AsYa FF Our Lives Entwined - Thread 10 - Chapter 33 Updated 7th April

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@BeIndependent

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#181

awesommmeee..👏👏
loved it so mucchh..😳

omg zoya n amnesia 😲...i was shocked as asad..jab tak ayaan didnt point out dat hw cum she knows d doc name ..i really felt like every second EK's show you hv used d same twist..😉😆..mujhe asad k saath hi pata chala dat she was joking..😆😆

asad took care of zoya..hug her..in front of everyone..😳
his anger was justifed... for zoya..sehrish n himself..😳😆
asad n punching bag .....but he should not punish himself..
sangeet is coming...n all evils r out...it ll be real fun...u r planning to write it ...haina..😆😆

zoya ll be zoya...entered asad's room through window...took care of his wound..caressed him ..n slept beside him..😲😳😉😆😆..
i m waiting for friday now...😳

thanks for pm..😃

Congratulations for the new thread..🥳

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MissAsian

@MissAsian

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#182

Congrats on the new thread!
Haww! That was just a mean thing for Zoya to do. But it was pretty funny
omg she's sleeping in his bed :0 :D

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--Bubble007--

@--Bubble007--

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: divya_asya
Res
unres

hey bubble awesome update...
haha zoya's prank got a mini heart attack to me also lol
continue soon and thanks for pm

Thanks ,,

I a glad that you liked it (:

haha yah it was a heartbreaking prank LoL

Will try updating soon !!

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@--Bubble007--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: ankitabaran
Nice...nice...😊

Thanks ,,

I a glad that you liked it (:

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Posted: 11 years ago

#185

Originally posted by: MissAsian
Congrats on the new thread!
Haww! That was just a mean thing for Zoya to do. But it was pretty funny
omg she's sleeping in his bed :0 :D

Thanks ,,

I a glad that you liked it (:

haha yah but it was just a joke LoL

yup she is (;

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@--Bubble007--

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: gowtu

😡 😡

haaawww u want them to cross their limits ?? 😲😆

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@--Bubble007--

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: sweetluck
awesommmeee..👏👏
loved it so mucchh..😳

omg zoya n amnesia 😲...i was shocked as asad..jab tak ayaan didnt point out dat hw cum she knows d doc name ..i really felt like every second EK's show you hv used d same twist..😉😆..mujhe asad k saath hi pata chala dat she was joking..😆😆

asad took care of zoya..hug her..in front of everyone..😳
his anger was justifed... for zoya..sehrish n himself..😳😆
asad n punching bag .....but he should not punish himself..
sangeet is coming...n all evils r out...it ll be real fun...u r planning to write it ...haina..😆😆

zoya ll be zoya...entered asad's room through window...took care of his wound..caressed him ..n slept beside him..😆..
i m waiting for friday now...😳

thanks for pm..😃

Congratulations for the new thread..🥳

Thanks ,,

I a glad that you liked it (:

haha no I won't use this twist at the end of story ,,

Asad needs her now and totally a normal Zoya can help him LoL

noo he never punched himself ,,

haha yah I am planning to write a lil bit ,,

Will try updating soon !!

Thanks for that tooo :D

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Posted: 11 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: kals82
hai,
bubble,

i am really sorry in inres very late...

i got the amnesia scene... and putzoya in little troube..

asad was so lost in hie misery, he forgot zoya..zoya was in trouble for 14 hrs.. and he was only for 3 hrs..

so he should look after her first.. then think about himself...

I LOVED IT...

atlast they are sleeping in the same bed.. i really wish zoya snuggle up to him in sleep and they sleep in each other arms in peace..

hopefully he let the sehrish thing as bygones.. and focus on the present.. as their marriage is on 2 days...

and what cute.. cute romance befor u set the screen on fire...

will be waiting.. tomorrow..

u r awesome...

haha no need for sorry ,,

its better late than never 😆

Yup u got it and I am glad that you liked it ,,

Thanks ,,

I am honored that you liked it 😳

haha yah finally after 110 years they are on same bed ,,

succhh a cruel writer I have proved myself this time 😆

he won't focus on Sehrish muchh now ,,

Will be updating tomorrow ,,

aww that I am for sure 😳😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

#189

Originally posted by: kals82
thank you for the dedication...
devika also wanted that...

we do think alike sometime i guess...

No need for that it was ur suggestion soo just thought to give u credit (:

and I am very happy that you liked it :D

haha yah maybe !

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Basanti 🦄

@KaBhiKiBasanti

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#190

hey that waS so goood!
it was awesome n u knw it!
bt that Amnesia was a heart attack!
u almost stop my breathing!
bt that too cool
n i lovd it so so so so so so so so so so so so so much
haww u r so lazy that u didnt even read how many times i have written so n i have wrote som one.
oh u just checked n it isnt there!
april fool 🤣
just joking
oww i really lovd it
it feels so bad wen ur fren ditches u
hate u sehrish
bt love u di!
it was so nice
owwie last part was just so cute n romantic
i lovd it
it was adorable n d best part
oh sangeet in few days.
good!
awesome
superb
cute
funny
beautifully written
waiting so so eagerly for d next update
update soon