2#Tumhe Pyaar Kab Tak Na Karenge Bhala :AsYa FF(Ch6-10|#3Link pg1) - Page 76

Originally posted by: DevikaRavish

Ankie..Apologies for late reply .. was not in town for last 5 days...

Well.. You know how much crazy I am about your writings.. So no doubt it is a wonderful update...

And a bigger apology for not replying on time. Went to the town to meet up relatives and had a no-break journey which tired the hell outta me. Bouy, i say I am aging 😆 N U dii, you exaggerate 😆

The entire scene with Ayaan was cute and adorable.. 😊... So Asad did know it was Ayaan but he let her enjoy ... how sweet.. but itna chotu update kyun tha ??

Itna chotu kahan tha? 😲 It was more than 2500 words. Haan compared to the other two it was chotu, but then that is the standard length 😕 😆

Thank you Dii, Thank you soo much <3 <3

Originally posted by: ..Breeze..

Loved the update asusual😃 It's such a cute one!! No problem..Let Ayan stay😆 He's so much fun😉 Kya kahuin.. Har update ke baad ek hi baat nikalti hai, Awesome😆 Kuch aur try kar leti huin..

It's stupendo fantabulously fantastic and magical update😃

Originally posted by: aseelashah

Wonderful update as usual Ankuuu

I love it so so much

Pls pls update soon

I want ASYA kiss😳

I love its end👏

Thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: Madame_Noddy

Res res res!!! Lappy se unres karungi later at night 😃

And that "later at night" never came

Okay okay, i know i deserve a COLOSSAL slap for not unresing but hear me out please?

Well...

Nothing

I got nothing. I forgot. I. Effing. Forgot.😳

Yes Aapie you can hit me now. Sorry to make you wait. Haha.

HAHA koi nahi, i was out of the city, and look at my shortcomings I always forget to connect to people who want to be connected with me 😆 u know what i am hinting at 😆

Coming to the update, I LOVED IT!!

I really wanted something fun to read that I wouldn't have to think about and hurt my tiny little brain in the process. So thank you for so muchhiieee for writing such a SUPERB chapter!! 🤗

U are welcome. Y add more stress to an already stressed life you see. 😆 But spoiler alert the ones at the end might be a bit stressful as they might be dramatically draining 😆

The quiet moment between Asad and Zoya... Perfect ❤️ Maannn Zoe, do you need a hammer in the head to realize your feelings for Asad? Haan? Feeling jelly when your bestie and your husband act like buddies, then you share quiet moments with him, feel mushy around him, get on alert mode and run when he teases you by being romantic and moving close... and the list goes on. WHAT MORE DO YOU NEED TO GET IT??

She needs the fear of losing him. As simple as that 🤣 😆

Sorry for the above rant. The heat is affecting my brain and I feel crazy. 😳

Midnight snack!!!

"The light in the fridge always means for a snack at midnight. Or else why even keep one?" 🤣

Why do I think that the above thought and action is what you do??😛 I. Am. Sure. 😆

How well you know me 👏 😳

And then, ICE CREAM!! Aapiee KYUN?!

WHY? WHY? WHY?

I have been craving ice cream for the last 3 days and you HAD to give such a delicious description of it here. I WANT ICE CREAM NAAAOOOWWW!! 😭

^YOU are responsible for the above rant. I hold no responsibility. 😳

Because I WAS THE ONE CRAVING FOR ONE THEN 🥱 😆

Awww my Zoya is sooo cutu!! I want to take her home! Abhi!! She thought it was a CHOR. OMGEEE!!! 🤣

And that line:- "Mister Khaann, main yahan kheti karne ayi hoon! Apko pata nahi?" 🤣

Wuahahahaha 🤣

See I told before Zoya is adorable. U will feel like hugging her cuddling her and pampering her. 😳 😆

And and and the great Ayaan makes his grand entry!! Kya entry maari hai boss!! Dil jeet liya!!

Okay now I want some good Raabert Mona-ish scenes. I MISS THEM DAMNIT!! So you will give them to me. NO excuses. 😆

Seedhe aake bhabhi pe line maarna aur gulaab ka phool dena! Ayaan miyan aap apne bhaijaan ko kaamplex de doge!! 🤣

I can sooo imagine Asad and Zoya's expressions when Ayaan realized that they had been thinking of him as a thief. OO EEMMM GEEE 🤣

Yes you will have more of him. Dont worry. I love my Ayaan, he is sweet and as adorable as a child, best part of him is that he understands as well as reads and knows his brother too well. He is not his brother but his son and Ayaan loves his brother like a father. 😳

Brilliant, brilliant chapter!! I loved loved loved it!!!

🤗 ❤️

P.S: I think I'm going to write to Zucku bhaisaab to include the Hug emo in WA. The Jadoo ki jhappii thing creeps me out sometimes 😆

Best thing about u is, I love the way you think exactly like me 😆

Originally posted by: --SH7_Sunny--

Hallo 😆

Originally posted by: subhkisonu

A feel good chapter😊. It reminded me al the AsYaan moments😊.

I could see VM and KSG in this chapter. Vikruu amar Vikruuu 😳 😎

I am waiting for the next part, what will happen when Ayan will see them sleeping separately in the next morning😲. Ayaan is on a vacation, both Asad and Zoya wake up before he does. So secret is safe 😆

And the most important thing is I have got the answer what I was looking for since my childhood...the purpose of the light in the fridge😆. See avehi I am called as Shob janta genjeewala 🤣

🤗

Originally posted by: Love-AsYa-4ever

first I need to start off by saying that I usually try to avoid reading stories that use Hindi in them mainly because it kinda becomes a little harder to read but nevertheless I was browsing through my pms and decided to give this one a try; and boy am I glad I did!

I love how the plot is simple yet so much thought has been put into every moment. and I especially love how you incorporate bits of the present. I think that just adds on to the beauty of the story. its coming along to be an amazing story and I hope you continue soon!