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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kals82



hai sweety,

thank u for ur awesome comments...



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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 4:

asad picked zoya from the library, and they moved towards their home. Asad found zoya to be very silent and lost,.

A: Miss F, did u find anything...

Z: few things Mr Khan.. but I have to go back to find more and then only I can find some conclusion.

A: good... was it ok for u in the Library..

Z: ofcousre I was fine.. after all it is your second home isn't..

A: Yeah..it was... I spent so much time there.. during my younger days.. with the books as my sole companion.

Z: Mr Khan.. I know u read subject related to ur books.. do u read something other then that...

A: yeah.. I read autobiography of gr8 people like Gandhi, Rooosevelt, Lenin, etc ..

Z: so boring...

A: Miss F they are inspirational and motivational.. Something I needed at that stage of my life. To push me up.. and come above..

Z: hmm...

They reached the home, zoya thoughts still lingered on the photo, but she didn't share anything with asad. The Khan family had a silent dinner, as the atmosphere was still stiff between Dilshad and Asad and parted for the night.

Midnight:

Asad was not able to get any sleep due to the events of the day. The whole case was disturbing him, and now his mind just replayed what apurva has said about both of them. He knows he loves zoya, but does she, whatever she confessed that night was due to bhang, may be she is attracted.. does she love me.. or I am capable loving her.. whole heartily... atlast he got up and walked to the hall, to drink water, only to here a murmur from zoya room. He walked slowly and peeped inside her room to check on her.

He only saw zoya face filled with sweat, and her hands clutching the pillow, and her mouth saying.. ammi.. ammi... ...

Asad couldn't stand there anymore, and see her cry in pain even in dream, he went close to her and sat on his bed,.

He patted her face, and swiped the sweat and called her name again and again. Zoya slowly opened her eyes and looked at asad sitting in her bed infront.. with all the care concern and love in his face. She just pushed herself up and hugged him tightly. Asad was surprised by her actions, but he reciprocated, and he just held her tightly to him, indicating he is there for her. Zoya calmed down after sometime only to drown in asad cologne.. she suddenly realized her postion, and how her front part was fused with asad six packs, and asad breathing into her neck. As she was just in her night wear,it was a skin to skin touch for her..It was hormonal rush for zoya, to be held this tight by her asad. Her hand slowly caressed his back, and asad hand reciprocated the same..and zoya responded by hugging even tighter.

Asad eyes opened and they fell on the milky skin of her, on which he breathed. Before he could stop himself, he slowly bent to kiss the side of her neck lightly. The touch of the warm lips on her sensitive skin, put zoya on fire.. involuntarily, she bent her neck for asad to have better access. Asad saw the movement, and he couldn't stop himself, he placed a full mouth kiss on the exposed part, pushed by some force, he sucked her, only to hear her mourn his name in response.

Z: asad...

His name from his mouth, just added fire to him, he sucked her roughly, bit her.. and repeated it to leave his mark on her. He placed a passionate kiss on her neck, with zoya hands moving to his hair, and tugged him.

Suddenly, nature seemed to be disturbed by their passion, a strong wind blew across the room, which resulted with windows swaying making loud noises. Both of them came into consciousness and jerked apart. Asad looked at zoya, and zoya looked down and fidgeted her fingers.

A: Miss F are u ok...

Zoya looked at him quizzically... what sort of question is that she thought.. but voiced only...: Jee..

A: who. Actually... the nightmare... he said.. as he is no mood to talk to zoya about what happened just now and he no idea how to answer her questions.

Z: wooh.. may be bcoz I was looking into my past.. it triggered by memory..i guess..

A: what is the nightmare about..

Z: I am not sure... all I see fire.. and I shout for my ammi...

Asad doesn't want to question her .. he poured a glass of water and gave it to her, which she accepted gratefully.. as soon as she finished drinking, he got up and walked towards the door and turned around and looked at her...

A: sleep well zoya.. I am here for you...

And moved towards his room.

Zoya lay back on the bed, only sleep was miles away from her.. ammi thoughts... asad thoughts.. all confused her. She got up and went to bathroom, to refresh herself. As she looked at the mirror, she saw her neck.. where asad has marked her.. it was purple in color. Her hands involuntarily caressed the place, and zoya farooqi.. smiled in shy.. to the dismay of the image.

Conversation Between the heart and mind of zoya..

M: what are u smiling for...

H: For this.. r u blind...

M: I am not blind.. what is this..

H: this.. this shows that I belong to him now.. he marked me as his...

M: really... how do u know.. did he said anything.. I didn't hear a word from him..

H:.. oh... he is a man of few words.. and full of action...

M: oh.. oh.. do u think he will ever spell the meaning behind his action...

H: do u doubt him...

M: ofcourse not... but u r forgetting.. he is akdu ahmed kahn... emotionally challenged... doesn't matter how much ever he likes u...

H: stop.. he loves me...

M: oh.. really.. ok for time being .. even if he loves you.. do u think he will ever accept it to you...

H: that is a valid point...

M: see... I am always right...

H: I know.. but don't u forget... I am the zoya farooqie... who can do anything in this world...

M: r u going to make him confess..

H: of course I will... just wait and watch.. first let me solve this case... I don't want any diversion right now.. once I finish this.. it will Asad Confession mission..

M: Deal.. i love to hear u say his name... Asad..

H : I love asad...

M: even I love asad.

Zoya walked out of the bathroom, with heart filled with happiness and mind clear. She sat in the bed and looked back at some happy moments of their lives. Their fights is going to life long affair between them. She looked at the mobile, and print she has taken from them. She took them and started reading them, and made a chart of the year.. to come to conclusion. She caressed the face of the woman with some unknown feeling rising in her heart.

Her birth : 1990

Adopted : May 1995

From whatever she learnt from aapi mom.. her ammi came to india in search of her abbu.. and also to visit her brother family who settled in india..

She came to india by January 1995.. and this missing add was dated to be at the end of april 1995..

Is this lady could be my mom.. if so what happened to her. She couldn't find any answer for now.. and but her hope has increased. She still has so much paper to gather details about the past, and also on the factory for Mr.Khan... No.. for her asad. She was eagerly waiting for the sun to rise.. to look at asad and his reaction.

As the morning dawned, zoya got ready and as she pulled her tops.. she realized the marks are clearly seen. She looked around and found a bwautifull black and red chudi and put that on with the shawl, to cover the mark and came out to meet her love.

Asad hardly slept that night, he just couldn't close his eyes.. and the way zoya called his name kept ringing in his ears... And a smile dawned on his face with realization.. she too loves me... as his heart accepted, his mind asked him, how is going to tell him.. he just shut his mind.. sometime.. and walked out of his room to the dining table.

He was mesmerized to see her in the chudi.. and she looked absolutely stunning and their eyes played the love game between them, as they moved towards the dining table. After receving the appreciation from najma and Dilshad, zoya looked at asad to say something..

He smiled at her... and that made her day..

As she turned asad saw his mark on her neck... And smiled with love..

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Edited by kals82 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
I m first !!...
Yaay 🥳...
Awesome part!!
Asad has realized his love long back!!
But wants conformation dat Zoya too loves him !!
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Hmm dat kiss scene !!☺️☺️...
Thank God Asad didn't act indifferent!!.
Zoya's mind & hearts convo!!🤣...
Sach ye dil aur dimaag ...
Zoya realized her love 🥳...
So dat pic is Zoya's mother's!!!
Loved it!!!
Was here before ur pm 😎 Yo!!
AsYa ...
Edited by AsyaManeet - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update yaar. I loved the kiss part. 😳
Asad should know more about her past now!
Continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yes. The kiss was there..
*blush*
Wow awesome updt
I loved dis one..

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Posted: 11 years ago
Sooo beautiful
Love it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome very nice update
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing yaar !! 👏 loved their little moment after the nightmare ! ❤️
Looking forwrd for next 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Asad & zoya reached home, asad finally cleared his feeling name as love
He heared zoya murmuring & enter her room
Wow a hug & a kiss.
Both finally realised that they love each other
Plz continue soon
Do pm me
Thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update

Kiss scene was sweet and nicely written.

Asad's smile made Zoya's day and your update made mine

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