OMG.. I am so very late.. I was the 116th reader to press the like button.. đ Well better late than never...đ
Now what do I get to read as a note.. You will stop writing.. Why so ??? This is NOT ACCEPTABLE đ.. You cannot be so mean to disappoint so many readers who follow your stories... Please don't do this.. Well if the forum is not very active.. I request you to create your own blog.. PLEASE !! but do not stop writing.. It creates a magical feeling reading your works.. you touch the heart of readers in many ways.. SO PLEASE !! I seriously missed reading your note .. I have become very busy these days and I do not get to read from phone in office except while travelling.. Honestly I doze off sometime on the way back... đ
Coming to the update...
The starting lines brought out the feelings of Asad.. How she drives him mad and he definitely don't like her since she is the only one having the power to make him go WEAK.. đ
Th way Asad consoled her and got her out of her depression when she was lost thinking about her ammi was very adorable..
The way they fought for the PRoject.. was so very cute.. Asad and his thoughts..
The way he fed her pizza and she ate it completely without realizing it was very very cute and we got to see caring Asad over there.. Later dumbo Zoya tried to hide her laptop... She does not even realize how many times she had left it unlocked.. definitely unprofessional over there đ
He down with flu and the craving for a loved one to be with him was very sweet...and he thinks of her and there she is ... Finally the confession about not kissing Tanveer which troubled him a lot was out.. and she in his dreams daily... Well Well Mr. Don't like did find a way to convey his feelings.. đ
and the entire scarf scene was cute.. đ
You definitely know how to play with your words.. Intelligent girl đ
Later the way he expressed his anger and they patched up with a wild kiss was cool... I don't like you but I think we should kiss once more to be sure was a an epic line.. đ
Well poor Asad.. Zafar had to make his entry and spoil his mood.. The way he tagged Zafar and Zoya in the restaurant and later in the gym shows how very possessive he is about her...The gym scene was again cool ..
Those words about HELL and HEAVEN really hit her hard... She no doubt loves him but wants a commitment from him which he is adamant of ...
The way she got angry and told him she is not hers but he kept on telling that she belong only to him was lovely...đ
The conversation with his ammi was cute.. His pain and suffering .. beautifully brought out.. He is in pain and lots of it..
I wonder how you will weave the story next and patch them up.. I am eager to read more.. and I REQUEST again PLEASE don't stop writing... PLEASE !!
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