TS : Lucky or Unlucky Asad ?? - Part 2 - 5/April/2014 - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
Yo he was so lucky man but I'm so disappointed by d end...plz Plz continue it...
And it was fabulous...
Thanks for pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: DevikaRavish


Thanks a lot Raj... Well yes many are demanding for Part 2... I will try to do it.. 😊


Please di write second part. And do pm me. I m waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
hi am new here,i read all stories written by you and dis is amazing want to continue..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
awesome..😃👏
loved it..
i hope u will continue it ..atleast i part more for asya conversation n thier reaction...😳😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
awesome update...
zoya acting all hard from out.. and very soft inside...

asad asking ayaan to give up zoya... a bit grey for me...

and zoya stubbornness is it to gain asad attention ...

by the way i want a part2 of this story.. to see zoya reaction..

pretty please with a cherry on top..


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Posted: 11 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: kals82

awesome update...

zoya acting all hard from out.. and very soft inside...

asad asking ayaan to give up zoya... a bit grey for me...

and zoya stubbornness is it to gain asad attention ...

by the way i want a part2 of this story.. to see zoya reaction..

pretty please with a cherry on top..



Kalyani.. Thanks.. Well to answer your point on Asad.. If his intentions were negative or grey then he would have not stayed away from Zoya when he thought she loves Ayaan.. . Asad had gone to meet Ayaan's mother and also changed his shooting hours to suit Ayaan remember.. That way Asad had got close to Ayaan and when Ayaan came up to him to know the reason for his depression.. he could not control and gave up...

No Zoya's stubonness to stay way was she was scared to fall more in love with him if she got close to him and feared his rejection..

Yes I am trying to write PArt 2 .. 😊


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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 2:

Thanks to all the Wonderful readers for your adorable comments and likes... Many of you requested me to continue this... So here is the second part.. and this will be the end of this story and I don't want to continue it by dragging the story... It may not be as per your expecations as well ... Hope you like it...Please do key in your comments...

Dedicating it to all the Readers who wanted to read more on this... I never review what I write most of the time and I know it is a bad habit of mine.. Kindly excuse for any mistakes...

Zoya had got offer to choreograph in another movie and she was extremely happy .. She wanted to share it with Ayaan and most importantly she wanted to see him once before calling it a day...but she got a little upset when she had got to know that both Ayaan and Asad had already left.. As she reached her house, she saw Ayaan's car.. She was greeted at the door by a very excited Ayaan and Humeira...

Zoya : Hey guys.. guess what ?? I got to sign another contract today ... I am so very happy and she hugged both Ayaan and Humeira...

Humeira : Aapi...Looks like today is your lucky day !! What say Ayaan ??

Ayaan had a smile on his face and nodded...

Zoya : Ayaan.. How come you left early today ?? If you were coming home to meet Humeira, you should have atleast informed me... and Mr. Khan had also left early today...

Ayaan : oh.. That's bad Zoya...Why don't you tell him how much you love him ??

Zoya : Not again Ayaan... You know my answer.. Humeira... inform Wajid chacha to cook something nice...I am so very hungry...

She walked to her room and threw her dupatta to a corner which fell on Asad who was sitting on the chair near her study table.. She did not notice him.. She just walked up to one of his posters...

Zoya : Mr. Khan.. I am so happy today... I get to work with you in your next movie as well... But why did you leave so early today ? I am now used to seeing you before returning home since last 4 months... I LOVE YOU MR. KHAN and she gave a flying kiss at his poster...

Asad : I LOVE YOU TOO ZOYA !! He was now standing right behind her ...

Zoya : Allah ... I am going crazy... I thought you spoke to me only in my dreams... But now I get to hear you when I am awake also... Help me Allah Miya.. !!

Asad had a smile on his face as he got to know about her dreams...

She turned around and froze...He was right there in front of her with hands folded across his chest, a smile on his face and her dupatta in his hands...Her eyes and mouth went wide open and she stood speechless for few seconds...She slowly came out of her trance and touched his face to see if he was standing in her room for real...?? She immediately took her hands back...

Zoya : Mr. Khan... You ?? !!

Asad : You have a lot of explanation to give me Zoya... !!

Zoya : Mr. Khan.. Who gave you permission to enter my room ??

Asad : Whoever gave you permission to enter my heart.. !!

He slowly took her dupatta and put it on her head ...while Zoya was still shocked to understand what was going on...He put his right palm forward ...

Asad : Will you marry me Zoya ??

Zoya : Mr. Khan ? How I mean why ??

Asad : There can be nobody else who can understand me more than how you have understood me... The other day whatever happened with Tanveer, am sure if it was anybody else the reaction would be different... You are the reason for all the changes in me and I am happy for that... I now know that you also love me ...

Ayaan and Humeira who stood at the room's door now clapped for Asad and Zoya...

Humeira : Aapi your dream is right infront of you.. Why are you taking so long to tell YES ??

Ayaan : Pagal.. Speak something... Why are you so speechless ??

Asad : My hand is hurting Zoya... Please say yes ...

Zoya : I need to speak to you Mr. Khan in private...

Ayaan : Zoya... ?? !!

Zoya : Mr. Khan.. My Best Friend and sister are too concerned about my happiness... but I feel it is better for me to tell everything about my past before you put forward your proposal...Ayaan.. Humeira.. Please excuse us...

After ensuring Ayaan and Humeira left, Zoya guided Asad to the chair near her study table while she pulled the stool which was near her dressing table infront of him and sat down...

Zoya : Mr. Khan .. Would you like to have something... Water , Coffee ??

Asad : No.. Thanks.. Please continue...

Zoya : Mr. Khan... My father Gafoor Farooqui was a businessman... Few years back.. when I was in my 12th class, there was lot of business loss and friction with his partner... Unfortunately, his business partner died in a car accident but rumors were spread that my father was involved in murdering his business partner...He was a very soft spoken person for whom Prestige was the ultimate priority.. He and my ammi both committed suicide .. but the black mark on his name has not yet been cleared...

She had tears in her eyes as she narrated her past... She quickly wiped it and looked at him before continuing...

Zoya : During those days, it was Ayaan and his family who took care of me and Humeira... Ayaan and myself have been friends since our school days... We were staying at his house for 3 years.. and very recently me and Humeira shifted to our parents house...

Asad : Zoya... Why do you think all this would make me change my decision ??

Zoya : Mr. Khan.. ??

Asad : My family members call me ASAD !! I know ammi and abbu will be happy to meet you... I am sure you know that both my parents are doctors and they understand feelings of people more than anybody else... They wanted a daughter also but allah blessed them only with me.. Now with you , Humeira and Ayaan .. our family will be complete...

Zoya very lovingly with tears in her eyes looked at him ...

Asad : Zoya... I am waiting .. Please don't give these looks and make my heart go crazy thinking what next ??

Zoya threw her arms around him and hugged him tightly taking him by surprise...Both were happy and they were not aware of how long they were in each other's arms...

Asad : Zoya... Why do you love me so much ??

Zoya : Mr. Khan... I am one of your crazy fans from your first movie. .. but after ammi and abbu's demise.. you were the only reason for bringing smile on my face...I somehow felt very happy reading articles about you and watching your movies...The more I got to know about your social service and the care for your parents... the more I fell in love with you... but you never entertained your fans to speak to you other than giving your autograph...and also you were told to be very arrogant on set.. which made me a little scared of you...

She went up to the same drawer from which Ayaan had given a file to Asad and took out a small diary...It had Asad's autograph in it...

Asad : Did we meet earlier ??

Zoya nodded her head...

Zoya : I had come up to your set 2 yrs back along with my friends... and you quickly gave us your autograph before getting into your car...You did not even notice me then... And now ??

A smile spread across his face...

Asad : Zoya... Being a successful movie actor, it is easy for media to link up and creating unnecessary gossip.. but coming from a middle class family, I understand the values ... That was the reason I hardly have friends in the industry... I wanted someone to love me as I am and not for my status... and the day I saw you first time, I got attracted but you ignored me which irritated me... but the more I got to see you, I could not stop myself from falling in love with you..

Zoya : I guess I will have a huge bunch of women out there getting jealous of me .. once the news is out..

Asad smiled at her and hugged her before replying back...

Asad : Zoya... Career in this world is short lived... Let us enjoy doing what we want to as of now... I have plans of opening a restaurant later...and I will be happy if you join me.. in making my dreams comes true...

Zoya : You have made my dream come true Asad.. So have no second thoughts.. I will always be with you to make all your dreams come true...

Asad : I AM LUCKY !!


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Edited by DevikaRavish - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
i got the first place...
now to the story...

perfect explanation... for both of them..

i just loved the interaction between asad and zoya... the entry.. zoya thinking he is a dream..

and asad explanation ... his background,..

zoya making things clear about her past...


and asad explanation... which fits even for his arrogant attitude...

yeah he got lucky... and zoya got very lucky...😉...

it is dream come true for her...to have the man of so many people dream. became reality for her..

awesome update..

write more... will be waiting

Edited by kals82 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
Thank you Devika for fulfilling my request. I know I was one of them who has requested for another part. 😊 It was really awesome. I really wanted to see Soya's reaction once she finds out that Asad loves her. 😳 But it was sad to read about her past 😭 Asad in this story was really nice. Her past didn't natter to him. Finally she accepted his proposal 😳 Happily ever after 😊 Thanks again Devika 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was an awesome ending devika
Painful past for zoya & asad was not totally headstrong person
Love the way zoya spoke with asad's picture & his proposal
Do write more in future

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