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sj_qh_kabhi

@sj_qh_kabhi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#461

Really really love dis ff..!! It is beautifully written.. :)
plz update ssooonnn..;)

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Ami34

@Ami34

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

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Sadie

@--starstruck--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#463

Ok so I have completed half of the update but the other half will take some time as I need it to be perfect, i need it to not sound too rushed or too slow or anything so I'll need some time! till then a shorty short promo!

"Asad and Zoya slept on either side of the bonfire, the ground wasn't comfortable enough but it had to do, it was better than the stuffy car where they couldn't even stretch a limb. Asad was too tired and was slowly beginning to drift off into the deepest level of sleep when Zoya's loud screams brought him out of it. His eyes sprung open in shock and when he registered a shivering Zoya writhing and screaming in her sleep while simultaneously thrashing her hands as if wanting to grope something to bring her out of her nightmare, he sprang up and ran towards her!"

And it continues further! this is actually the part where i have stopped i need to write more after this so your views and comments on it are welcome! any predictions on what is to happen after this and any suggestions on what you want after this is also welcome I'll see if I can add ur suggestions into the part!

@SimplySmile - You said the track of a jungle main mungle seems too cliche, I agree this track has been used and abused by a number of writers already and I'm not sorry for going the cliche way because this scene has a purpose which you will get to know in the coming update! Moreover I had this story set long before I posted the first Chapter (which i know was eons back 😆 ) so I can't change the track I've set as it will abrupt the flow. I do take in demands or suggestions which I can add in the story but I don't change the track. Hope you understand now!

Edited by --starstruck-- - 11 years ago

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Lasya Adiraj

@KSGmaniac_24579

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#464

Read all chapters in one go

It's awesome

Update soon

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treasure11

@treasure11

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#465

Nice Promo

Waiting for the update 😛

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Prazeena Bhattarai

@Aneezarp27

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#466

I am eagerly waiting for the update sadie ! Update soonish! 😳

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Prazeena Bhattarai

@Aneezarp27

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#467

And you are teasing us with such teaser ! 😔

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SimplySmile

@SimplySmile

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#468

Heyyy,

First all of thank you for replaying to my comment, means a lot,

Second of all, sorry if I offended you in any way, I was just giving out my opinion. From my experience, half the time the jungle track ends up with the pair "doing it" which I just think has been used way too often. But I also know that the track moves the story a lot further so I'm looking forward to see how it develops AsYa's relationship in this story. I don't exactly think that they're gonna end up going into bed, but they may have a better understanding towards each other, from the promo it seems as if Zoya;s having nightmares and that's where Zoya will tell Asad what they're about and maybe they'll grow closer as friend

Hope you update soon,

Please PM when you do:)

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Miss-Appy

@Miss-Appy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#469

Intersting ! 😃
Waiting for the update 😳

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jas91

@jas91

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#470

interesting promo😃

i want Asad 2 know about Zoya's past now😆

u can show like Zoya blurts it out in her sleep thus Asad know this

but cuz she's asleep when she doesn't know about this & even Asad doesn't tell anything about d night & gets more protective possessive about her😉

upcdt soon😛

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