears started smoking
toh wt u say...
ps I know they will b together but I dont want ever tiny separation

Edited by LilApple - 11 years ago

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@Perfectionist2

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Posted: 11 years ago

#536

Originally posted by: DevikaRavish
Juliet.. you did it again...you got the required element of emotion back in your story... 😊

Asad wanted to spend two more days with Zoya but they had Rehaan waiting along with his family and their family.. So they were destined to move...Zafar... hmm.. Though Zoya has cleared the misunderstandings.. that haunting phone calls forced him to stay away from Zafar.. He trusts his wife but not Zafar...and Asad's thoughts about does she always prioritize Zafar... was beautifully written... and also when she ran to him and told him that she loves him and pacified him was lovely...

Now what is wrong with that Oman guy ?? Why is he being so cheap in disgracing Zoya ?? Well we all know Zoya did not go to ooty.. and TRUST ... yes Asad trusted his wife now and the way he handled that guy.. loved it... I wish Asad had hit him more.. 😊

Those snaps... in the TV and how much of an emotional torture it would have been to Zoya.. Poor girl...😭

Zafar did not give phone to Zoya but he was with her to support her ... and he is a very good friend which Asad also realized... She hired Mr. Khanna to give the statement to press and her own statement was just WOW !! 😊 How relieved Asad was to hear her words of trust...and their meet again at home ... beautiful and emotional and I am at loss of words to thank you how good that scene was written... Thank you so very much for that Juliet.. I just loved it.. 😊

Hmm.. now the final blow to the readers.. the photographs were not morphed.. Well looking at the number of missed calls and Asad's state.. I can only tell that Cienna had somehow tricked Asad may be using similar tablet which she had given Zoya in her drink.. when Asad and Zoya met during her presentation after those 2 days.. I guess Asad did not know anything about all these till this moment...He might have fainted or blacked out.. and she had used this opportunity to click away those snaps I guess...

Zoya is not a looser.. Am sure she has the strength to fight back and now comes her action to prove what and how she can shield her family... 😊 I am eager to read more.. 😊

I am sure the next chapter will be equally rocking 😊

PLEASE UPDATE IT ON MONDAY .. Cannot wait till Friday.. I need to go to office now.. but I will definately request you for an early update tomorrow couple of times on this thread and bug you..

😊

Hey Devika,

Firstly thanks for being so generous with your comments as always.

WHat you saw in this chapter was Zoya;s actions speaking louder than words. She fought for Asad without a doubt in mind that Asad is innocent. But there is more that meets the eye. More than actions or words or black or white.

You remember you asked about two days that asad disappeared and I said you will know.

This was it. tell me you are surprised and this was unexpected. I like the element of unpredicted scenarios when I write.

Hold that thought, you would be on to something there. but also my story has no villains or vamps. Just nasty situations. Chapter 31 was about promised made, the coming chapter is putting those promises to test.

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Divi.C

@Divi.C

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Posted: 11 years ago

#537

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2
Hahaha I will see what I can do.
Thanks for the passionate reply. I am touched that so many people are effected. that means my writings are convincing enough.

I will fix the mess. It's a promise😃

.order order

.hmmm..it's better u clear the mess soon MISS Perfectionist2

the quotes are,adjunct till u update...😉

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Young And Horny!

@Perfectionist2

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#538

Originally posted by: 1d_luvah
Arrrghhh!! Dnt separate my asya 😭
On the other hand superb update as usual :)

Continue soon

Thanks. I will see what I can do. It is a story with a original plot I am only following that.

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ishka virani

@LilApple

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Posted: 11 years ago

#539

Originally posted by: LilApple
see I told u na writer r wicked souls
so if my songs threat didnt worked
I will make u eat momos sauce
and believe me
it is so spicy dt I just licked it by finger tip and my ears started smoking
toh wt u say...
ps I know they will b together but I dont want ever tiny separation

read it again with my dp...u will get more feel...hahaha