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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: CrazyPatel1

Lovely update!
Loved it, and I liked Razia. Thank u for PM


thank you


thank you

Originally posted by: ican

Please rashid is a jerk
Dilshad should not forgive him
Please he is disgusting
Shireen took care of me so I slept
Even in the show I hated the act of forgives
How could dilshad forgive him??
Please don't make dilshad forgive him
Thanks for pm


hai,

rashid is just a weak person...
rashid has not place in dilshad nor in asad life
...


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aniha20

Awesome update !!!
So many confrntation revealed..nice to see zoya raziya but i feel she is acting infrnt of all..

Rashid dilshad past is also out..and i love their family hug

#trend 😲 😆
zoya still is here in bubba's she can give twist whereever lol

update soon <3



thanks aniha,
razia is not acting.. she is a good character in my story...😛
will see about the trend soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

thank you


Originally posted by: khadupam

Wow good work u r challenging Gul
But eventually ur story is fun to read unlike to watch show
Continue soon


thank you... i really wish gul has taken something like this...

Originally posted by: anopama

Nice update

I like ur revelation of the gudiya factory raaz better than the show
It was a accidental situation and of evil plan
A family that wanted her and her ammi with them
Razia is good so hard to believe haha
But rashid always a louse he lose control really
Plz don't separate asya keep them together
Continue



thank you...
razia is good.. here.. i wanted a happy family for zoya,,,

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

OKAY..


I'm upset so no comments! 😳


why no comments...😕
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 10:

As they hugged each other.. they felt their family complete. Zoya got her missing family and gazia and humi got their daughter and sister back. It was an emotional moment for the siddiques. They broke the hug, and razia wiped tears from her face and also from her daughters. The Khans looked at the happy family.. with awe and wonder..ayaan almost wished that they could have that happy family too. But his dad mistake has cost him the chance, and after knowing the truth, he cant ask that too happen.

Gaffur caressed zoya head, and placed a fond kiss on her face, and asked her..

G: will you stay with us beta,,

Zoya heard the question,, and her eyes tunred towards asd for an answer..

A: she is ur daughter siddique sahib she will stay with you only...zoya was stunned by his answer.. and her eyes expressed her insecurity over his answer, and asad understood her doubts and her questions. He walked towards the happy family and looked at zoya. She came close to him and stood infront of him. He cupped her cheeks with his hands and his eyes locked with hers.

A: zoya u came in search of ur abbu.. and now u found him... u should spend time with him only.. and try to relive the moments which you missed with him.. life never gives this kind of opportunity to everyone. U know..

She nodded in his hands...

A: look after yourself. And don't get into any trouble.. now.. he said smilingly.. she nodded again..

A: I am leaving now.. ammi will be waiting.. andcan I tell her the whole truth.. she should know..

Z: juu Mr.khan.. u can tell poophi.. and.. she trailed.. she felt so heavy in heart.. she gained her family, but also looked like so lost her family too... and asad understood her unspoken words..

A: that is ur home too zoya.. u know that.. don't u...

She nodded yet tears rolled down her eyes.. and asad fingers dried them and his eyes try to spell his words for her...

He turned and walked towards the door.. and when he saw Rashid standing there looking at him..

A: if I say I forgive you... is going to bring any peace in your life.. then I say I forgive you.. and I actually pity you... but having forgiven you doesn't mean that u r part of my family,.. I just hope that you keep this family of urs happy..

As he moved ahead, he heard a word.. Bhaijaan.. he turned to see ayaan standing with tears brimming in his eyes. Asad was moved seeing him like that.. he is father to his brother.. and nothing is going to change their relation.. he stretched his right hand.. and came crashing in to his arms.. and hugged him... I am so sorry bhai.. he murmured.. in asad arms..

A: it is ok.. ayaan.. let it go... Ok..

Ay: jee bhaijann.

A: I have to go.. ammi will be waiting for me... and tunred to see zoya standing there...

A: look after zoya ok..

Ay: don't worry bhaijaan. I will look after mona darling..

Asad made a face when ayaan addresses zoya as darling.. and ayaan realized it..

Ay: I meant zoya bhabhi... Bhai.. he winked at his brother.. that bought a sly smile in asad face, and he walked out of the house, and turned to see zoya standing there.. and he waved her bye.. and moved towards KV.

Zoya dried her tears and walked inside and smiled, but the sadness was known to her parents..

Hu: appi will you share room with me.. she asked with eager smile..

Z: ofcousre humi.. now show my room... both the sisters held each other hands and moved towards their room.

It looked all new to zoya... she found what she came for ... it was a mixed feeling for her.. she missed Khan Villa.. though asad hasn't said as such.. but he didn't deny it either.. she hoped with time.. they will together again.

As they settled in the room, gaffur and razia came inside the room, with dinner in their hands. Gaffur fed his daughters with his hands.. and tears flowed from his eyes... it were tears of happiness. Once they finished, he insisted that they both go to sleep, him and razia covered duvet over them, and caressed their face.. and left a kiss on their head, and left the room.

Khan Villa:

As asad entered the house, dilshad and najma looked behind to see zoya missing.. when enquired asad made them sit and explained the whole lot.. and they were dumbstruck. To know..

Dilshad was really proud of her zoya.. they way she handled things... and when asad explained about Rashid... she felt the same as asad... she pitied the man, whose one mistake cost him his lifetime happiness... but she was happy.. that her son has found peace.. and he let go of the past.. she kissed asad.. and they hugged as family.. and all 3 of them missed zoya...

Dilshad does know what is happening between asad and zoya.. and she wanted to asad to open his feeling and tell her. They had their dinner silently and retired for tht night. Asad couldn't sleep in his bed... his heart and mind was occupied by one person.. and he took mobile to call her.. but kept it back.. as it is very late. He walked out of his room, and moved into the guest room.. which was just like how she left it.. and moved into the bed .. and slept on her bed hugging her pillow.

(Planned to end it here... but chalo.. it is EID.. so here is EID KA GIFT...)

Morning:

As the morning dawned, dilshad was the first one to be up and as she opened zoya room, she caught her son sleeping ..hugging zoya pillow.. she shaked her head at him.. love stuck.. boy.. and yet he is still emotionally challenged to speak his love.. to his ammi.. and she looked back. If the situation has not been this worse.. these two would have never realized their love for each other.. and keep on fighting with each other... a good thing happened out of all this... is her son is madly and hopelessly in love with his musibet magnet. She smiled and closed the room and went upstairs. Asad got up after sometime, he sneaked into his room,. Before he get caught, and left to his office, as he had some important meeting arranged for that day.

SM..

As the morning, dawned, zoya opened her eyes to a new environment, and anew people.. and yet see saw only smile and acceptance in their face. The whole family got ready after breakfast, and went to the cemetery to offer their prayers in her mom tomb. After that zoya and humi were sitting behind and talking and didn't realize that their car has stopped infront of khan villa.. zoya was surprised to see that..

G: we should pick up ur things from here..isnt...

Z: haa abbu I totally forgot... I wanted to talk to poophi too..

G: even I want to talk to her and thank her.. come let go..

The whole family went to the door.. and zoya rang the bell and waited anxiously for the door to open. Dilshad opened the door. And zoya flung herself into her arms... saying poophi..

D: zoya.. meri bachi... she smiled and caressed her face.. and looked up to see the gaffur family standing there..

G: can we come in..

D: jee please come in.. and the whole family settled in the hall.. after few awkward moments..

R: jee.. we r sorry.. we never meant ill of ur family.. we were just looking after shireen..

D: I know. Asad explained everything.. I don't want remember the past.. let the bygones be bygones..

G: that is so good of u.. dilshad bi.. we are hear for one more reason too..

D: jee tell me..

G: we want to thank u for looking after my zoya.. and caring for her as a daughter..

D: she is still me daughter gaffur sahib,..

G: that is what I wanted to talk to u about..

D: jee.

The elders saw zoya looking at them.. and razia said humi and zoya to pack her things... and she moved towards the room.. but her heart was in the hall to hear the conversation.

Though they moved inside the room, they hid behind the door to hear it.. as zoya was determined to know their talk.

G: actually we are here.. not just to thank you.. but also talk about asad and zoya Nikkah.. if u are ok with it..

D: ofcourse gaffur saab, even I was thinking the same.. I am so happy that u said it.. I don't have anything against.. and she is my both daughter and daughter in law..

G: so can I consider the rishta pakka...

D: jee bilkul..

Inside the humi was smiling at the blushing zoya.. and she hugged her aapi.. happily.. and wished.. Mubarak ho aapi..

R: we know u both are standing behind the door and listening to our words.. now.. come out.

They both came out smiling and all of sudden zoya was feeling shy and happy.. she hugged her abbu and whispered ..a thank you.

G: I always wanted ur happiness beta.. and I know that lies in asad... isn't..

She just nodded in his arms.. and then she hugged razia too.. and then she hugged her poophi..

Z: thank you so much poophi...

D: u r welcome.. she turned and addresses gaffur..

D: it is good that u spoke about their marriage.. if not these two will never open their mouth..

R: yeah that is true.. I could feel that yday only.. when asad left her in SM...

D: let me bring something sweet..

Z: poophi let me bring..

D: not today...once u become my DIL.. u can do all the works.. and she smiled. After sharing their happiness, zoya packed some of her things.. and moved to the hall.. her eyes kept returning to asad door.. and dilshad sensed it..

D: who asad has full meeting today.;..

Z: ok poophi.. I will go now.. she hugged and went with her parents..

As the evening came, asad entered the house only to see the house silent and empty without his beloved. And went straight to her room, opened to see most of her things missing. She turned to see dilshad standing ther and he asked..

A: ammi.. did zoya came here..

D: yea.. she came and packed her things and left..

A: oohh.. he cursed himself.. she came..and he was not here..

D: asad I have fixed ur Nikah...

A: ammi.. NIKkah.. all of a sudden..

D: I like the girl... and her family came here today with rishta for you.. and I couldn't say NO to them..

A: ammi.. please..

D: asad.. just see her once..i am sure she is perfect for u.. she handed him a photo..

A: ammi... he thought.. his perfect is his musibet... nobody else..

A: I don't want to get married now ammi..please..

D: just see the photo once..

A: ok ammi..

Surbhi Jyoti

He turned the photo only to see his musibet smiling at him.. and he could almost feel her winking through the photo.. and he smiled.. and hugged his ammi...

A: thankyou..

D: what.. so u like this girl.. should I accept the rishta...

A: ammi.. he smiled..

D: now go and meet her.. she was looking at the door all time hoping u will come...

Asad moved.. then he stood.

A; ammi.. who..

D: asad.. let us forget the past... now that house is wife parents home.. so u have the right go there... I am sure she will be waiting..

Asad zoomed towards SM, he rang the bell, only to see raziya opening the door.. and welcomed hims inside..

R: come inside beta..

A: wo h.. actually.. he started and razia smiled at her son-in-law.. stammering..

Zoya watched this from the steps.. and came down ans stood next to him.. and she spoke..

Z: ammi.. Mr Khan.. is trying to tell u that... he is in love with ur daughter.. and since the match is fixed , he want to spend some time with me.. so he is here to ask ur permission to take me out..isnt .. Mr Khan..

A; exactly correct zoya.. he smiled..

Z: allah miyaa.. u made this emotionally challenged man for me...what did I do wrong.. she said..

R: zoya.. don't talk like about my son inlaw.. she held zoya ears.. childishly.. and asked her to get ready..

Precap:

Z: asad.. the mark is fading.. she whispered...

Note:

Such a long update... Hope everyone is happy now...

The past precap.. is just for fun.. and some twist.. to keep the story interesting..

I think one chapter to go...

Do read and comments..

So silent readers hit the like and leave a comments.. will be nice to know ur views on this story..

Uma and raj.. hope u like this..😛

Mrina.. am I going to get a comment this time...😉

Edited by kals82 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Obviously di
I am the most happiest person
But sad that only one more part to go.
I guess we will get more asya & also a grand nikkah ceremony
Missing anze
Want to c them during the nikkah
Edited by Az07 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update!!
Loved it!!
AsYa ...
This separation is sweet😛...
Haye GaZiya me proud of u !!
!Good Job!!
Zoya understands him well!!
Oye hoye EC damaad ke support me SaasuMaa!!!
Eid Ka gift eid se pehle milgaya!!!
Loved it!!
Precap: May be i knw what mark she is talking abt☺️☺️
Edited by AsyaManeet - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Eid Mubarak 2 u 2 dear

Awesome updt
I loved ur Eid gift
I love this story it is exactly what i want QH 2 b
anyways i loved this part
it was wonderfully written
Asad didn't said anything in SM in d start
that's correct cuz their relation was not on that stage
Asad forgave Asad just cuz of his peace of mind but doesn't want him back
Guffi & Raziya came & fixed Asya Nikah
continue soon
I m lovin it😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
F A N T I S T I C O !! Awesome update. Love the family hug of siddiquies. So cute family. Zoya felt she get her family but also losing her family. Asad understood the emotional turmoil of zoya and made her understand that KV is also her home. Asad missed zoya and sleeping in guest room hugging her pillow. So cute. The family fixed asya nikha. Asad went to meet zoya but start again his woh actually. Lol zoya said in favour of asad that he want to spend time with zoya. Waiting for more asya moments now. Thanks di for not seperating asya. ❤️ RAJ
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Posted: 11 years ago
thanQ for PM&a long update
and special thanks for EIDI

this was owu,i mean Awsome.
just loved it

PLEASE UPDATE SOON

AND
" EID MUBARAK HO "

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